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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#681

@Vinisha,

Happy to see you guys continueing the story i was like waiting so long for someone to continue the story as i wasn't sure if it was the wedding night or not ...and now i know that it isn't (thanx for telling me)

@Shona,

Nice yaar love your part of the story very romantice vs momment just like in your fanfic

@Genarator,

Nice to see your post her too yaar.... do post her often

Sanjam- rajkumari ji aap ka shaadi ek hafte khi baath hai... kya tum khush ho?

Vrina- nahi! .... bilkul nahi!....ek puri hafte... kya uncle (maharaj Aryavardhan) ji yeh kuch din kum nahi kar sakta? 😕

Nivitri came in the room that momment and heard what vrinda had said

Nivitri- nahi Vrinda beti... hum jaante hai khi tum 4 ek hafte nahi wait kar sakte but there is no other choice... and trusth me this wait will be worthy

All four started smilling

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#682

@ aandhanika,shona,annie - see i'll make it fiilmy nao...

VEER Wz Caught by Nivriti......😉...While he was DanciNg...😆....along wid shera...😆😆😆
Nivritii [ Hlding Ears of Dharam n Veer ] - '' kya Kar rahe ho tum dono yaha...? Huh...? 😉 Mai jaanti thi tum koi shararat zarur karoge...!''
Shera hiding behind Nivriti [ to VEER ] - '' Pakde gaye na...'' * teasing him..😛''....n trying to run away
VEER [ running behind shera ] - '' Tumhe toh Mai'' 😃

Siya [ coming forward twards Dharam and raising the veil of the lady ]- '' Iska matlab Tum...DHARAM !!!''
Dharam smiles...😳
Siya laughs loudly on seeing Dharam Lyk dis...!
Dharam - '' ek toh tumhare liye yeh sab kiya...upar se has rai ho...😲...''
Siya - ''accha baba maaf karo..[ holding her ears 😳 ]...bas..?''
Dharam - '' waise ek baat kahe tum aaj bahot acchi lag rai Ho....[ Kissing on her forehead ] n Runs away...😆😆😆
Siya blushes...😳

Sapna n VRinda catches Sanjam n Agni Olso...😆.....n Dey *surrendered In fron of the ladies sitting der*...! 😆😆😆

On Da Other hand...VEER still following VRinda....n VRinda finally reaches VEER's room...!
Slipped off wida Banana peel ....Shera falls on the bed...n so as VEER near her...☺️
Shera feels uncomfortable...n tries to wake up....bt her hair was stuck in VEER's Outfi's button...😳
VEER - '' Ruko mai nikaalta hu...[ he gently solves dat prob 😳 ] n Raises Shera Up...😃...So Dat she duznt feel Uncomfortable n Awkward any More...😊
Shera feels relli gud...😛...dat how caring he is dat Cant Even See his Shera even Uncomfortable...
While Shera Wz Going Out...😛
VEER - '' Shera Mai sirf tumhe hamesha khush dekhna Chahta Hu aur Uske Liye mai Kuch b Karunga...''
Shera feels on top of world on getting such a gr8 guy n feels rellli lucky n leaves the room smiling...!😃

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Shona

@shona.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#683

Shera smiles after she leaves but she walks back in and atands at the door

Shera: veer

Veer: hmm

She blows him a kiss

He catches it n blows one back

she blushes n leaves

Veer feels so gr8

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#684

@ shona...Nao itz ur turn to blow d same magic ova heRe Olso...!😉
describe d engagement...saari zimmedaari ab on ur shoulders...😆 Coz its olready pg.90 n v hav to complete der marriage widin pg 100...!😛

Nao Itz Tym For da Engagament Day...😳

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#685

@Vrinda

Yaar we have to do something about shera's name

cause every one in the mehal except dv and sia know her as Ananya but her reall name is shera na... so please think of something of making clear this misunderstanding befor the marraige (what do u think?)

The preparations were on full speed... not one thing was out of place
The girls (sia, shera, vrinda and sapna) were also very bussy with their own part of work All the invitations were sent.. The invites were sent all over India... to all kingdoms... friends & familly

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#686

@ aandhanika..I'm Vinisha Nt VRinda...😆
Nai Re...I think Yew've Forgotten it Wz VEER only whu named Shera as Ananya In frnt Of EvryOne...[ Including Siya n Dharam] wen Nivriti asked Bout It...😃...Itz Jus Dat Dey Ol r Havin Habit Of Calling her Shera wen Alone..😊...So No need of Changing it...😊

Ol Were Happy Coz of a simple reason dat engagement was on the following Day...😳
VEER [ Outside his room ] - '' Suno...Kaun ho Tum...?''😕
Da gal turned and it Was...

Ananya aka Shera..😃 [ Whu else..?😆 ]
She Wasnt Fully Dressed Up Bt Was looking pretty enuf to fascinate VEER n dats y VEER wz unable to get whu is she...😉...so Confused VEER asked -''Shera tum ab tak acche se tayyar kyu Nai Hui..? Kya hua aur yaha kya kar rai hO..?''🤔

Shera - '' Woh hum tumhe aakhri baar as a bachelor dekhna Chahte The...🤣....kyuki abhi kuch der mein Hamari engagement hone waali hai na...'' 😳
VEER laughs on such a Stupid bt still a innocent n cute reason 4 Him...😳...n Says - ''shera tum bahot bholi Ho...😆....accha ab jao aur jaldi se tayyar ho kar Neeche aa jao...sab tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai...'' 😛
Shera - '' aur tum...? ''😉
VEER - '' Mai toh besabri se...😳..'' Shera blushes n both of dem lev !!!

Sapna....Agni's future wifey...Was Olready dressed up n was looking a Royal Beautiful Queen...
[pic chorified from shona's FF 😆 ]
She wore a Beautiful Orange Colored Lehnga n Accessories n Ol suited her so well Dat Agni stood freezed on seeing her...😆....She neva looked so Beautiful as Nao...
Agni - '' Woh sapna...Ummmm...woh...''
Sapna - '' Kya hua agni...? Kya Mai acchi nai lag rai...😕...bolo na Agni...koi kami hai Kya..?''
Agni - '' Nai aisa nai hai Sapna...aaj toh tum bahot zyada acchi lag rai ho...Pari Jaisi...😳''
Sapna blushes n both of dem moves towards d Hallroom [ where Engagement was to b held ] wid hands in hands...😉

VRinda dressed Up in a simple Way But She was pretty as well and Dat Was the reason why Sanjam Liked her so Much...

VRinda Got ready and was going Outside d Room jus den Sanjam Grabbed her Hand frm the back...😳VRinda - '' Sanjam Tum...😛...Yaha...''
Sanjam - ''VRinda mai tumhare liye Yaha Aaya Hu...toh Chalo..''
VRinda - ''par kaha...?''😛
Sanjam - ''Arre humari engagement hai...aaj akele hi jaogi kya..?😕 Saath Chalenge...😃..''

Dharam Came Inside Siya's room quietly and Closes her eyes Frm da back...😳
Siya got frightened...😕....n Turns Back...

Siya - '' JaO hum tumse kabhi baat nai karenge... ...Hume daraya Kyu...?
Dharam - '' Jisse hum dekh saki ki hamari Rajkumari ko kis kis cheez se darr lagta hai...😆..accha yeh sab chodo aur yaha baitho..''
Dharam makes her seated on bed...😛...n takes out a pair of anklets frm his pocket...😃...n makes her wear them....😛...''
Siya raises him up n Hugs him tightly....😳...n Levs 4 Da Hallroom...😃

By Now Even Shera gets ready...

Nivriti sees her n gives her blessings...
n den Ananya Goes Out firstly to da temple Where VEER has called her fior praying firstly n den starting der new lyf...😳

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 16 years ago

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Shona

@shona.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#687

@ vini-ab ye vishva kaun hai-havent read all the parts so dont know

Shera and Veer both pray and ask shiv ji to bless them with a happy married life

when they are turning to leave shera sees a tree where people make a wish and tie a dhaga

Shera: chalo veer hum bhi dhaga band te hai

Veer: ab tum itne pyar se keh rahi ho toh mana toh nahin kar sakta...chalo

Both take a dhaga and tie a knot and begin to walk round the tree with each round promising something new

Veer led and shera followed

Veer: ye dhaga humae pyar ke liye

Shera: ye dhaga humare saath ke liye

Veer: ye dhaga humari khushiyon ke liye

Shera: ye dhaga humare apno ki khushiyon ki liye

Veer: ye dhaga un waadon ki liye jo mein tumhe agni ko sakshi maan ke lunga

Shera: ye dhaga un kasmon ke liye jo mein tumhe dungi jab hum phere lenge

Veer: ye dhaga hummare ane wali zindagi ke liye

Shera: ye dhaga mere suhaag ki suraksha ke liye

They had completed 4 laps

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#688

@ Shona...Wow...OwesUm...Brilliant...Lyks d Promises n vows dey Made...👏😃👏
ff ka Magic aaj Yaha poori tarah aa gaya shona...😳
n i wrote vishwa by mistake...reminding ur FF...😆...hav edited it...😛

Both Of 'em returns back On a horse n since der was Only One horse so Shera n VEER both sits back On d same horse...😳

Shera - '' aaj yeh horse ko inna dheere kyu Daudha rahe Ho...? Jaldi chalo hume mahal pahuchne mein deri ho jayegi..'' 😕
VEER - '' Jaise tum Mujhe Bachelor dekhne aayi thi aakhri baar...😆....waisei Mai b tumhare saath waqt bitaane k liye..''😉
Shera - ''VEER agar hum jaldi nai Pahuchne na toh nivriti maa sainik bhej dengi hume dhundne k liye....aur kisine Hamari engagement k waqt hume ek saath ek hi horse pe Mahal k Bahar dekha toh kya kahenge...''
VEER - '' Kitna bolti ho tum...😆...Koi kuch nai kahega...Chalo tum...[ Stepping dwn frm d horse n pulling her down ]😳
Shera - '' VEER woh dekho Nivriti Maa...''
VEER - '' Kaha...😲😲😲....Maa Maine woh kuch Nai....[ n sees Dat no1 is Der, It was a prank ] 😆😆😆
Shera - ''Tumhe toh kisi se darr nai lagta na....[ teasing him ]...Chalo ab...''😆
Dey reach d Mahal To Da Hallroom...
Dharam - ''lo aa gaye love birds..'' 😆
Siya laughs on hearing dat...😆

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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Shona

@shona.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#689

lol yh i know FF mein aisa he ek scene maine likha tha...lol i was wondering if i was reading vishvaas coz u wrote Vishva😆khabhi khabhi i do as well but then quickly edit it!

Sia: kahan re gaye teh tum dono...nivriti bua kabse tumhe dhund rahi hai

Veer: woh hum...woh actually...

Dharam: koi baat nahin ab jaldi chalo sagaai ki rasam shuru karni hai

Veer, Shera, Sia n Dharam all proceed

Vini take it from here

Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#690

@ Shona...Okie Dokie..😆

Ol were there In The Hallroom...Pandit Ji told all of the gals to start the ring ceremony...

VEER - ab tum hamesha k liye meri ho gayi...
Shera - mai toh hamesha se tumhari hi thi...😳

Then Boys turn...

all ladies were siniging sngs....n a atmosphere f love,happiness and celebrations was spread ol over the Aryanagar !

Then the 4 couples touched the feet of der elders and took blessings frm dem...

While VEER n shera was touching Nivriti's feet...
VEER - '' shera theek se lo aashirwaad''
Nivriti - '' mere bachO...hamesha khush rahO aur hamesha aise hi pyar bhare jhagde karte rahO..''😳😆
VEER n shera Blushes...😳

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 16 years ago

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