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Posted: 12 years ago
Mahadev Parvati scene.. 😳 😳

Oh ho..!! Mahadev wants to play again..this is not good..!!

Very nice..Arunita
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Posted: 12 years ago
one of the best OS i ve read. ur rocking dear. wonderful👏 keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
you perfectly wrote parvati's emotions and her expressions. hara to hari ke agya ka paalan kar rahe hain,hope ke parvati ko cheating ka pata na chaL JAAYe bas...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is becoming very interesting. Please continue.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update, Arunita 👏
Sorry could not comment on your earlier one because I was engrossed in other works.
But this is also a good read 😊.
On a personal note, why is your twitter account locked? Hacked or anything else.
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Posted: 12 years ago
If there is a hit this day is this update of yours. Sooper aru. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shiva nd Shakti when they get together is magic. Looking forward to how he wins back all that he lost from Shakti. Superb update. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update waiting for next. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read in one go..brilliant work
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FairyDreams

"I will play with my own dice " stated Mahadev..

question did arise in Parvati's mind regarding the dice but she didn't ask anything regarding his decision thinking that may upset Mahadev once again.
As you wish Swami " she proceeded with the game

"I want my tiger skin back at first" . Maheswar pointed to his tiger skin still spread on Parvati's lap...
Parvati nodded in approval and put her dice, Maheswar put his and it was seen Mahadev got one point more than Devi Parvati..the tiger skin again wrapped Lord's waist after ages..Shiva's face looked glad , Parvati also filled with relief to see him pleased.
In Vaikunth Devi Lakshmi noticed Narayan smirking in meditation, she got surprised as this was neither her lord's meditating time nor he smirks such mysterious and mischievous way during meditation but goddess considered its not right to interrupt lord , so she remained silent.

"i want my Rudraksha back now"
Shiva put dice. this time too Lord gathered one point more than Shakti , the Rudraksha ornaments decorated his chest , arm and wrist and tied his matted hair in the form of jataa again, Mahadev's familiar Jatadhar avatar soothed Uma's eyes too. Shiva smirked victoriously. Vishnu shook his head in between meditating making Goddess Lakshmi more confused.
thus Mahadev kept wining the game with one point every time, and Narayan kept griming out of satisfaction every time Mahadev won. Lakshmi at last couldn't control her curiosity and called Narada once again.

"Narayana Narayana , order me how can i serve you Mata Lakshmi??"Appeared sage narada

"Devarshi go and see what is happening in Kailash until my lord wakes up"..ordered goddess

Narada grined watching his lord's meditating image , he can sense there is a deep connection between Narayan's Samadhi and the events in Kailash.
"bless me my lord that i can follow your order" uttered Narada in thoughts..
"As You Wish Mata" he took blessing from Lakshmi and disappeared

when Narada appeared on kailash Mahadev and Parvati were deeply absorbed in the game, though they sensed his presence but didn't pay attention to him. Narada also considered better not to disturb them for being subject of Shiva-shakti's wrath and chose to remain silent gleeful watcher of the divine game.

Mahadev gradually won back every object that he lost including snake king and moon God..holding tightly his long lost Trishul..he leaned over the rock in relaxing mode..
Chandradev and Nagraj Basuki were very happy getting their lost position back.. they got over-boarded in praising their lord

"My Lord i knew you will not keep me away of your divine shoulder for long, i was waiting for the time you will win me back"..exclaimed basuki

"Devadidev you are indefeasible..what does the game of dice matter to you then?..please place me on your head again"..asked Chandradev

Parvati somehow sensed a certain tone of pinching towards her had bee suppressed in those praising remarks to Mahadev.as if those statements were made to put her down. she observed Lord's pleased face.she had no grievance ove her defeat but was her lord enjoying those defaming statements made towards her??
she bit her lips to control herself.

"My lord i suppose time had been arrived for me to get my place inside your hair again"..appeared ma Ganga
Mahadev nodded calmly
Ganga looked at Parvati's abnormally grave face and condemned herself. Out of excitement she didn't wait for her sister's call. she didn't dare to look at her eyes

"Put your dice Parvati , Devi Ganga is waiting" Mahadev's this tone of ordering annoyed Parvati to the core but she obeyed silently and finally Mahadev's attire got completed with one point again.Devi Ganga undoubtedly was happy but sensing her sister's displeasure she didn't dare to sing praise for Shiva and calmly got into his jataa. Chandradev and Basuki also resided on mahadev's head and neck respectively. Mahadev went back in his eternal form
Vishnu opened his eyes getting his mission accomplished..Lakshmi narrowed her eyes guessing some mischief had been done by her Lord.

"Parvati do you want to continue the game any more?"..Shiva's question bugged her but she didn't react..

"No" she nodded but didn't utter a word

"that's better otherwise you might had to loose your possession, because its not your day today"..Shiva proceeded with teasing but Parvati didn't response though being irritated.

"why my lord is taunting me? i myself wanted to lose to him doesn't he know that?"..she really felt hurt but kept quiet

Narada sensed Narayana had been woke up , he was about to leave but suddenly an idea flashed into his thought. This situation is perfect to instigate fight as Mata Parvati is upset so why not utilizing the opportunity? specially when Lord vishnu had been commissioned him for this job?
"Narayana Narayana" My lord take my good wishes for coming back in your old form"
Narada proceeded with his idea

Mahadev smirked again

"oh only Devarshi was left to sprinkle salt over my wound"thinks annoyed Devi Parvati

"but Mahadev i have a query will you please enlighten me my lord??" Narada continued

"Sure Devarshi , ask whatever you want to know" granted Devadidev

"my lord I noticed each and every time you won on only one point than mata , how was this possible my Lord?
Narada made his final blow


I need some time...as i will be not available...I will give long comment for both part later...for instant...🤣🤣🤣🤣and for Nagraj Bad
🤣🤣 for Chandrama very bad🤣🤣🤣 and for Ganga veru very very bad
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣I hope this time Maate doesnt want to curse you🤣...and for Narayan...Om Namaha Narayanay..."Karmanyeva adhikaraste Ma faleshu kadachana"🤣🤣🤣🤣(You have the right over your Karma not on its effect.) or "Sakali tomari Ichcha/Ichchamayi Tara tumi Ma/Tomar Karma tumi karo Mago/Loke bole kari ami"(Everything is happened by your will Ma Tara. You are the will power or acting power...you have done everything but people say that I do that.)
🤣🤣🤣🤣
@Red this are Narayan's consolation word to justify his act...after all everything is happening on the earth on Maate's will
🤣
For Narada...Kartar Ichchai Karma(what is Narayan's will that is narada's will)
And my Maate...don't be sad...I have a long REEES for your grief, annoyance and sorrow.😭
😆
Edited by DeewaniRimi - 12 years ago

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