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Posted: 9 years ago
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How did I missed this...
I am totally into this fic...
Pm me...
N I ll entertain u wd my comments later
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I can't believe i missed this!!

Sadiee i loved it❤️
Amazing prologue and chappy 👏

PlZ Do update sooonnn...

Add me to d PM list too 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh heavens above me, I am such a terrible excuse for a person. *hides face in complete shame*


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Reserved.

- Imma have to divide the update into two because I wrote too many words..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved sis? R u going 2 update?😃 and u don't need 2 hide anywhr. U were bzy tht's why u couldn't update,we understand. And welcm bck🤗
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Originally posted by: ekra101

Reserved sis? R u going 2 update?😃 and u don't need 2 hide anywhr. U were bzy tht's why u couldn't update,we understand. And welcm bck🤗


You are so sweet. *weeps* Thank you deary! 🤗
Yes, I do plan to update..*crosses finger* hopefully!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plz can u PM me if u update dear?
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

plz can u PM me if u update dear?


Of course! ^_^
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A/N - Hello, It's me. I was wondering..eh never mind. Hello everyone, hope you've been well. It has been quite a while, since I last posted an update. It was extremely lousy of me to leave it hanging so I apologize for that. I've just had a lot happening in my personal and professional life. I was in a pit that I dug for myself to drown in because I refused to face the harsh reality that lay in front of me. The mind is a deadly place to wander into because you let your depressing thoughts consume you and they ultimately make you do things you never wanted to do. I try my very best not to rummage through my mind when I'm alone. It took me a while to get out from there and face the reality that stared me right in the eye but I finally did it. I'm not stating this because I crave sympathy and want you guys to understand why I did not update. No, please don't feel sorry for me because I am an idiot for starting something and leaving it hanging there. That's all on me. I'm sorry, once again. I'm a blubbering mess all the time but I do eventually overcome it. Here's to hoping 2016 brings us a bunch of sunshine!
If anyone would like to talk to me about anything that's happening to them, please do feel free to contact me. I'm here for you. I know how hard life can be, I really do. Please don't feel like it's all over, stay strong and fight for your life because you only live once. Make it worth living for. ❤️
That was a long paragraph and half whew. 😆 Now, on with the story. Thank you so so so much for the lovely comments and likes you all left for me here! They are awesome! 😳 So I made this installment as long as I possibly could, another one is on its way because I owe that. Hope you enjoy it and do leave a review to let me know what your thoughts are on it. :)




Part Two


"I'd like to book one room for a couple of days, please."
Luck was on my side for once. I managed to find a pretty good hotel to stay in after all. Uday Nivas Palace, I believe was the name. It was nice, surprisingly. I had received nothing but disappointment since the day I arrived here up until now so it was rather a pleasant change.

The man on the opposite side of the desk stared at me, taking in the disheveled little girl that was I. His gaze lingered at certain places longer than necessary, how typical. Rolling my eyes nonchalantly, I tapped on the wooden desk. Hard.

"Eyes up here, sunshine."
His stare faltered slightly as he quickly diverted his lingering gaze and fumbled around with what I presumed to be a key. Lord spare me if it was anything else.
"Room 101 is yours for as long as you'd like, ma'am."
He nervously handed me a key, cautious of my evident temper beginning to slowly surface. I yanked the darned thing from him and slapped a few notes of cash on the desk in advance. Turning around swiftly I made my way towards the sign that read 'stairway'.
I opened the door to my temporary room, closing it shut as I got in. I looked around for the light switch and turned it on, illuminating the entire room that lay in front of me. I looked around for any hidden cameras or anything creepy that could endanger my safety but it was clean. A large bed was occupied near the window attached to a balcony, it was so inviting. The place was pretty neat, very clean and sophisticated. The complete opposite of me, I realized. I seriously needed a good shower so I dumped my bag carelessly on the floor before rummaging through it to find the toiletries bag and headed towards what I assumed to be a bathroom. It was. Again, I looked around for any hidden cameras but didn't find any, thankfully.


Stripping out of my nasty clothing, I stepped into the shower and welcomed the cold water pouring down from the faucet before it turned hot. Tensed up muscles began to relax as I closed my eyes and relaxed completely.
Dark, cynical eyes flashed in front of me.
Ugh. That class a-hole.
I grumbled, cussing myself for thinking about that imbecile. I'd encountered enough men worth none of my time, clearly he was among one of them. I hope we never cross each other's path ever again, let's keep world war 3 at bay.


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Yawning contentedly as arms stretched outwards, I rolled over and planted my face against the fluffy cushion. This was nice, really nice. Hell, it was freaking awesome!
It felt like such an age since I last lay my head against something remotely close to the soft goodness that was a bed and a bunch of pillows. I wanted to stay tucked in here for as long as I could.
And that's exactly what I did.
"Sweet glorious sleep.." I murmured, allowing the darkness to take me once again.
I slept my way through the entire morning and mid afternoon with such ease, that I wanted to stay asleep for longer. But alas, I couldn't keep my hungry belly down any longer. I hadn't eaten in quite a while, I hated to admit that it was actually starting to have an impact on me. I groaned, forcing myself to sit up the warm bed. Beams of sunlight hit my iris like a load of bricks as I came to the realization that I had not closed the darn curtains the previous night. I mean, I couldn't really be bothered. I just wanted to sleep. So badly. I stretched my arms whilst yawning, relishing the feel of tensed muscles relaxing. Oh darn, I was so hungry. Grudgingly I stepped away from the warm and inviting bed in order to feed the devil that was my stomach.
"Right. Time to face the world."


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The blaring music almost shattered my eardrums as I soon realized walking into the bar was a terrible, terrible idea. It was absolutely packed. I had to push my way through the drunken crowd in order to get drunk myself. Although legally, I wasn't allowed anywhere near alcohol considering I was just 20. But what the hell, who cared anyway. Besides, I was turning 21 sometime this year. That should count, right?
Couldn't say the same thing for the bartender who refused to even give me a glass of water, let alone any form of alcohol.
"Come on dude, I'm over 20 and perfectly capable of handling my alcohol!" I argued back, hoping he would believe me. He looked at me, placing his hands on either side of the table and leaning in towards me.
"Listen, don't give me those puppy eyes. I am not going to land in jail for giving drinks to a child!" He retorted.


What. The. Actual. Hell.


Slamming my palm against the counter, I leaned forward to appear more menacing than I already was. Sadly it wasn't working as he rolled his eyes and turned around so I was facing his back while he served the customers on the opposite side of the bar.
"Now look here Mr.You-are-starting-to-piss-me-off" I hissed, knowing perfectly well he could hear me.
"I'm gonna say this once and when I'm done, I better have my drinks ready."
Before I could continue, he turned around with the biggest smile I'd ever seen on a man's face. He stepped towards me slightly with his overly fake smile plastered on his face and placed his hands against the counter.
"What can I get you, sweet young lady?"
The sheer falseness dripping from each and every word of his was sickening. I wasn't sure if I wanted to order anything anymore. I leaned back slightly, examining the pompous abomination that was the freak in front of me. He looked as though he was about to burst, literally.
"Why the sudden change in mood, banner?" I questioned, tilting my head to the side.
"My boss is right behind me and I ain't getting fired because of you!" He hissed, quite literally.


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All this [ center- ing] and having to use two posts..*sighs* Feels good to be back on India-Forums.
Edited by ..CountingStars - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweet baby Jesus. Talk about overreacting. I leaned my head back slightly, not wanting to see his spit let alone have it spray all over me.
"Bon, princesse de refroidissement. Je pars, assbutt." I muttered. He gave me a look, clearly not understanding what I had said. I smirked slightly. This was the best part about knowing different languages, you could get away with so many things. Such as cursing idiots on their faces without them detecting anything. I swung backwards, almost toppling over the chair but regained my balance quickly. Once I was sure it wouldn't fall over, I hopped off the chair and turned around to leave. What a crappy decision it was to even come here.
"So much for wanting to get hammered for once. Dude doesn't even give you a drink one minute and then acts like a complete psychopath the very next."
I was livid. Oh I was so furious but I also knew there was no point in making a fuss about it. I was a minor after all. Tangled in my own inner rage, I failed to notice the hulking figure whom I then collided against rather ungracefully.
"Excuse you." I grumbled, not sparing a mere glance at the said being as I shoved past.
"You know, people do get jailed for giving drinks to minors."
Almost instinctively, my movements halted to a complete stop. I knew that voice from somewhere. Darn it, I knew that voice all too well. Slowly and very cautiously, I turned myself around; dreading the entire time.
Oh how I wished someone would gauge my eyes out the minute they landed on his arrogant face. His dark eyes connected with mine, causing a shiver to run down the length of my spine involuntarily. It was him, of all people! I tore my eyes away from his and noticed his attire. He wore a rather fancy looking suit with buttons dotting from the side of his neck to his mid-torso. His left hand held a half empty glass lazily whilst the other was by his side and down his trouser pocket. Lord, who knows what he's doing down there.
My own thoughts shook me back to reality as I realized how silly I looked standing in the middle of nowhere whilst staring at this imbecile. Clearing my throat that had suddenly become very dry, I rolled back my eyes at him and turned back around once again to leave. In a heartbeat, his hand shot out towards me and instantly latched onto my wrist, holding me still. I wriggled my wrist but he remained firm.
"I believe we have already met."
I scoffed, not wanting to give him the satisfaction of receiving a proper reply from me. Oh no, that was not going to happen. He was going to let me go eventually, how long could he hold me here without me kicking him where the sun doesn't shine..
But did I actually manage to leave? And if so, was it done in a very peaceful manner? Well, that was exactly what I wanted to question the future me as I suddenly found myself in the arms of the devil that was this despicable man. He held my right arm in a firm grip and had it placed behind my back whilst his other arm wrapped around my torso as I tried pushing his filthy hands off of me. He wouldn't budge. Heck, he still had his glass! I craned my neck to the side in order to face him and my insides boiled the moment my eyes landed on his smirking face. Oh that was it!
"Get off me you buffoon!" I hissed, attempting to kick him back on his shins but he dodged every kick successfully. I grunted in annoyance. My eyes roamed all over the place, every single person threw a glance our way but did nothing to help. It was almost as if they were scared. That, or they just didn't give a crap about strangers being harassed in public. Right in front of them.
"Say that again? I didn't quite hear you." His voice teased, hot breaths fanning the side of my face. I shivered, anger coursing through my veins. All I saw was red.
"Allontanatevi da me idiota!" I yelled, slamming my head back onto his forehead causing him to stumble backwards slightly. I yanked my arm from his, now slightly loosened, grip and pushed him even further until he crashed into the bar stools. Sadly he used his hands to grab onto the stool instead of falling onto it, which was what I had hoped for. Distinct chatters erupted as people finally turned to properly view the scene that played in front of their eyes. I could swear I had heard some people gasp and murmur things such as "let's get out of here". But I wasn't interested. Right now my mission was to see this man get what he deserved.
"You think you're the only one who has the strength to manhandle people weaker than you? Well think again mister arsehole of the year!"
I watched him the whole time, his crouched body went rigid as he slowly stood to his full height. Raging eyes met equally furious one as we glared at each other. From the corner of my eyes I could see the bartender waving his arms frantically like a flamingo on fire as he ran towards the man who refused to look away.
"Sir please sit down! I'll take care of her!" The man whimpered nervously, trying to get his attention but to no avail. His dark eyes burned my face but I refused to look away either.


Wait, what?
Sir? Why did he just call him..oh.
Realization dawned on me. This man, this silly goose was the owner of this place. And it made no difference to me. None whatsoever. Perhaps I should have been afraid I was going to end up in jail for 'assaulting' a man like him or rather the fact that I was going to be on the road again but it meant nothing to me. I would rather be in hell with Satan himself than be under the same roof as this man.
I chuckled humorlessly, the things we say when we're overpowered by our treacherous emotions. Unaware and dismissive of how they can come back to bite you, in the face.


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Phew! That took longer than needed. 😳😆 I'm already working on the next part so hopefully that'll be up really soon. Sorry if you happen to stumble on silly errors, I haven't checked for the grammatical mistakes just yet. I hope they're not too bad lol xD


- Sadie
Edited by ..CountingStars - 9 years ago

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