{Journey of a Wife - 5 } - Hum Rajwaade Hain!!!!!! Last ch - Page 146 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

ehehe..I thought i am getting an update today😃...was to happy till u finally said that u are updating next week😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: capriya

Hai Navina, Hi Priyanka. Sorry for the delay ! No problem at all! It is a fantastic chapter.I loved it so much. Thank you 🤗 , But i felt very sad for Manyatha ! She is going through a hard phase in her life! It's worse than what u think ! Now what is Uday planning for Manyatha? His thoughts are always mischievious ! Udita is cute and naughty. Just like her Dad😳. Continue soon... Sure!

12 February 2014 Hi.. Hey
The update was wonderful Thank you 🤗
So manyata thinks uday is cheating on her Yep😆
But he is making her jealous
Loved the father daughter seen Glad u enjoyed that!
Love the old uday Cocky , isn't he😉?
Could not stop laughing
Thanks for the chapter Thanx 4 the comment 😃.
Hope to get next chapter soon 14 more LIKEs to go😭.
And pls never stop writing Awww , but you'll get tired of my nonsense😆.
Hugs To u too 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: rockstar4eva55

Hey Navi! Hi Alisha😃.
Sorry for the late comment :( ... and I'm sorry for the LATE reply!
I saw the update yesterday but was Ill , so couldn't comment :'( Not a problem, hope you're better now😳.
Please don't get furious,if you're angry :((( I'm not angry😃
Anyways,coming to the update,it was AWESOME!!! Thank you 🤗
Manyata going crazy thinking about the 'UdaNa' affair :P Wow ... you named their Jodi😲😆!!
And then Uday coming back and talking with Udita!! Awe! It was damn cute :D
And the 'Cereal princess'!
Udita's clapping her hands and laughing was so adorable and Uday whispering in Manyata's ear :))))) He's trying to get a reaction from her!
Uday treated Manyata wrongly in the Kitten and Banging the Door wala scene >_< He has a reason for doing all that .
And Udita's sneezing in the scene and everything that followed!!
I was literally rolling on the floor laughing xD Good , I wanted everyone to find it hilarious😆.
Mujhe Bukhaar aaya tha,aur main zor se hassne lagi.Just imagine. Quite a scene😉!!
And my mom starts staring at me in astonishment :P What did u tell her?
'Tumhara heel toot jaaye,Ankle mud jaaye aur plaster lagke tum mere Uday ke saath kuch naa kar payo"!!
Dude,Amazing! As Moniya would say ... thunkoo😛.
All in all,fantastic update!!! Thanks a lot😳.
Can't wait to see what comes up next :3 Udita has a little accident ... that's coming up next😉.
Thnx for the pm btw! :D Welcome😊.
Update Soon! Yep.
Congrats for the new book once again Thanks Dear. and Keep it up! ^_^
Lots of Love :* Right back at you❤️.
Alisha

Loved the comment Alisha ... thanks so much 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanks 4 the lovely comment Andrea 🤗 ... and thanks for letting me use your account to send my PMs😉😆!!! he he he , dont thank me navi

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanks 4 the lovely comment 🤗 ... and please tell me your name😳.

Ik i am over my shyness now😆Oh i know i am very violent Haan nai toh😆. huff demands i tell u😆. So much of payments.It gets me angry😡🤣 i want the update NOW!! Otherwise u watch wat i do😉 . My name is Madiya. Aww! yw i mean u deserve the comment ❤️ since u write amazingly ☺️🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

navi,soo soo sorrryyy,Kyun ji? i didnt checked my pms,after gettng ur scrap i opened my pms,Hawww😲. next time se check karungi,is bar to miss hi ho jata,thaaanks forr ur scrap!!!!!!!👏 😊 😊 Welcome Pia ... I thought that , that might be the case😉!

nowww,wat is uday upto?? Good questionClap. i am wondering😉 but uday ka mind itna fast chalta hai that mujhe agle update tak wait hi karna parega to know what he is upto😆 U may not get the answer there either😆.
udita 1 and manyata 0,loved this line,udayyy is backkk!!!!! Yeah .i love it when he teases manyata and the gaaaliyas r back,i soo missed themm!!!!!! How nice if we could watch them again😭!
in short manveer are cuming bakc in form!!!!!!😊😊 Yep, then Udita can see a different side to her parents😳.
will wait fr ur updateee!!!!!!😊 Awww ... hopefully it'll be by the weekend😃.

Thanks 4 the wonderful comment Pia 🤗 ... & don't forget to check your inbox next time😉.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Nash..

Hey Navina.. Hi Nash😛.

Wonderful update as usual! Thank you 🤗

This "RANJANA TRAVIS" thing has really added a lot of spice to this journey. Aww, I'm glad u thought so ... I actually had doubts adding in this track. It was really hilarious of Manyata to misinterpret Uday's kiss to his daughter But lucky she realised what happened before she made a fool of herself😆.

And I Tell You, Udita has grown to be a well mannered girl (the credit goes to You Navi.. The character creator) Thank u , thank u 😉!!

Uday is surely not cheating on his princess but his games are just too good with Manyata. Poor Girl! Yep, it is sad ... hope she fights back fast.

Just waiting for Moniya vs Uday. That'll be a little later. A Real Fun! Loved it Thanks😳.

Thanks 4 the lovely comment Nash 🤗 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all a big salute to you for opening the 5th boook of ManVeer Saga 👍🏼 And am sure This will be more successful than ur previous books👏 👏 ... Coz u introduces ur each new book with a different outlook...


The way u wrote the prologue is fabulous... 😛 an excellent way of starting a new session, 👏 kudos to ur writing ,... 👍🏼 a new character is all set to enter in ManVeer's Life.. Really enjoyed this fresh start.. got a clear picture of the Current status of Manveer's relationship

Part 1
Intentionally or not Uday is set to make Manyata jealous 😉hehehe Really enjoyed it..😆 Madam is Started to panic of loosing Uday 😲btwn these tensions, u made us reading interesting by describing lovely Papa-Beti sequences.. 😳 ❤️ Udita is giving company to her Dad by showing her naughtiness over Manyata.. the scene wr Uday kissing Udita who sititng on Ranjan's Lap and M's
wrong interpretation was too much 😆 😉 and yes. Uday's Love for Manyata was often peeping out from his angry young man Avatar... 😛 but Manyata is too busy fuming in Jealousy.. 😡
her mental thoughts are hilarious 😆 Hope this Ranjana Track may link the two silent lovers 😉.. Thank you so much Navina for giving such a Serious-Humour Packed update 👏 and thank you so much for the PM. Please do continue soon we are eagerly waiting




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: andy.a

Hey navi!!! 😃 Hi Andy😊.

Great update👏👏. Thank you 🤗 . You know I went through many reactions after reading the update, starting from sadness to anger to extreme joy!!! I must say, I JUST LOVED THIS UPDATE LOADS!!!👏 I'm really glad about that!

Um, I put a res for 4 days and I was not sure when I could edit it, last 2 days you know how tired I was! Yep ... I understand . Any way finally I have come to comment... hope I do justice to the comment😕 Looks fab to me😳!

What to say? How should I knowConfused? First again!! Yeh😛😃!!! Congrats Miss Stalker😆. Um, am I getting over excited, I doubt I am... 😆 I doubt it too😉.

The first part where manyta was having doubts about uday's and ranjana's relation made me too to doubt uday... I know , u immediately scrapped me saying u want to kill him. one tiny part of my mind doubted uday...I really sympathized with manyta. Are u changing sides Andy😉?

When I read that dream scene I was happy, right from the time it had come in the promo I was a bit worried about that part... U & Everyone else😆!! so happy that it was a dream, or uday would have suffered in my hands... I would make mr shark to punish uday!!😡 I'd hide him under my bed😳.

Next part where manyta says " uday wont leave us" made me happy, I wanted to tell manyta, uday will never leave you, you should read the promo given by navi, then you would know, wink🤣 That promo is my secret ... don't let Manyata know about it.

Loved that cerealed princess scene... he he he it was sooo funny!!! I don't think Manyata found it funny! thank god, my niece never did that to me when ever I fed her...Embarrassed If she ever does it ... THAT WOULD BE FUNNY😆!!!

Uday's dialogue" there is no smoke without fire," made me mad😡, I really got angry at him... if there was fire, it should be only with manyta na,(wink) Hawww Andy ... where has your mind drifted to☺️?

The sorry part made me laugh .. my niece say "soyi" for sorry and "pees" for please... it really nice to hear the babaies talk na navi.. Yep , but sometimes they use foreign wordsConfused.

Now the allergy scene was another scene I was waiting to read! Uday was mad at manyta but he should not have told her what he said.. and he threw manyta out!!! Just like how she used to😳. He was tired of the lecture from all , then WHY WAS HE MAKING OTHERS SCOLD HIM! uday, tell me what is going in your mind!!!! Uday doesn't know the answer ... I haven't told him yet 🤣 .

If I ever said I liked jai, now I am saying I HATE HER... I knew u'd say that😆! what ever be the problem with manveer , they would sought it na, why does she have to say" divorce him, divorce him" grrr.😡 I think she wants him for herself😭.

Now HOW DARE THAT RANJANA STEP FOOT IN MANVEER'S HOME😡? I called her there ... didn't she tell you😉. I know she is innocent but she is the new'jai' for me... that part where manyta says " your daughter is allergic to your mistress" made me laugh, so much.. it was a tic for tat answer to uday... Don't think Uday saw that coming his way😲. ha ha ha , well done manyta (and the writer who thought about that, superb navi... it was just classic)👏👏👏👏👏👏 Thanks for the applause Andy😳.

So the happy news, uday was making manyta suffer making her believe that he had a affair with another woman, but why??????/ Huge reason. answer me... 😕 Sorry , can't reveal it now😈 . you said you would reveal more in the next chap na...That's right! but now the story would be interesting .. manyta jealous,, and uday enjoying it,haha ha.. If I were you I would not have revealed that this was uday's plan for a long time, I know how EVIL u are. but you being a good girl revealed it, and I am sooo thankful to you for clearing uday's nameEmbarrassed I'm a goo-gal!!!!!

Loved that last part..manyta cursing ranjana,😆 I really hope what she said comes true... may she fall down and break her bone...{I don't like her} Poor Ranjana.

Do update soon...7 more LIKEs to go Andy😉. and sorry for the late comment.. Was it late😉? I haven't even updated yet, I just came and sat to write your comment.. I thought I would comment and update tmrw again, time constraint, you know naOuch I know , I know.

Bw, did you decide the name for the book?? Yes😳. Tell me, tell meEmbarrassed NO 🤣 !

Thanks for the pmEmbarrassed...Welcome. and Andrea was complaining you did not send her a pm 😆 Tell her I'll pm her next time.

Love you❤️ Love u too😳.

Thanks Andy 🤗 ... for this beautiful comment . I loved it sooo muucchhh😳!!!

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