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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik

Hey:) Hi Sara
First of all, thank you:) For posting it a night earlier for me:P It's my pleasure😳.
It was an amazing chapter:) Thank u 🤗 .
I love Uday and Udita bonding:)
Seems like a game from Uday's side. It is SORT OF😉. LOL. Because of his and Ranjana's reactions:P But let's see:):P
Can't write a long or detailed comment. sorry about that:( No problem , this is sufficient😳!!!
Once again amazing:) Thanks for the PM:) Welcome😛. And best wishes:) Thanks😃.
Ohh and yeah do update soon:P Yep , almost finished writing it😳.

Originally posted by: angelina6
sorry navina hadnt comment on your previous updates was busy in exams was inactive Not a problem Iqra ... u don't have to apologise😃.
firstly congo on new thread Thanxx😳.

i really love this chapter That makes me very happy😃.

now manyta is being insecure about her relationship

i loved the udita very much she is such a doll Yep , a cute Doll😳.

i thing uday is doing all this thing to cause pain to manyata No - that's not it. i guess and that ranj.. and udays milli bhagat hai yeh And there's a third person too😉.

uday is being rude to her to cause her pain and punish her There's a bigger reason ... which you'll find out gradually. but i klnow u will make thing right soon Yeah , I will.

loved the chapter navina hope u update soon Hope I get what I want soon😈😆!

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Hey Navina..

Wonderful update as usual!

This "RANJANA TRAVIS" thing has really added a lot of spice to this journey. It was really hilarious of Manyata to misinterpret Uday's kiss to his daughter

And I Tell You, Udita has grown to be a well mannered girl (the credit goes to You Navi.. The character creator)

Uday is surely not cheating on his princess but his games are just too good with Manyata. Poor Girl!

Just waiting for Moniya vs Uday. A Real Fun! Loved it

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Priyanka

@capriya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hai Navina, Sorry for the delay ! It is a fantastic chapter.I loved it so much. But i felt very sad for Manyatha ! She is going through a hard phase in her life! Now what is Uday planning for Manyatha? His thoughts are always mischievious ! Udita is cute and naughty. Continue soon...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: annabh

Omg so uday is playing prank on her Nope - not a prank, but you'll get to know soon😉!
I just hope it does not get back fired

I hope so too!
Jai is correct in a way

Yep, she just trying to help her sister.
awesome chappy

Thank you 🤗
do continue asap

Well, the chapter is already written , I'm just waiting for my 14 more LIKEs😆.
thanks for the pm

Welcome😃

Thanks 4 the wishes and the lovely comment Anni

Edited by ...navina... - 11 years ago

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

navi,soo soo sorrryyy,i didnt checked my pms,after gettng ur scrap i opened my pms,next time se check karungi,is bar to miss hi ho jata,thaaanks forr ur scrap!!!!!!!👏 😊 😊

nowww,wat is uday upto?? i am wondering😉 but uday ka mind itna fast chalta hai that mujhe agle update tak wait hi karna parega to know what he is upto😆

udita 1 and manyata 0,loved this line,udayyy is backkk!!!!! i love it when he teases manyata and the gaaaliyas r back,i soo missed themm!!!!!!

in short manveer are cuming bakc in form!!!!!!😊😊

will wait fr ur updateee!!!!!!😊

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ..IshqShava..
once again a power packed update👏 Awww, I'm glad u felt it so, Vibha😳.
Manveer's individual antics made me laugh out loud so many times in this update...lol And I laughed whilst writing it😆.
ohh..Manyata's dream was scary to the hilt..i know Uday could never go to such extremes but still😲 I know!
the last scene reminded me of good old days of DEK when Uday taught her the manners..😆 That's exactly where I lifted the scene from ... and modified it a bit😉.
hold on, is Ranjana involved in Uday's 'Make Manyata jealous' mission? All she knows is , she's helping Uday😉. i mean does she know whats going on...that would be good...😆
waiting for the next update... Already written , waiting to post now. thanks for the PM You're welcome😛.

Thanks 4 the wonderful comment Vibha 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: andy.1
Hi navina!!!😃 Hi Andrea😛.

how are you???😃, Good , and u? loved this chap !!!! I'm very happy about that😃!
aw!! loved uday in this update... Really 😲? Weren't u threatening to kill him at 1 point😉?
really looking forward to read what is going to happen soon!!! Ummm , let's see ...🤔 ... Udita lands up in hospital (that'll happen next😉)
i really loved that "kissing scene"😉😆 It was funny , wasn't it😆?
do continue soon!! Sure ... should be next week😕.
bw: i did not get any pms😡 Oops - sorry!

Thanks 4 the lovely comment Andrea 🤗 ... and thanks for letting me use your account to send my PMs😉😆!!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Hi Navi.. Hi Gargi😃. I actually read your update on 12th feb itself as I could not stop myself though I promised😆.. You're a VERY NAUGHTY girl 😆!

Great update as usual... Thank you 🤗 ,The Navilicious one but again m not at all convinced by Uday n that Bi**h friend of his😡😡.. I'll convince u (in time), I so much hate her even for sharing a laugh over my Manyata with Uday..How dare she😡😡..Gargi ... I think your Blood-pressure is rising too much. No m seriously gonna burn her hair if Manyata doesn't😈😆...My baby Udita is so cute..she even thanked that vamp...no probs she is forgiven as she is my darling😳... Aren't u BIASED! I loved her naughty techniques of making her mother a cereal😆😆... Yeah , poor Manyata!! Aww n her soly mama was again cute...But should I say for the umpteenth time...YES I HATE UDAY N NOTHING CAN CHANGE THAT😡😡... I can ... and I WILL ( it'll take some time though😕) May b a dead Akash coming back to life for Moniya can save my anger for Uday since then it will get replaced for Akash😆😆.. No thanks ... let's leave Akash where he is😆.

Anyways enough of my rantings...continue soon😛 Sure!

Thanks for the awesome comment Gargi 🤗 .

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

What a hilarious update Navina

Loved it

inspires me to right my update

and well i have decided

i am heading to write it now

lol

i loved the mistress part

but sometimes i feel i am falling towards manyata's side than uday

i expected uday to be making a really "f**k-i-am-trolled" look

i wanted manyata to outwit uday

lol god knows why

eagerly waiting for the next update

can i help u with the title *wide smile*

hope the book isnt the last

i just cant have enough of it

i promise now onwards ill comment regularly

oops... KISS

i end it here

beautiful update Navi

loved it

thanx for scrapping

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz
Hey Navina!! Hello😊. I've been reading all ur chapters since Thread 1. I never commented since i was too shy lool😆. Well, I'm glad u got over your "SHYNESS"😆. Though i used to always get impatient to read all the chapters.Thread 1 to Thread 4 it was amazing!👏 Thanks so much 🤗 . And now? I will always comment.😉 I'll be looking forward to it😳. Congratz! For thread 5🥳 🥳 Thanks😃.
Pls do pm for chapter 2😛 include this ID in your buddy list and u will get a pm : andy.1

LOLL i luv that part when Manyata thought Uday was kissing his 'so mistress' bosom when he wasn't. Yeah , poor thing almost had a heart-attack😉. He was actually kissing Udita. I found that part so funny lol🤣 n cute!😃 From Reading the end scene it seems that Uday and Ranjana are playing some game😆 It's not a game ... it's a mission😉!!! If they are then i hope they succeed!😈 They MUST succeed . And if they are not? Then i wish Ranjana to DIE by Manyata's hand😳🤣 WOW, you're very violent (I tell u😆) Just kidding!

Do update soon dear❤️!🤗 Well, the update is ready , I'm just waiting for my "payment"😆.