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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
once again a power packed update👏
Manveer's individual antics made me laugh out loud so many times in this update...lol
ohh..Manyata's dream was scary to the hilt..i know Uday could never go to such extremes but still😲
the last scene reminded me of good old days of DEK when Uday taught her the manners..😆
hold on, is Ranjana involved in Uday's 'Make Manyata jealous' mission? i mean does she know whats going on...that would be good...😆
waiting for the next update...thanks for the PM😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sanah12

Hey navi, Hi Yasmin 😊, hope u alright!😊 Yep , I'm good , what about you?
I'm sorry for not commenting on the previous update becoz of school work. Hope u forgive me 😭
Sure, of-course I do 😉! Congratulation on your new book 🥳 Thank you 🤗.
Coming on the update it was just mind blowing and really awesome!!👏 Thanks😳!
You know even 100marks is less compared to the way u write its like u deserve a grand trophy for ur skilled writing.. I'll give u my address ... u send me a trophy , OK? It'll be my first😆.
Loved the update to the core!! Awww, I'm so happy😃.
Love udita she is too cute such a sweet heart And getting naughty too😉.
Love the father daughter convo
Uday showing cold shoulder to manyata that's bad and now his and ranjana's affair OMG!!
I wonder what game uday is playing 😕 but I must say its a fun game 😉 It's pretty fun, writing it also😆.seeing manyata jealous is a fun thing 😆 bt even feeling bad for her at the same time the way uday pushed her out of the room and giving her a cold shoulder 😭 There's a reason , he's doing that.
I was ROFL when manyata said "Uday - can't u see she's allergic to your
mistress! No! Of-course you didn't notice - your
focus is only on Ranjana's cleavage ... right?" OMG did manyata just say that 😲 LOL she did!! 😆 Yep, I made her say it .
The last part was not less hilarious the way manyata wants ranjhana's ankle to be twisted and all. Manyata is cursing poor Ranjana ... hope it doesn't back-fireConfused.
Had loadz of fun reading the chappy.
It was just beautifully marvelously written. Thanks Dear😃.
All the emotions were superbly described 👍🏼 Awww😳.
The flow of the story is going brilliantly... Hats OFF to your wonderful ideas and this brilliant story 👏 Thanx so much😳.
Do continue asap.. Hmmm, half is already written ... half to go😉!
And thanks for the pm.. Welcome!
Hugs.. Same to u 🤗 .

Thanks for the beautiful comment Yasmin 🤗 ... u made my day😳!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Hi navina!!!😃

how are you???😃, loved this chap !!!!
aw!! loved uday in this update...
really looking forward to read what is going to happen soon!!!
i really loved that "kissing scene"😉😆
do continue soon!!
bw: i did not get any pms😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: saakhi01

🤣 🤣 Oh god this was hillarious... Yep, I thought the first chapter should be light-hearted😳.
Awesome, manyata toh is in full jealousy mode Haan nai toh😉!!! n uday he is such a tease, playing with her 😉 Aah, there's a reason, he's doing what he's doing.
Loved d update... Thank you 🤗
Cont soon navi... Sure😛.
Thanks for d pm Welcome.

Thanks Huma 🤗 .

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

haha loved how Manyata got him back for the earlier incident lol

Yep , she returned his own medicine😆.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Hi Navi..I actually read your update on 12th feb itself as I could not stop myself though I promised😆..

Great update as usual...The Navilicious one but again m not at all convinced by Uday n that Bi**h friend of his😡😡..I so much hate her even for sharing a laugh over my Manyata with Uday..How dare she😡😡..No m seriously gonna burn her hair if Manyata doesn't😈😆...My baby Udita is so cute..she even thanked that vamp...no probs she is forgiven as she is my darling😳...I loved her naughty techniques of making her mother a cereal😆😆...Aww n her soly mama was again cute...But should I say for the umpteenth time...YES I HATE UDAY N NOTHING CAN CHANGE THAT😡😡... May b a dead Akash coming back to life for Moniya can save my anger for Uday since then it will get replaced for Akash😆😆..

Anyways enough of my rantings...continue soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Hey Navi!
Sorry for the late comment :(
I saw the update yesterday but was Ill , so couldn't comment :'(
Please don't get furious,if you're angry :(((
Anyways,coming to the update,it was AWESOME!!!
Manyata going crazy thinking about the 'UdaNa' affair :P
And then Uday coming back and talking with Udita!! Awe! It was damn cute :D
And the 'Cereal princess'!
Udita's clapping her hands and laughing was so adorable and Uday whispering in Manyata's ear :)))))
Uday treated Manyata wrongly in the Kitten and Banging the Door wala scene >_<
And Udita's sneezing in the scene and everything that followed!!
I was literally rolling on the floor laughing xD
Mujhe Bukhaar aaya tha,aur main zor se hassne lagi.Just imagine.
And my mom starts staring at me in astonishment :P
'Tumhara heel toot jaaye,Ankle mud jaaye aur plaster lagke tum mere Uday ke saath kuch naa kar payo"!!
Dude,Amazing!
All in all,fantastic update!!!
Can't wait to see what comes up next :3
Thnx for the pm btw! :D
Update Soon!
Congrats for the new book once again and Keep it up! ^_^
Lots of Love :*
Alisha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Hey Navina!! I've been reading all ur chapters since Thread 1. I never commented since i was too shy lool😆. Though i used to always get impatient to read all the chapters.Thread 1 to Thread 4 it was amazing!👏And now? I will always comment.😉
Congratz! For thread 5🥳 🥳
Pls do pm for chapter 2😛
LOLL i luv that part when Manyata thought Uday was kissing his 'so mistress' bosom when he wasn't. He was actually kissing Udita. I found that part so funny lol🤣 n cute!😃From Reading the end scene it seems that Uday and Ranjana are playing some game😆 If they are then i hope they succeed!😈 And if they are not? Then i wish Ranjana to DIE by Manyata's hand😳🤣 Just kidding!
Do update soon dear❤️!🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Superb update dear. Thank u 🤗 . In entire update love Udita. Yeah ... she's a Doll😳!!! Infront of Udita Uday is behaving as a perfect father and a perfect husband. Yep , he's putting on his best act ever😳. Uday broke Manayta's mangalsutra is Manayta's nightmare. Love the update. I'm glad u felt so😃. Thanks for pm. Welcome😛. Pls continue soon.

Sure!

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

yeahhh...congos on new thread... Thanks Ravneet 🤗

nd i luvd the update...the last one was best...🤣 Brought back some good memories huh?
so uday is playing game on M... Something like that.
waitin' for nxt ...cont soon... Should be next week😃.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi


You deserve this new word Navilicious...grt word😆 to describe you😉.Thank u (I think😕) .Yepp I always smart to identify such vamps😡 like Ranjana...But Ranjana is not a Vamp. Should i say I feel like burning all her hair along with Uday's?😡.That'll be painful😭. .It will be funny to see them in such a condition😈...You're too evil Gargi. No probs if you don't watch Jodha-Akbar but I know u understood my hint n you will write better than that😳.I'll try my bestEmbarrassed. .Have not read ur chapter 1, will read tomorrow as Doc has strictly ordered me BED_RESTConfused..M suffering from accute Neck-pain due to some vit B12 n D deficiency so damn..I can't do anything..not even look in my lappy for a long timeCry Oh no - that's sad 😔 ... hope u feel better soon😃!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: cnibir

Achoo! , Udita sneezed loudly ... and Manyata's tube-light switched on. She took the Baby and put her on the floor. Uday - can't u see she's allergic to your mistress! No! Of-course you didn't notice - your focus is only on Ranjana's cleavage ... right?

BAHAHAHAHAH this was the funniest part🤣🤣🤣..Yep , it was😆!! . loved it... but at the same time i am curious as to what Uday and that Mistress of his are planning together... And there's a third player too😉!
Little Udita gets cuter each time you update... she is sooo sooo adorable but then again she has to be cause she is our Moniya's daughter...Indeed , well said👏 , who was naughty and mischievous in her time... And DAMN IRRITATING TOO😡!

thank you for the PM Welcome😳. and i really appreciate your time and effort... keep going...ClapClap Will do😳!!!

Thanks for the awesome comment Nibir 🤗 .

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