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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hey Vidhi, awesome update👏! I don't mind the dagger coming into play ... as it was NOT UDAYVEER'S BLOOD THAT WAS SHED😈. Manyata thought she was too clever, but there is 1 that's above her😉. The entire Manveer scene was incredible ; looking forward for reading more😳. Do continue soon, thanks for the PM😊.

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Awesome update...👏
Loved it...

Concept seems catchy...😉👍🏼

Do cont soon...
N do pm me...

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Nice update Vidhi!

I am just loving the mystery that you have built up. Its really enticing.

Plz do update soon.

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Awesome update
Loved it loadz!
Manyata thought she was too clever but uday is cleverer then her.
At least uday didn't get hurt with the dagger.
I love the mystery.
Do continue asap
Thanks 4 the pm.

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reyna winget

@reyna.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

that was awesome !!

so, i got to know that uday is the lead ... soo excited to know abt the story from now onwards

haha ... attcked him with a dagger 😆

that note was soo cute 😳

lovely update

⭐️

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

thanks for the PM...

Really intense chapter...

i am still confused as to what uday did and why manyata was telling him to regret for what he did...

i hope these confusions are cleared up soon but i am enjoying the suspense too...

continue soon

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Hey Vidhi, how you? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
Beautifully written 👏
Amazing, superb ⭐️
Loved it loads ❤️
OMG, Manyata is soo rude
I don't like the way she treats people
Poor Jai, really feel bad for her
Wonder what happened between Uday and Manyata and who's grave is that
Thanks for the pm 😊
Please update soon 😃

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InkAndFable

@InkAndFable

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

I Loved Dis Update...
So Nice and well written

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Hey.. Vidhi..

Both the parts were just amazing...

Chalo atleast Manyata is nice to someone...

The way Uday made his entry was spectacular...

And both of their talks were so nice..

I just loved it...

I wonder whose grave is it...

And is Uday involved in..

Bringing the person in the grave to the grave..

Update soon..

And thanx for the PM..

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Great update Vidhi👏. Thanks Navi ... 😳 I like your new entry - Radha. I'm surprised though... that Manyata is nice to her😲. Maybe there IS some hope for the spoilt Princess😆! There's a small MAYBE ... 😉 I loved how Uday made his entry. Scrolls which point out the direction of where he'd be😳! I couldn't find anything more intriguing ... 😆He knows about the grave ... hope he had nothing to do with landing someone in the said grave! I can't say anything about this Navi ... 😉 Really hoping that Manyata does NOT use that dagger on Uday😉. Do update Ch 2.2 ASAP!

Thanks for such a beautiful comment Navi !

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