||The Punishment|| Chapter 3/Note : Page 19 - Page 7

awesome update
loved it
cont. soon

Originally posted by: cnibir

nice update Vidhi...

of course we are eagerly waiting for Manveer meeting... and for the tombstone i think it is Manyata's mother... i don't it could be anyone... we will see as the story progresses .

Thanks for the PM and continue soon... good for the next chapter...

Originally posted by: tazeen...

awesome update
loved it
cont. soon

Originally posted by: reyna.

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Omg catty ... U were amazing !!

U r a fab writer ...👏

i loved ur style of writing .. Thanks a lot for such kind words ... 😳

U know wat, I donno the leads of this story, but still I enjoyed it !!

It was a kickkas start !!

Is it the hero who died or hero is yet to come ? The hero is yet to come ! He is Udayveer !

Really waiting for continuation !!

Love ... Reyna

Hey, how you? 😊
Amazing story ⭐️
Loved it ❤️
Written beautifully 👏
Thank god, Uday didn't die
Amazing prologue as well as chapter 1 👏
Sorry for the late reply
Wonder what secrets Manyata has 😕
N why she hates Uday
Thanks for the pm 😊
Eager to read next chapter 😃
Plz update soon 😉

really loved it for the first time i have seen j craving for her sister slove while manyata doesn't like her at all hope she gets that love from manyata soon really felt sorry for j... wonder who this person was that manyata is taking revenge for really cant wait for the next part please update soon and thanks for the pm

nice update.

loved it.

manyta is so cold.

poor j.

y manyata hate uv.

who us dead.

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey, how you? 😊 Me fine, you ?
Amazing story ⭐️
Loved it ❤️
Written beautifully 👏
Thank god, Uday didn't die
Amazing prologue as well as chapter 1 👏
Sorry for the late reply
Wonder what secrets Manyata has 😕
N why she hates Uday
Thanks for the pm 😊
Eager to read next chapter 😃
Plz update soon 😉

Originally posted by: preya_radev

really loved it for the first time i have seen j craving for her sister slove while manyata doesn't like her at all hope she gets that love from manyata soon really felt sorry for j... wonder who this person was that manyata is taking revenge for really cant wait for the next part please update soon and thanks for the pm