||The Punishment|| Chapter 3/Note : Page 19 - Page 10

Originally posted by: annabh

Unreserved
Hello dear, Hey Di !
how have you been? I am doing fine ! What about you ?
omg finally both the updates
well first one thrilled me completely
i have grown extra eager to know
the past
and the second part
confushed me even more
but i loved the hot spicy
manveer meeting
uday was just awesome
i want to know his
incomplete sentence Which incomplete sentence ? 😕
anyway update fast
thanks for the pm You are welcome !
huggs Hugz

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Vidhi, Hey again Navi ... awesome update👏! I don't mind the dagger coming into play ... as it was NOT UDAYVEER'S BLOOD THAT WAS SHED😈. You are quite happy with Manyata's blood being shed ... 😲 Manyata thought she was too clever, but there is 1 that's above her😉. Lolz The entire Manveer scene was incredible ; Thanks, i so wanted to have that thing in it ! Do you understand what i mean becoz i don't ... 😆looking forward for reading more😳. Do continue soon, thanks for the PM😊. You are welcome !

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesome update...👏
Loved it...

Concept seems catchy...😉👍🏼

Do cont soon...
N do pm me...

Originally posted by: sanah12

Awesome update
Loved it loadz!
Manyata thought she was too clever but uday is cleverer then her.
At least uday didn't get hurt with the dagger.
I love the mystery.
Do continue asap
Thanks 4 the pm.

Originally posted by: reyna.

that was awesome !!

so, i got to know that uday is the lead ... soo excited to know abt the story from now onwards

haha ... attcked him with a dagger 😆

that note was soo cute 😳

lovely update

⭐️

Originally posted by: cnibir

thanks for the PM...

Really intense chapter...

i am still confused as to what uday did and why manyata was telling him to regret for what he did...

i hope these confusions are cleared up soon but i am enjoying the suspense too...

continue soon

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Vidhi, how you? 😊 Hey Humairaa ! I am fine and how are you ?
Sorry for the late reply
Beautifully written 👏
Amazing, superb ⭐️
Loved it loads ❤️
OMG, Manyata is soo rude
I don't like the way she treats people
Poor Jai, really feel bad for her
Wonder what happened between Uday and Manyata and who's grave is that
Thanks for the pm 😊
Please update soon 😃

Originally posted by: san.gar

I Loved Dis Update...
So Nice and well written

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey.. Vidhi..

Both the parts were just amazing...

Chalo atleast Manyata is nice to someone...

The way Uday made his entry was spectacular...

And both of their talks were so nice..

I just loved it...

I wonder whose grave is it...

And is Uday involved in..

Bringing the person in the grave to the grave..

Update soon..

And thanx for the PM..