Manveer OS - The RIGHT to TOUCH!!! - Page 6

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

loved the OS navina😛, Thanks Chitra 🤗 , but have to agree 2 years of marrying a hottie named Udayveer and still not realising that she has fallen for him, this manyata is as thick as the DEK serial Manyata 😆. Yeah , I based this character on the original ... so SHE'S BLOODY SLOW😆! I missed reading your stuffs girl,& I really miss your lovely comments😳 , lifes been pretty busy, Awww , I can understand! hopefully will catch up on your book 3 soon 😊 U better do it fast , because Book 4 is starting soon😉!

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Amazing os navina
Loved it

Thanks Saira 🤗 .
When i saw soo much purple while scrolling down i was dancing with joy then kaboom no sex
All excitememt down the drain

Awww shame !!! Sorry for bursting your bubble😆.
But again it was an amazing story

Thank you.
Manyata is sooo stupid first she does not understand udays love and she wrote a letter
She would habe used whatsapp bbm viber text message n switched his phone on n uday does not on his cell

Well , if u read carefully , you'd see that Uday doesn't know that his cell was switched off. Unnati mentions that he didn't answer his phone ... but he Didn't LOOK to see why. He had more pressing issues on his mind - LIKE , WHAT HAPPENED TO MANYATA!
She is soo old fashioned

Just like the writer!
Loved the whole thing i was a bad reader i read the emd first lol

I wonder where u learnt THAT from🤔?
Never the less it was very beaitiful and evem though i knew the end i was still biting my nails

Awww , poor child!
U write brilliantly

😃

Originally posted by: andy.a

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

navi yar thanks mat bol!!!! ;(

Toh kya bolon😕?
mujhe dost nahi samajhti na??? Haan , tum DOST ho , BEHEN bhi ho ! isiliye bar bar thank u bolti ho!!!! Saying THANK YOU is POLITE ... haan nai toh!

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

How can a OS written by you be just average?.😳..Even with the plot given to us by the horrible PH of DEK, you made such a beautiful n cute OS.👏 Thank you so much Gargi 🤗 , words mean a lot to me!!!!!! 👏...this was once again very cute, sweet n amazing. Thanks. M had always been stupid, so you rightly described her character here. she understands things late...Yep , much to our annoyance😡! i felt majnu very funny here, and specially when he jumped from the running train, after seeing M in the station,He was excited , the poor guy! when M was about to faint due to the acute perspiration of majnu...I don't think it was "ACUTE" Gargi 😉! m sure she could have relished the perspiration of Uday instead 🤣🤣🤣 Eeew , that just put me off Uday🤢!

i liked the last part when manyata breaks the knot n goes back to uday, My favourite part also, while J falls on the ground...that part was very much M like and also hilarious🤣 Glad u enjoyed it😃.

Originally posted by: panchaali

Thanks to you for giving us such a lovely os 😊🤗

Awww 🤗 .

Originally posted by: mrs.K

Omg RIGHT TO TOUCH , u posted it.

Yes I did , I finally completed it - SO I POSTED IT!

Wonderful OS di.

Thanks Kavya 🤗 .

Loved da part when Manyata told Uday dat he was forgettiung her😳. Dat was so sweet and romantic. Hmmm😳!!!!!! Glad u loved that.

Di , u should write another part and pair up Akash and Jai😆. Kavi , I must put in so much of effort to write another part , AND THAT TOO FOR 2 PEOPLE I HATE😡! Sorry dear , no second part.

Loved it loved it loved it. Too good!

Thank you!

Y U didn't send me a pm or scrap 😭?

I knew you'll find it on your own Dear😉!

Originally posted by: andy.a

Originally posted by: apoorva123

very good awesome
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