Manveer OS - The RIGHT to TOUCH!!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: pia.raha

wowww,dat wass freaking awesomeee!!!!!!! Thanks Pia 🤗 ,uday's cndition,i was hoping ki pyar ho jaaye is beech,then wen manyata was still happy wit akash,i was soo disheartened!!! Awww, sorry about that. then dta mnaveer night was soo romntic,bt wen dat note flew aways,i dreaded k sad ending to nehi hai is story ka😳😳 Oh no I couldn't write another sad OS , last time I wrote a sad OS , everyone threatened me😭!!!!!!!!! bt alls well dat ends well!!!!!!😊😊Correct! loveddd itt,hayee manyata ka wo dialog dat uday is frghetng her,wass soo soo lovelyy!!!!! Thanks😊. the last part in the car was superbbb,That was my favourite part. lovedd it navi, I'm so happy about that!! thanks fr the scrap!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊Welcome

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Amazing os navina
Loved it
When i saw soo much purple while scrolling down i was dancing with joy then kaboom no sex
All excitememt down the drain
But again it was an amazing story
Manyata is sooo stupid first she does not understand udays love and she wrote a letter
She would habe used whatsapp bbm viber text message
She is soo old fashioned
Loved the whole thing i was a bad reader i read the emd first lol
Never the less it was very beaitiful and evem though i knew the end i was still biting my nails
U write brilliantly

Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict

she had herself switched off Udayan fone. BB whatsapp text viber etc r of no use

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Oh yeah but why did not switch it on again
How foolish .
And udayveer did not switch on his cell
He is a business man a yuvraj .how dumb

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thank u , thank u , thank u Andy for this fabulous comment 🤗 ... loved it sooo much😳!!!!!!aw!!!😳 iam glad that you loved it... we serve to please

Originally posted by: ...navina...

<font color="#ff0000" size="4">Loved the comment Mahi 🤗.</font>

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

awesome...superb story...loved it...

Originally posted by: Ashish.Addict

that was simply simply wonderful n wooow!!!

Thanks Sanju 🤗 .

so let me exhibit some words from my mini small insignificant dictionary

the update was

wow

awesome

wonderful

fabulous

beautiful

touching

fantastic

class

faadu

rapchik

fantabulous

mind blowing

lovely

superb

zhakaas

rocking

splendid

outstanding

A+

(sorry if any word is repeated) THANK YOU for the 19 compliments ... BTW , I see your "mini small insignificant dictionary" is NOT in alphabetical order 🤣!!!!!!

i loved it so much navina!! Awww, I'm so glad😳.

it was so refreshing to read it!!

thanx fr sucha beautiful os! Thank u for this fabulous comment😉.

loved it in all ways!!

(*ahem ahem* forbidden love) U keep up YOUR END of the DEAL ... I'll KEEP up MINE !!!!!