Manveer OS - The RIGHT to TOUCH!!! - Page 7

Originally posted by: ...navina...

SIMPLY AWESOME NAVI...

Originally posted by: Shahista01

SIMPLY AWESOME NAVI...

WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY... LOVED IT👏

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Awww this os was so heart touching! Thanks Sarah😃.

i was going throught the forum and found this amazing piece of work! Oh my!!!! That's such a huge compliment ... I'm really grateful, well i loved your previous os as well... uday was in army i guess... Yes , that's correct.

this was written beautifully too no doubt...😊 Thanks Dear😳!!!

Originally posted by: safia25

Navi you know what YOU ARE HILARIOUS!! 😃😃😃 I am😕???? Howcome😕?

as you know i was out of city and ofcourse out of my home too.. so i couldn't read it.. SORRY for that!!🤢🤢🤢 No need to apologise Dear , u already explained all that on scrap to me.
but as i returned to my sweet home late night ,😭😭 i couldn't wait but to put off my shoes, open my lappy and read your OS - THE RIGHT TO TOUCH..⭐️⭐️⭐️ OH MY😲! Then , along with ME , YOU are also HILLARIOUS😆!!!!!!

and by GOD Navi , it was Superb, beyond expectations.. Thanks😃.

awww!! i wish it was an SS rather than an OS so that it could continued for a long time.. Oh no thank you ... 1 FF is taking all my spare time , couldn't have fitted in another SS. Anyways I love OS's ... on 1 sitting , the story ends! JUST PERFECT😉!!!!!

Full on dhamaal update, totally enjoyed it..Thank you 🤗 , i like AKASH dumb-founded asusual..😆😆 ...And smelly - U FORGOT TO SAY "SMELLY" 🤣!
you should made it more long, Hailla😲!!! though it was quite long...😉😉 It was MASSIVE Safia.
You know Navi, you have something magical in your handwritting that makes your updates the MAGICAL ONE!! Awww , that's the

best(est) compliment I ever received😳!

I like its total Bindass ending, A HAPPY ENDING.. I wanted everyone to leave this thread with a smile😛.
as in the beginning , my heart PANIC, reading the word AKASH AGAIN..😡😡😡

but after reading the FLASH BACK got confused that why Uday took that marriage for only TWO YEARS and m still confuse..
Let's just say I took 2 years because I wanted them to still be young , when she falls for him😉!
MANVEER one night was LOVELY yet Romantic one.. and many more shall come in the future too because now they are ONE!! 😉😉😉 Yep , many , many more will come ... but we won't be reading about that😉😆!

i got worried what if Uday never read that letter..
but thankfully Manyata herself stopped him... She had to!
Poor Uday was found DUMB-FOUNDED.. Poor guy was stunned.
awww!! atleast they deserved one more night in this OS and that too the most romantic one...❤️❤️❤️ Nice try of getting ANOTHER PART from me Safia😆! (not happening)

Jai again left alone..hope either AKASH or JAGAT get her ANAARI.. Who cares about her anyway🤢.

LOL she was a nice fellow yar, don't know why all hate her..I also hate her , she hate her sister because Manyata suddenly took her all space..obviously Anyone if was inplace of Jai would have behaved like she did...🥺 I can understand all that Safia , but she went beyond certain limits of evilness ... where even she lost the line between right and wrong.

Loved the way Manyata burnt that piece of paper that so called DIVORCE PAPER..🤬 Yeah , I loved that too😳.

NAVI, personally and honestly just AMAZING UPDATE...👍🏼 Thanks😳!!!!!!
Keep writing like this..
waiting for ur next OS.. like this one!! Oh dear ... poor me!
Hugss.. Same to you 🤗 .
😊😊😊 SAFIA 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: serat

wowww

really good Os

wowww

Originally posted by: ...navina...