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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing OS 👏👏
reminded me of 'Hum dil chuke sanam' movie😃
once again, true love prevailed in the end😛
majnu was at his worst😡 as always...achcha hua Uday waqt pe pohonch gaya warna😲😆

Thanks for the scrap😃

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

that was simply simply wonderful n wooow!!!

so let me exhibit some words from my mini small insignificant dictionary

the update was

wow

awesome

wonderful

fabulous

beautiful

touching

fantastic

class

faadu

rapchik

fantabulous

mind blowing

lovely

superb

zhakaas

rocking

splendid

outstanding

A+

(sorry if any word is repeated)

i loved it so much navina!!

it was so refreshing to read it!!

thanx fr sucha beautiful os!

loved it in all ways!!

(*ahem ahem* forbidden love)

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wowww,dat wass freaking awesomeee!!!!!!! uday's cndition,i was hoping ki pyar ho jaaye is beech,then wen manyata was still happy wit akash,i was soo disheartened!!! then dta mnaveer night was soo romntic,bt wen dat note flew aways,i dreaded k sad ending to nehi hai is story ka😳😳 bt alls well dat ends well!!!!!!😊😊 loveddd itt,hayee manyata ka wo dialog dat uday is frghetng her,wass soo soo lovelyy!!!!! the last part in the car was superbbb,lovedd it navi,thanks fr the scrap!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

She sat on a rock and stared at the rough sea , the angry waves creating thunderous noises ... bringing an unusual smile to her face. She closed her eyes and relived every moment she ever spent with Uday ... it was finally dawning on her ; what he had come to mean to her!

Best lines of the story 😊

I was just imagining all these scenes..kash serial mein bhi aisa hota!!!

Par koi baat nahi tumne to wo kadr diya!!! ab main bahut kush hu...Haan nahin toh😃

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanx 4 this lovely comment Anju 🤗 ... and thanks for the reminder😉!!!!!!

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

amazing os Navi

Loved it very much

as always ur works are beautifully written

the concept was so nice

Great Job

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

hey barfi jiji
awn the os was super good
aha it was woth waiting
loved it to every bits
it was so good
each time made my heart skip beats
but the end was awesome
thanks for the scraps
hugz

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: htgcute
Hey Navi di...!!!! Hi Harshi
Howz u and ur health???? Both are good😉! ( for the moment anyway😆)

Well wat do I say about the OS... The TRUTH will be awesome!

As usual it was beyond expectations (in a gud way lol)😆... Really?

Luved it from starting to the end... Awww, I'm glad😳.

Don't know how to describe ur work...

It's just fab.. Thank you🤗 .

Sorry for so short comment hehe... I don't mind.

K now I take ur leave...

Bye Bye Dear!

Take care... U 2.

And do keep writing such awesome works..lol

Hugzzz.. To you 2 🤗

Thanks for this lovely comment Harshi 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
hawww that was so awesome navi!!!
Thanks Mahi 🤗
beautifully portrayed each feeling...
Awww😳.

hehe akash ka popat ho gaya

... as always 😉.
smart deal Uday

Banda bohot hi smart hain😳.
oh I really miss the show after reading this...

Me too.
awesome!!!!

Loved the comment Mahi 🤗 .

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Awesome 👍🏼
Loved it loads 😊
Thank you 🤗 .
So glad that Manyata realised her love for Uday 😃

Yep , just in time😉.
Beautifully written 👏

Thanks
Loved everything about this os ⭐️
Thanks for the pm 😊

Welcome for the scrap

Thanks for this sweet comment Humairaa 🤗 .

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