SS--A Beautiful Deception-Chap 3 updated complete

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey frenz I am back...i don't know if anyone missed me or not but i did..i was busy for a few days n thus could not come to IF, and felt like i have been away from this forum from ages😭...Anyways to refresh myself n rejoice i decided to write this SS, which will be another fairy tale story from me after Dark Love Story, that will have a medieval backdrop...So please bear with it and do tell me how it is...Only if you all like it ill start it. Ohh ya one more thing, the story will be different from TDLS n it will be of maximum 4 chapters😊






Prologue:

King Rudraksh and his knights were very powerful in entire Jaigarh kingdom. They being always alert and cautious crimes and criminals never dared to knock at the kingdom's doorsteps. The knights that he had were specially trained for very severe issues just like the detectives of present era. They were all young,brave and chivalrous but never showed themselves in public. Meeting were held every month to discuss the problems and crimes with the king. The state was quite peaceful, with occasional thefts and mishaps which is a part of life until a misfortune happened in the city. A rich, young and handsome gold-miner was very brutally killed. Every one in the city was shocked, and his wife and parents were completely grief stricken. The king had already ordered his soldiers to find the criminal and proper investigation was done, but the city had not been over of that grief when another man was killed mercilessly with his stomach completely cut open.

In the Discussion room:

"I cannot understand what is wrong with this city. Some bad omen or curse has affected our fellow brothers and sisters. People are cursing us for not keeping them safe, and they are right in their way...Its our duty to keep Jaigarh's people safe and sound." the king discussed with all the seven knights. The number seven might be small, but they had the capability of more than thousand soldiers for which they were payed more bundles of gold coins than any other in the King's army.

"I will slay the head of the man and present it in front of you Your Majesty!...Just give me one chance.."...replied Knight Vedanta Singh with strength and responsibility evident in his voice.

"and what if the ruthless killer is a woman?...Will you slay her head even then?" asked Knight Udayveer Singh with a smirk in his face.

Everyone looked with irritation and surprise at him. This was definitely not the time for jokes. King Rudraksh looked sternly at Udayveer and asked him what he meant..

"Your highness, the reports of both the body's examination(postmortem today) says that the man had physical union just before his death. That means he was with a lady, before his death. So what if all these murders are committed by a lady. It can't be a coincidence that every time someone dies, he has an intimacy before that."

Silence prevailed in the room for a few minutes, and it was finally broken by the king's voice

"Be it a man or a woman, mercy will not be granted and he or she will deserve the most brutal death ever!" He roared with anger, and everyone obeyed the command. Udayveer Singh, Vedanta Singh, Arya Pratap, Yudhveer Singh, Suryaakh, Dharmaveer and Akshay Pratap all got up to follow the orders immediately. Mission had started and needed to be accomplished.

Someone laughed loudly and looked at them with piercing eyes,

I will be gone before you know me...You can never catch me as I am the most Beautiful Deception ever!.."




So friends...do tell me how it was only then ill start it😊





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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow thats an awesome prologue.👏..lol is the beautiful deception Manyata😆...lol
continue soon and gargi sry 4 late unres😃
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Originally posted by: htgcute

That was fab gargi di...


Thanks Harshita😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowdream

res

will unres 2mrw gargi😃


alright krishna😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ur welcome gargi di...
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WOW !!!!!!! Awesome Gargi👏. Great start , as usual , our cocky Uday has ALL THE ANSWERS😉! Looking forward to how the knights trap the evil serial-killer! Continue soon, thanks 4 the PM😊.
PS - we missed u 2 😳.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GARGI AWESOME.

I AM READY FOR DIS MANVEER FAIRYTAIL.

DO CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome amazing start gargi
I truly loved it
U have created a mgic already and i am in for this story
Uday is the saviour as always
Continue super soon

Ps:i missed u too being long since we chatted come on gltk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept gargi..
pls do cont this ss.. and dont forget to pm me as well..



~Nimrit~
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Awesome amazing start gargi
I truly loved it
U have created a mgic already and i am in for this story
Uday is the saviour as always
Continue super soon

Ps:i missed u too being long since we chatted come on gltk


hey vampy..how r u?...i missed you so much n really happy to see you here...😃...sure ill come on gtlk tomorrow then...

this concept suddenly popped up in my mind...happy that u liked it😳

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