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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sanah12
Awesome!
Loved it loads!!
The precap is awesome.
Waiting for the next update
Do continue asap
Thanks for the pm.

thanks sanah...glad u enjoyed reading it..😊...ill try to update soon

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: andy.a
wow!! gargi great update...
read the first part as soon as you scraped me, and read the remaining today morning as soon as i got up...

just lovely

loved how uday never lowered his guard even after the murders stopped... thats our brave uday

uday at the party too was great, in modern world he could have been a criminal investigator... he has all the qualities, just intelligent

i agree with what the king said to him about women

his dream just got me captured - saving a damsel in distress and finally that damsel itself killing him, it sounded as a premonition of the events to follow...

now who was that damsel in distress??? was it our "villian"are those bandits her people, was that a set up? a lot of questions are troubling me...

the promo was very good... cant wait to see what happens next

do update soon gargi

and thanks for the scraps and pms

thanks andy..glad u liked it...actually i believe what the king said completely, and thatswhy i wanted to make a story out of it..Uday here is a man of character.😊...well a girl is in distress here and lets see how UV saves her...and as for the premonitions i don't know what will happen as i have not thought of the next chapter...this was my sleepy head writing, and from funny to creepy is what i enjoy making nowadays as i have watched too many horror movies in the past few days...

thanks for the lovely comments🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Hi , comment edited PG10. THANX😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Res 😊.
Amazing update Gargi👍🏼.

Your writing always leaves me speechless!

One thing stood out for me ... and that was Uday's recurring dream. I feel that apart from it being JUST a dream , it might be a premonition!

Now Uday on a horse ... !!! I'm actually watching Savitri right now and rewatching VEER's scene for the 3rd time. So that particular part is so vivid in my mind😉!

Precap is frightening ... I think a murder is going to occur!

Do continue soon,

thanks for the PM😊.

Sorry for the late edit ...

...having horrific net issues😭!

Hey navi...Premonition ha?...how is it that even andy asked me the same thing?😲...you too have started thinking too much alike nowadays?..is that due to the joint FF stuff?😆...anyways...i don't know about premonition but all was done by my sleepy mind as i was writing at the middle of the night and at first when i wanted to make it funny, it ended in getting creepy...m watching too many horror movies nowadays😕...that can be one reason😆

u have already watched UV in savitri?...i watched the epi today and could not get a glimpse of him😭

Your writing always leaves me speechless!---aww thanks dear😳

its alright even if ur late..i understand this net probs are very annoying😡

thanks for the lovely comments🤗

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Hey Gargi 🤗

How are you ?

So this time I AM LATE ... 🤣

I would have commented earlier but i wrote the comment twice and twice the there were power cuts ... 😡

That's irritating ... 🤣

Anyways,

The update was SUPERB !

You wrote it so beautifully !

Your writing gave that ANCIENT FEELING ...

Loved your chapter 😳

Uday on a horse ...

Reminds me of VEER IN SAVITRI ... 😳

He took such a superb entry !

I am going out of track ... 🤣

The last part was ... nice !

Precap is scary !

Is someone being murdered ?

Waiting to read more !

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: pia.raha

ya i jst thought so!!😊😊 tomar 1st line ta pore jkhne tumi "KORE,KORO" ei wrds duto use korecho,then only i thought j these wrds r used by bengalis 😉😉 i am also kolkata's bengali🤗

WOW Pia🤗

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Gargi plz read my quote at 11...😊

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

superb update...uday on a horse wow...i think the lady whom he saved is murderer...i hope i m not right...precap is scary...and thanks for pm...

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: catty2000
Hey Gargi 🤗
How are you ?

So this time I AM LATE ... 🤣
I would have commented earlier but i wrote the comment twice and twice the there were power cuts ... 😡
That's irritating ... 🤣

Anyways,
The update was SUPERB !
You wrote it so beautifully !
Your writing gave that ANCIENT FEELING ...
Loved your chapter 😳

Uday on a horse ...
Reminds me of VEER IN SAVITRI ... 😳
He took such a superb entry !

I am going out of track ... 🤣
The last part was ... nice !

Precap is scary !
Is someone being murdered ?

Waiting to read more !
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !