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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: snowdream
Awesome start gargi...👏👏👏...lol the entry of Manyata was too much well described, and i loved each n every word in it...😊😊😊.. J a singer hunh now thats a change😃...
Uday thinks vedanta would fall in front of beauty but seems like on contrary Uday is the one to fall😆..loved how he teased vedanta...
waiting to know how the story unfolds..continue soon😃

Thanks Krishna😊...Manyata's description made me think a lot😕...so glad that you liked it...yes J, Manyata and their sisters are good in fine arts...yes its Uday who would fall instead of Vedanta...u got it right

Thanks ill try to be fast which is not in my records😆..

Thanks for the grt comments🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
beautiful update gargi...
loved frendship between uday n vedanta.
i cud imaginer uday describe the how the crime must be taking place,to vefdanta with beautiful descriptive language, hand gestures and expressions
loved manyata's description
even J n manyata's relation seems positive.
cant wait for next chap nthe mystery to unfold
this is so magical!
do continue soon. thanx fr pm

Thanks sanju for liking it😊..All the knights are very friendly with each other n Vedanta n Uday being of same age they are more comfortable with each other😊...Uday is too naughty n he can't accept the fact that Ved can kill a woman😆...Manyata is a diffrent kind of beauty n J loves her sister very much...

ill continue soon Sanju...thanks for the lovely comments once again🤗

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

hey gargi nice update

and congrates for new story

concept is quite unique

love uday and manyat

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

@gargi:
u r always welcome. waise end me ManVeer hi hoga na? ya fir tragic ending. like agr manyata khooni hui to use life imprisonment ya fir hang?? to ManVeer nahi ho payega

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Vedanta: So you think only you are the saint when those Apsaras dance in the court and try to seduce you?..i know what naughty thoughts hover in your mind.

Udayveer was really enjoying this...He could see how his friend had a smile on his face and was lost in that beautiful woman's imagination, when all of a sudden it was ruined by the scary Stomach Operation!!

These part is funny!!!

Plzz update soon

Looking forward to read more

The story is getting very much interesting!!!

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Nice Update...uday will never change...u described manyata's beauty so beautifully...i m very excited 2 know who is the killer..? nd thnx for pm..

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Hey... It was very sweet...

Uday is really the warrior...

But here too he does not looses his charm...

Manyata has a really nice family...

And I luv the way u described Manyata's features...

Update soon...

But I din't got the pm...

Pls... pm me nxt tym...

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awesome update
Totally loved it
Loved how u described Manyata
Uday is soo funny with the way he was teasing his friend
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊
👏 ⭐️

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..FARIHA..

@..FARIHA..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

loved the whole chapter
written very nicely
i m very enjoyed
waiting for you next chapter
nice story plz update soon
n thx 4 the pm

Edited by ..FARIHA.. - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Hey Gargi , Great update , awesome start! Loved the convo between the 2 knights. UdayVeer 's name should be KNIGHT KNOW-IT-ALL😆!!!!!! Seriously , he has figured everything out already ... but I bet he's the guy that's going to falter; when the time to carry out his duty , comes!

The description of Manyata was beautiful , u did a superb job there 👏.

Eager to read more ,

do continue soon ,

thanx 4 the PM😊.