ManVeer ff- LAT LAG GAYI ch-14 updated pg34 2/6/14 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

oh my kahise toh jalne ki booh aarahi hai!!
oh wait doesn't it smell like bunny???
hehehhehhehe awesome Anu!!
update soon

mujhe bhi jalne wali booh aa rhi hain ...lol
shayad bunny hi hain ?? btw thnk u soo much ...ya i'll update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
hey dear
thanks for the pm
do continue more often
as i like this ss a lot
awn the man handeler prince
loved the flashback scene
aha jealous uday is super cute uday
i want more of jealous uday hahha
hugzz
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Hey... Anu...
The update was awesome...
I am really happy...
That you made such a long update...
Ahh... Uday is jealous...
And I so like it...
Aww.. J is such a big fan of Uday...
Uday was trying to make Manyata jealous...
But khud hi jal gaya...
I am waiting for the next update...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Hey! anu i'm new hear,
read all 6 updates
its really awesome loved it to the core😃
loved the character of uday & manyata
& thanks for the pm
update soon, eagerly waiting to read further



Edited by Rashmi_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
wooww,udayy is sucesfull in feeding manayta,manveer dat clse scnes were so rmnticc!!!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
love it and j as doctor
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
awesome loved it so much that little scene of manveer and the flashback scene was lovely and wow j a doctor interesting please update soon and thanks for the pm and really sorry for the late reply... now coming to the pm about u stopping the ff please dont stop please continue for those readers who r still interested please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
hey guyzz im so so sorry ...i said that i will be stoping the ff 😭
but now its final that i will not stop it and will continue it ...😕
thanxx to preya_radev , ayesha.behroz , huma12 and fireroad99
thnk u so much guyzz for motivating me to continue this ff ...ur really nice and love u all 🤗❤️
well here is chapter 7 of

RECAP - they reached hotel sea side m comes out of the car and hugs abhi tightly
uv was looking at them but was not happy don't know why but he was not happy
m broke the hug and abi an m sat together at the back
after sitting inside abhi - yo uv bro how were u ??
uv - im cool and how r u
abhi - as usual rocking !!!...oh hey jay long time huh ??
jay - seriously ...happy to see u again !!!!
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uv - so u both know each other ??
jay - ya ...abhi is a good frnd...
uv - but how come u know each other ??
jay - arey abhi use to visit home often ...he is best frnd of di
abhi gave a small cute smile
while uv thought ( he use to visit home often ??? and best frnd of manyata ?? uday kya soch rha hain yrr ?? toh kya hua agar yeh m ka best frnd hain toh ...ek ladka aur ek ladki best frnds ho sakte hain )
he was driving while his ears was behind on m and abhi's conversation
they both were talking so freely sometimes abhi use to pull m's cheeks
sometimes m use to punch abhi's arm ...but uv was not at all comfertable with all that so uv started talking to jay about her work and all
uv - so jay...single or any bf ??
at this time m stoped talking and started listening their talk
jay - no im very much single and says flirtingly ...but im ready to mingle
m 's pov ( had hain ?? meri behen hote hue uv se flirt kar rhi hain ??par isse thodi na pta hain ki uv is my fianc ...nd agar flirt kar bhi rahi hain toh kar do ...mujhe konsa fark pad rha hain ??? han nhi toh ) end of pov
soon they reached mall
they all were going inside when media surrounded them
reporter 1 - manyata aur udayveer ek sath ?? iska yeh matlab hain ki aap dono ki sari problems khatam ho gayi hain
reporter 2 - ya fir ...manyata apne rumored boyfrnd abhinav ke sath ayi hain ...aur udayveer jaynandani ke sath ???
reporter 3 - jaynandani ...aapne last interview jab aapka hospital ka enogration hua tha tab kaha tha u want to be single and want to work hard par kya uv ke charm ko aap resist nhi kar payi ???
all 4 were trying to go in
uv shouts - guards guards
all the guards come and surround them and they all go inside
m - uff this media people ek bar mein inhe samaj nhi ata kya that im not dating abhi ???
abhi - let it be ...come lets go
m - uv vijay bhai and unnati ???
uv - di will just be here in a short while and vijay bhai will also be joining very soon
m - k
just then uv gets a call and he excuses him from there
jay - wow that dress is so beautiful ...
she goes from there to that shop and abhi follows her while m was alone there she was looking around when she spotted someone
she was none other than unnati
manyata goes near her and say - hi unnati how r u ??
un - hey manyata im good what about u ??
m - im fine too
un - where is everyone ??
m - umm ...uv got a call so he is recieving that call and jay and abhi has left for shoping leaving me all alone asap ...
un - don't worry im there na lets go together
m - sure
they were going when m said - so excited ?? for tomorrow
un - actually nervous ...
m - no need to be nervous ..everything will be fine ...waise what should i call u ??? unnati bhabhi ??
un - u can call me that for whole life but till my marriage call me di
m - sure...well we don't know each other very well tomorrow u'll be engaged to my brother ...so lets discover about each other's likes and dislikes ...and all that stuff
they both were busy talking and slecting dresses for each other
they became really good frnds ( i need to show this because un will be cupid for manveer so i need to show chemestry between un and m )
they were coming out of the shop when m say vijay bhai
m - di ...vijay bhai has arrived ...
un - kaha hain ??? she started looking everwhere
m teasingly - seems someone is being desprate for meeting someone ??
un smiling shyly - its nothing like that
then they both goes where vb was standing
m - finally vb aapko time mil hi gaya ...itne bhi kya busy they ki apni engagement ki shoping ka time nhi nikal paye han ??
vb - shant m bhai shant ...ab mein aa gaya hun na ...
m - age gaye toh kya ??? vb aap na bohot change ho gaye ho jabse apne dad ka buisness sambhala hain ...yad hain pehle hum dono bhai milke kitna maza karte they ...kya din they voh ..
at the time uv ...jay and abhi also joined them
vb didn't noticed un
vb - don't worry m bhai ...ab aapka v bhai aa gaya hain ..ab hum dekhte hain humara bhai kaise bore hota hain aur aapko toh pta hain ki hum entertainment hain ...i tell you
uv - mujhe laga tha ki m ladki hain par yaha toh kuch aur hi lag rha hain do bhaiyo ka milan ???
m - toh tumhe kya problem hain han ??? yeh mere bhai hain yeh mujhe jo chahe bula sakte hain
jay realising that there will be a fight very soon as m is very serious about vb and her relation so she thought to change the topic
jay - hey vijay bhai ...how were u ??
vb didn't listened as he was busy staring at un and un busy staring at vjiay
jay and m looked each other with naughty smile
jay shaked vb - han ...kya hua ...are jay bhai ...kaise ho aap
jay - mast ...
m - agar batey ho gayi toh lets continue shopping ??
jay - ya sure
now every one together were shoping
vb - hi un
un - hey vijay
vb - how ...r u
un- good ...acha tell me which lehenga is nice red one or pink one
vb - i think pink one will be nice
there m was confused that what to buy
just then abhi came next to her and say - try this one ??
he gave her a white lenhenga with blue working on it
she took it and went to try it
uv witnessed the whole thing and was not comfortable with it that abhi was slecting dress for m
m came out wearing the lehenga
abhi - wow m ur looking like a princess in white colour ...
uv - no i think m should try this one ...he was having a lehenga of black colour in his hands ...
abhi - par uv dekh na m white pehengi toh pari lagegi ...
uv - but look at her she is already so fair ...no i think wit her skin and complection black will be good
m - guyzz stop fighting ...its my choice i'll slect it
uv left the dress there in anger and went near jay to help her maybe to jealous manyata
all of a sudden uv saw m handing over the lehenga to the staff but it was the one which abhi slected he didn't felt good that she chose abhi over him ..
he came out from that shop
just after 5 minutes everyone else also came out
jay - now its time for a movie
m - ya sure issaq tera has just released so lets go and watch that
vb- m bhai we r not going for your movie and niether for uv's movie lets go a watch an action movie
jay - yuck !!!! no action movie but ya lets go and watch a thriller movie ..
m - no we r not going for any scary movie
jay - aww i just forgot that di is afraid for ghosts like small kids henna ??
vb - jay bhai hum bhi koi thriller movie dekhne nhi ja rhe
jay - we r going and thats final
un - yeah
m - di aap bhi ???
un - i don't know anything and waise bhi majority wins so now we all r going for a thriller movie
all of them forcefully took m and vijay with them
m was sitting in between of vb and abhi
un was sitting beside vb and uv was sitting beside abhi and jay beside uv
vb - hey bhagwan mujhe bacha lena in bhotoh se ( ghosts) m bhai darna mat aapka vijay bhai aapke sath hain !!! ...he said in hesitating tone
m - vijay bhai plzz pareshan mat kijiye ek toh pehle se hi dare hue hain aur upar se aap humare side mein baithe hue hain ...
un - don't worry vijay ...don't be afraid
vb - unnati plzz humare side mein hi rehna ...
and then the movie started ...
vb and m was watching the movie as if ghosts were all around them
when all of a sudden a very scary part came and m burried her head in abhi's chest only then uv saw that...
again after 10 mins very scary part was shown and agin m burried her head but after one minute she was getting goosebumps all over her body
she whispered uday ??
uv smiled a bit - yes ...manyata ??
m looked above and was shocked to see uv in place of abhi
m - uday tum yaha abhi kaha hain ??
uv - abhi said that he wants to enjoy the movie but because of u he is not able to concentrate so i swaped the seats ...
m - don't u want to concentrate on movie
uv - but im fine like this ...just then he thought why did he said this ...
manyata and uv were having eyecontact ..but this time it was a beautiful and sweet eyelock ...
m - uday kya main aise hi reh sakti hun ??
uv - sure
m again burried her face in his chest
but uv was geting distracted because of m ...her breath was caressing his neck very softly
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jay - m di...manyata dii ??? udayveer ??? wake up now plzzz movie is over ...wake up
vijay shook m and uv
m - kya hua ...still sleepy
jay - utho di kab se soo rhi ho
m rubbing her eyes looked around in confusion ...and then she remembered she buried her face in uday's chest and soon she fall asleep ...in his embarace
just then uv also woke up slowly as he opened his eyes he saw m ...unknowingly a smile came to his face ...
jay - u guyzz slept in between of the movie han ??
uv remembered how he was being distracted by manyata...but soon he also fall asleep...
m - voh...voh jay
uv - kuch nhi jay ...m was getting scared so she slept and i was really tired because of work so i also slept ...
while un and vb was having naughty smile of their faces
abhi was hell confused that why were they sleeping embaracing each other ??
vb - come on lets go dad is calling for last 1 hour ...
m - ok lets go she gets up but again she falls on uday
they both looked each other with confusion
they both looked down nd saw m's chain was interwined with uday's button she tried to open the lock but it was not opening
uday also tried but all went in vain
suddenly uday pulled the chain so hard that it broked off
m was so shocked - uday ...tumne meri favourite chain tod di ??
uv - sorry woh alag hi nhi ho rhi thi ...
m gets up and in ager she left
all came out of the multiplex but m was not there
vb called m - m bhai kaha hain aap
m still in angry tone - ghar jaa rhe hain
vb - par akele kaise ??
m- jaise jate hain vaise ...
vb- acha theek hain gussa mat kijiye
m - watever and hunged up the phone
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morning 8pm
manyata woke up
gets fresh and go out there were decoraters all over the house was being decorated for unnati and vijay's engagement
manyata goes to vijay's room and without knocking went inside
but he was not there ...she heard voice of shower from washroom
so she thought of waiting for him untill he comes out
suddenly m's gaze fell on vb's mobile and she remembered how yesterday vb was secretly clicking un's pic when she was trying up the dresses
she picked up his phone and started looking at the pics with naughty smile ...
vb was out till then - yeh humare phone ke sath kya kar rhi hain aap ???
m showed him his phone whoch were flashing un's pic - ab bolo kya bol rhe the vijay bhai ...socho agar meine yeh pics unnati ko dikha di toh ??? kya sochegi voh ???
vb - give me back my phone now warna...warna
m - warna kya han vijay bhai
vb - varna hum dad aur giri uncle ko aapki aur uv ki video footage dikha denge jo humne kal rat record ki jab aap dono ek dusri ki bahon mein so rhe the aur socho yeh dekh kar giri uncle kya sochenge ...
m - sochenge toh tab na jab dekhenge ...vijay bhai ur such a dhakkan...
and she starts running all over his room
and vb was running behind m ...
m goes out of room and was running in whole house
brij - subha hui nhi ki dono ki ladai shuru ho gayi
komal - aree koi bat nhi dekhiye na kitne dino bad dono itne khush hain ...brij - manyata ..vijay taiyar ho jayiye giri un aur uv ate hi honge ...
m while running only says - kyu ...engagement toh sham mein hain na
brij - han lekin voh log sham tak yahi rahenge aur yaha hi taiyar honge function ke liye ...
m - ane toh do uss halkat vede yede ko kal rat mera favourite chain tod di thi na aaj usse hi todd dungi han nhi toh ...
and then she rans out in garden ...and vb after her
vb- m bhai ruko ...
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to be continued ...
precap - engagement party nd fun ...
plzz do like and cmmnt if u liked it and a request to all silent readers plzz if u like atleast hit a like button and sorry for any spelling mistake

love anu
Edited by anu1299 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Thank God tune update kiya Anu nahi toh aaj mein tera khoon hi karne wali thi han nahi toh!!!
Itna acha likhti hai!!!
Acha who sab chodo thank u for the update!!
Bahot fun tha!!
Yes is bunny ki jealousy ko dekh kar bada maja aa raha hai!!!
Update soon
and yes IM FIRST TO COMMENT YIPIEE
Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Awesome update...👏

Loved it...
Thnks 4 d pm..

N thnks fr continuing d work...

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