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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
awsssmmm saba thankx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Thanx all of u... Feeling really very happy 😃 😃 😃
Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
good episode byt very less manveer scenes plzzz update next prt quickly with lots of manveer scenes
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
New character sketch:
Yuvraj karanveer singh:yuvraj of pratabgardh ...cousin brother of uday.uday hates him..and he loves that..he can do any thing for making uday jealous..and has crash on manyata since childhood

http://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-Mdz4SqU8z-s/UC8Rys1jnaI/AAAB7k/L88aMYNHmA0/s640/30192-karan-singh-grover.jpg&imgrefurl=http://pixwallpaper.blogspot.com/2012/08/karan-singh-grover-sexy-hunk.html&usg=__H7X7VgL1aX96VKKCSIK4EWH8Cz0=&h=399&w=600&sz=51&hl=en&start=6&zoom=1&tbnid=JzBbY_qlYYzmeM:&tbnh=90&tbnw=135&ei=Q8RcUdOWBunj4AOLlYCwBA&prev=/search%3Fq%3Dkaran%2Bsingh%2Bgrover%2Bhot%26hl%3Den%26sa%3DX%26biw%3D1366%26bih%3D618%26site%3Dimghp%26tbm%3Disch&itbs=1&sa=X&ved=0CDYQrQMwBQ
Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
CHAPTER9
in j's room
u:may i come in?
j:que aye ho jalaipe namaak chirakhnai
U:j..tum mujhai aise kaise kah saakti ho..mai to ye saapnai maibhi nahi soch sakta ki tum hai choot puchau...after all you are my only sali
J:tum hai mari feelings ki toh kabhi kadar hi nahi ki..tum hai toh baas manyata ki pari rahti hai.
with a smaile u:que rahna nahi chahiya after all she is my would be wife
J:tum nai kabhi humara payaar tum harai liya dikha hi nahi
U:or kabhi dek khungga bhi nahi..mai toh bass tum hara haal dekh nai aya tha..or tum apna bakwass soro kardi(with irritation)..waise apni bahaan ko toh tum nai dekha nahi..so pahlai sehi warning daidati hu be carefull..que ki ussai dekh kai kahi senseless ho gaye toh😊
J gets confussed and uday leaves the room
after sometime uday's phn starts ringing
U:hello,akash.
a:jee sir voh mai isse liya phn dia tha ki aj mr.mittal kai saath meeting hai
U:oh yeah..thnx..am coming
A:ok sir
uday cuts the call.uday is thinking janaise pahlai princess se millaitai hai
on the other hand
manyata towel pahan kaihi bathroom sai bahaar ati hai or tabhi uday without knocking ander atahai.both are shocked but uday is amazed also...
m:knock karkai nahi asaktai thai kya??
coming back to reality u:tum darwaja lock nahi kar sakti thi kya??
m:mujhai thorina pata tha ki tum ajaoge
U:sookar manao ki mai thi warna koye or hota toh
M:agar tum humai aise dek saktai ho toh bakilogo nai kya kasoor ki hai??
U:aise batai karna chordo queki tum hai aise dekh nai ka haak srf or srf mera hai
m:que??
u:is que ka jawaab bohaat jald mil jayegi..and by the way mujhai laga ki tum kapro mai bohaat khubsoraat lagti ho..par i was wrong tum toh kaprokibina or bhi jaya da khubsoorat lagti ho and smirks
manyata blashs
u:of tum kya humai marnaiki plan banaya ho..joh blash karrahi ho
m:uday tum kya issi liya aye thai
U:humai bhaganai ki itni jaldi kya hai??
m:que ki mujhai kaprai pahannai hai
u:toh pahanlo na..humnai thorina roka hai again smirks
Angrly m:uday...
u:ok baba..mai toh tum hai bye bolnai ayai hai..kaal miltai hai princess
M:ok
u:bass ok..or kuch nahi
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~precape:manveer first kiss
Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
yay me first ...🥳
res

unresd...

ooyyee hooyyyeee..
kya update hai..😉

awesum..👏👏
loved it..👍🏼👍🏼

precap seems inetresting n romantic..😳😉
do cont soon..
n thnks 4 d pm...😃
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awesome updates!
Read it in one go.
Loved it!
Do continue soon n thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Hey very nice upat
new character is tooo gud ksg
and that towvel scen made my day 😉
u r a nice writer continue soon
cant wait for their first kiSS 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
all my comments unresd on pg 8 9 10...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
oyehoyye what a prt i loved now waiting for next prt

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