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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Wow awesme update saba realy to gud i love it...
Thanx fr pm n cntinue soon

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

chapter 5 n chapter 6 are...

Awesum..👏👏

Amazing..👍🏼👍🏼

loved them...❤️

do cont soon...

n thnks 4 d pm...😃

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

comment for chapter 3 (2) edited on pg 5...😳

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

CHAPTER7
in manyata's room..manyata opens her cupboard..there are many kinds of dress..mayata is thinking
m:mai kya ya short dress pahanlo...ya nahi..yaha pai saabh hi to sarees or kamiz pahnee hai mai kya karo..ak kamkarti ho yah anarkali sut hi pahan lati ho..
in the hall..giriraj,unnati bhi hai..when manyata comes
m:good morning
everyone:good morning(with a smaile)
ds:ayea beta..baithia..manyata bathti hai..manyata feels uneasy becoz she doesn't know giriraj and unnati..ds understands it..
Ds:beta inse melia yahai apke uncle jaigardh ki maharaj giri and her daughter rajkumari unnati..pointing towords uday or yahai jaigardh k honewalai maharaj, yuvraj udayveer singh
manyata is shocked
m:ya yuvraj hai...
u:que koye shaak..
with a smaile m:nahi..
ds:chalia ander chaltai hai baschoko kuss der akailai baath karnai detai hai..elders leave..
u:so..princess aap hum a yuvraj sunkai itnai shocked que hoya..
m:aise hi..
u:bataea na
m:que k abh samajhme aya tum itne roup que jhar tethai...
u:u are too mean..mai roup kaab jharah..or by the way aap toh princess hai apko patabhi nahi tha or aap nai j ko thapper mar dia??
manyata confused ho jati hai or unnati and j shocked..
unnati and vijay bhai:what??u slapped j..really
m:ya j kon hai..
U:uss din cafe mai jisseh thapper mara tha..
m:usska naam j hai
vb:nahi uskah naam rajkumari jainandini hai
M:to vo rajkumari hai...kahaki rajkumari hai
uday and unnati:toh aap abhitaak unse nahi melli hai..
M:nahi
vjai,unnati,uday pass smaile to eachother

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Wow gr8 update...
Manveer scene so cute n nice
so sad fr manyta ko pata nahi hai ki jay uski choti sis hai karke... Awesme update dear
thnx fr pm n cntinue soon

Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

res ..😊

me second...🥳🥳

unresd...😃

lovely update..👏👏

Bechari manyata ho shock laga..

Uday yuvraj hai yeh jaan ke...😆

usse aur bhi bada shock lagega..

Apni choti behen ko dekhke...😉

do cont soon..

n thnks 4 d pm..😃

Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago

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huma

@huma12.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awsssmmm manyata tu gaye usay abhi tak nahi pata that jai is her younger sisi

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesome loved all the prts

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Saba khan

@sabakhan16

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

CHAPTER 8
M:tum saabh aise que react karrahai ho..
u:que ki..j tum hari apni choti bahaan hai..
m:what??
u:yes...waise maito j kai barai mai soch rahi thi..jabh usse pata chalega toh uski kya halat hoge..poor j...right vijaybanna
vb:right..and both
laugh..
Un:aap dono ko "j" ki bari fikar horahi hai..
U and vb:aisa kuch nahi hai..hum toh bass aisehi
M:aise maath darao..uskai barai mai kuch batao na
vb:o bohaat jayada jiddi hai..or waise bhi usse tum kuch khass passand nahi ho..
M:jidde hai yea mujhai bhi pata hai..par usse mujse kya prob hai
Vb:kya hai na use ud..
U:kuch insaan hotahi aise hai ki dosro ki ciz pasaand atai hai..or usse pane kai lya uskaih aslee hak der ko nafraat kar tai hai..
m:par mai toh uski apne bahaan ho..
Vb:tum hai lakta hai issai ushai koye farak parta hai..
m:mai ushai bulla k lata hoo..
U:pagal ho kya??vo ghayal sharni hai abhi uske paas jaoge toh vo tum hai jinda nigaal laige..uskah gussah tandah honai do vo khud hi ajayegi..
A maid comes
m:gustaki maaf yuvrajsa raajmata nai aapko apnai cabin mai bolaya hai..
u:aap jaiyea hum atai hai..
maid leaves..
U to everyone
U:hum abhi atai hai..
uday leaves..
In the cabin..
ds:o ha que kharai hai ander ayea beta..
uday enters..
u:kuch kaam tha dadisaabh
Ds:haan beta..bohaat imprtnt kaam tha..
U with confusion:kiss barai mai..
Ds:aapki shaadi kai barai mai..
U:humari shaadi..
ds:haan..apki shaadi..aapko toh pata hai hi k manyata kiss haal mai palibari hai.ushai rajparivaar ki tortarikai nahi atai..or "j" unhai sabh ata hai..hum yahi janna chahtai hai ki aap kya chah taihai
U:ds aapko toh pata hai na ki hum bachpan sai hi manyata ko hi aapne honewali biwi samjha hai..or rahi baath "j"ki voto halat ki majhbori thi..
Ds:toh??
U:humai manyata sai koye problem nahi hai..
with a smaile ds:humai aapse yahi ummeed thi..

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago