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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER10
In the night
Uday in his room thinking about manyat..
uday to himsalf:not fear nah princess..tum toh meri nindh hi choralia hai...of mujse toh rahahi nahi jarah
Unnati:dada aap abhi tak soya nahi
u:nahi bho neendh nahi arahi hai
un:que?koye tension ki baath hai kya?office mai kuch hoya hai kya?
U:nahi aisa kuch nahi hai baash bho..
un:bho kya?
u:kush nahi?
un:dada..aap humai nahi batayange kya?
U:vo..mai baas manyata ki barai..
Un:ohho..manyata and all hah..😃😃
u:jaisa tum soch rahiho waisa kuch nahi hai
un:toh kaisa hai..the greatest yuvraj udayveer singh kisi larki kai barai mai soch rahahai..
U:toh ismai konsi baari bath hai
un:ismai yah baari bath hai ki..aap pahli baar kisi larki kai barai mai soch rahai thai
U:toh
un:toh aap maan que nahi latai ki aapko manyata sai payer hogaya hai
u:aisa kuch nahi hai..sumjih
un:aisa hi hai or ya bath aap jitna jaldi accept karlangge utnahi assa hoga
u:bohaat raat ho choki hai..jakai so jaia
Un:good night dada..wish u have some sweet manyata dreams..
U:choti...
Unnati smailes and leaves
In the moarning..
Jai comes to meet her jiji..
With a smaile j:may i come in?
m:yes come in
j sees manyat and is shocked
j:tum yaha??or jiji kaha hai
m:bho j mai...
vijay bhai comes
Vb:what happened?
j:yea larki palace mai kaise aye or jiji kaha hai??
hearing this vb starts laughing..but then he controls himself..and says:yahi toh hai rajkumari manyata kumari
J with disbelive:what??yah kaisai ho saakh tahai..mai nahi manti
vb:manti toh maibhi tumhai aapna bahan nahi ho par issah kya farak parah hai waisahi tum harai time mabhi koye faraakh nahiparai ga...
m:j..jo huwa bho saabh past tha..hum saabh bhul kai ek naye sorooyat kar tai hai..
J:humai nahi kar na koye naye sorooyat...hum nahi mantai tum hai aapni bahaan...or kabhi manungga bhi nahi..
saying this she leaves
manyata gets upset
vb:arai manyata bhai otoh hahi asi. uskai liya upset maat ho..plz
m:vijai bhai maine kabhi nahi socha ki mera bhi koye choti bahaan hogi..mujhai hamaisa sai ek choti bahaan chahia thi..or ab jab mili toh o mujsai nafrat kar ti hai
Vb:tum fikaar math karo mai ek bohaat assi si lar ki jo tumhai bohaat pasand karti ho unsai shaadi karlunge ..tab tum hai bhi bahaan miljayegi..assa idea hai na...
M:hmm..
vb:oh shit..mujhai kuch kaam hai.mai chalta ho..
he leaves..
uday comes..
seeing vb in the hall
U:good morning vijai banna
vb:morning..
u:toh manyata apnai kamrai mai hai
Vb:haan but thari si upset hai
with worry u:que?kya hua ussai?
vb:j mili thi...
u:patah nahi j ki prob kya hai...princess ki khusi kabhi dekh hi nahi pati..by the way..mai manyata sai milkai ayu..
vb:😊
Uday goes to manyata's room
manyata is crying..
u knocks and says:may i come in
Apni asooh pouch kai m:sure😊
uday noticed the tears
u:tum rorahi thi
m:nahi toh mai que royunggi
u:jhoot maat bolo
m:uday plz force mat karo
u:okay then chalo humarai saath
m:kaha..
u:date par
😊 M:tum hai line marnai k elawa or kuch nahi ata kya
u:nahi😔
m:waise humlog ja kaha rahai ha..
u:hummari hotel..hotel uday niwas
m:toh hotel uday niwas tum hara hai...shit hum us hotel k under janai ki kitnah shokh tha par bho kharoos maneger under janaihi nahi daita tha
u:toh abh chalo
m:par dadisabh..
u:hum nai permission lairakkha hai
m:really
u:really
m:toh tum jao hum ready ho kai atai hai
u:abhi nahi shamko
m:yahi toh ready hona hai na..or waisai bhi mai larki hoo..mujhai ready honai mai waakt laagh tahai
U:😊
Uday leaves
In the evening...manyata comes out from her room.she is wearing a yellow suth..she is looking very beautiful..
u:shall we?
manyata nods in affermation
they are in the car
u:looking nice but not better than yesterday
manyata blashs and he smailes
they reach the hotel...
maneger comes there to wellcome them..
maneger:wellcome sir..
uday:thnx
manyata:kaha tha na ki mai ek din jaroor is hotel mai guss kai dekkhaungi..dek aj is hotel ki malikh hi hummai laikai ayahai
Maneger feels embrassement as well as uday
u:manyata under chalai
m;haan haan chalo mujhai bara bhookh lagi hai
U:😊
They reach their table
And sit their respective chair.uday orderes the food..
m:or kitna waaqt lage ga..😔
U:thora sa or..
m:mujsai nahi horaha..
u:umm.. Then let's dance
m:paagal ho kya..
u:offo..agar dance karo gai toh bhook pai dhayan nahi dogai
m:then ok
U:😊
Uday plz starts the music and the music starts


Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi
sakte
Tere bina kya
vajoodh
mera ..
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chaina bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


Uday manyata ko aapni karib lata hai or manyata bhi uday k akhoon mai khoye hoye hai..and uday manyata ko kiss karna sorooh karta hai..first uday kiss her lower lip and then uper manyat also kiss him back uday is explored her almost every corner of her mouth...uday is thinking i feel like i'm in heaven...but suddenly she realises what is going on..so she breaks the kiss...coming back to reality...uday realised what he has done..

cappy end
hey sorry for all kind of mistakes😔
Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
update next prt soon waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Nice updat
love the first kiss of manveer
plsss continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Wow nice update...
Uday n manyata first kiss love it... Thanx fr pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
CHAPTER11
M:uday chalo...humai ghar jana hai
U:par..
m:par war kuch nahi..hummai jana hai matlab jana hai
U:fine..par pahlai kha kuch kha laite hai
m:nahi hummai nahi khana apko khana hai toh khalijia
u:kya hoya princess kuch der pahlai to bara bhook lagi thi aab kya hoya aisa kaya khali ya..
m:uday..tum aapna baakwaas bandh kar k chalogai yea hum driver ko call karai
u:nahi hum chal rahai ha
they reach
u:good night...
Manyata leaves
u:arai...good night bhi nahi kaha😔
J:toh kya howa k usnai nahi kaha..hum kahtai haa..good night my and only my prince charming
uday smirks
u:tumhara prince charming hone sai assah hai ki mai kisse ka prince charming na banu
J:uss mai asa kya hai jo tum ussai shadi kar sakh tai ho or mujhai nahi..uskai pass mujsai jaya da devgardh hai..or kuch nahi..agar tum chaho obhi merai pass hoga..toh kue karna chatai ho ussai shadi.jabki ussai tumhari kadar bhi nahi hai
U:ho gaya..toh soonno mujhai tum hari baakwaas nahi sunna toh plz ayenda sai tumhara ye baakwaas merai saamnai soro karna..yarna assa nahi hoga
uday leaves
vb:aww..j uday daanta..umm..bora uday😃
j:shut up..vijai bhai shut up..or jaiye yaha sai
vb:mujhai yaha raahnai me koye dilchaastfi bhi nahi hai
and he leaves
j:dekhlena manyata mai tumhai aise hi saabsai alag kar dungi jaise tumnai mujhai kiya saabh sai😈
uday in his room
unnati comes
un:toh kaisa tha aap ka or manyata ka date
u:yaad na dilao to assa hoga
Un:que??kya hua?
u:ussai hi poncho
un:mujhai pata hai aapnai hi kuch kiya hai
u:maine kuch nahi kia
un:aap hi nai kia
u:toh aisa kya gaalat kia..aapne hi mangetar ko kiss karna gaalat thorina hai
un:aapne unhai kiss kia
u:han😔toh usmai boora kya kia bolo
un:kuch assa bhi nahi kia..unhai thorina yaadh hai ki aap unki mangetar ho
u:toh aabh mai kya karo..
un:mujhai kya paata apnai problem creat ki hai aphi solve karangge
she leaves..
promo
uday gets jealous
Karanveer comes
uday and manyata's dance

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
res😉

thnks 4 d pm..
jaldi unres karungi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
veery small but. i liked it update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Nice updat but thoda chota tha
wating for jelous uday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
really goood uday is so cute when he said
han😔toh usmai boora kya kia bolo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Superb update!
Loved it!
Do continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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