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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
CHAPTER12
IN THE MORNING
Manyata wakes up...when she opens her eyes,she sees flower buckets are filled the whole room...she is amazed by seeing such a beautifull thing..and wondering who have done it...
when she is thinking,her phn rings...she received it
p:good morning...princess
m:uday
U:yeap..que kisi or ko soch rahi thi
m:at least tum hai nahi soch rahi thi...
U:really??
m:really..
u:you are so mean
by the way aapko hummara gift kaisa laga??
m:konsa gift?
u:buckets wala
m:yea buckets tum nai laye
u:lagta hai aapko passand aya hai
m:aisa kuch nahi hai...baas ascha tha
U:kon mai?
m:off..flowers..but que bhejja??
u:bho..kaal raat ki lia...
manyata is silent
U:hey..sorry..plz maaf kardo..plz
m:ok but pahle promise karo ki aisa pher kabhi nahi karo ge
u:um..hm.. nahi mai aisa promise kar saakti ho ki tum harai marji k baagar aisa nahi karonga..par kabhi nahi..no thats impossible
m:or meri marji bhi impossible hi hain..han nahi to
u:waise kaal bhi aap hummai rooka nahi tha..smirks embarrassingly m:haan...par mai han bhi toh nahi kaha
u:haan..par aap.
m:baas aab mujhai bhook lagi hain bye...
and she disconnect the call
uday with a smaile bye..
Manyata alone having her breakfast when a maid comes and says
Maid:gustakhi maaf..rajrumai shaab..rajmata nai aapko breakfast khaatam karnai k baadh..hall mai bolaya hai..
m:jee dadisaabh ko kahiya hum arahai ha..
maid leaves
Atter sometimes manyata goes to the hall
ds:sorry ds..bho raat ko late soye thi..par meri koye kasoor nahi thi..bho uday k...
ds:it's ok beta..ayea yeaha..inse milia yea hai pratabhgardh k yuvraj,yuvraj karanveer singh..and also cousin brother of unnati and uday
m:hi
and gives her hand for handshake and karan takes her hand and kiss her hand...manyata feels uneasy but as she doesn't want to creat a seane by removing her hand ..so she smails...excetly then uday comes and sees it...he is shocked by seeing karan and manyata's beheviour towords him...for unknown reason he feels someone hitting him...ds sees uday
ds:uday beta aap waha que kharai hai yeaha ayeyeah
Uday goes there
u: morning ds
ds:morning beta..dekhiye kon ayahai
With a heavy tone u:jee ds dekha hai
Ds:aap log baath kijiyea or manyata beta aap humarai saath ayea
m:jee dadisaabh
Ds leaves
With a smaile
m:bye karan..
k:bye..hope we will meet soon
and winks at uday
u:princess aap ka bye kahna hogaya hoi to jayea
m:uday..tum aise que..
u:hum dono baadh mai baath karengi...ok princess
m:ok
and she leaves
k:hi bro..
u:hi bye choro or kaho que aye ho
K:tum hai to pata hi hai hum que aye hai but pher bhi aapki shanti k liye manyata se milnai...sona tha bohaat khubsoraat hai...par dek k laagrahahai..galat sona tha...saabsai khubsoorat rajkumari hai yuvrani manyata kumari
u:aap na muh baand raakh or princess ka naam bhi apne muh sai maat nikaal
when komal comes
komal:karan aap kabh aye..or ghar mai saabh thik hai na
uday stops hearing komal's voice
k:jee aunty..saabh asse hai
komal:toh yeaha que??
k:que nahi asaakta kya..sarf uday k liyahi yea ghar khula hai
k:aisa nahi hai mera kahnai kamatlab que special waja
k:haan aunty kolam kise sai kuch apna lena tha..staring at uday.and uday understands that she means manyata..and feels killing him
komal:to beta kaha thahar rahai aap
k:hotel mai..actually pratabhgardh palace mai akelai rahnai me assa nahi laag ta..😔
U:saaf saaf kahta que nahi hai ki daar laagta hai
k:aunty komal plz isse kahiyea k hummai koye daar nahi laagta
u:daarpok daarpok karan daarpok
komal:uday kya bach cho kitarha behave kar rahihai aap..or karan hummari hotai hoye aap hotel mai rahange..nahi aap yeaha rahange
K:par
komal:par war kuch nahi..
u:a..aunty komal
actually mai isse liye aya k karan ko lai jasakai hummarai saath..dad ka order tha..hope you understand
karan understands that aisa kuch nahi hai..kisi koto patha bhi nahi tha ki bho anewala tha..specially jaigardh maito kisi ko bhi nahi..pharbhi he says nothing
komal:it's ok beta..
u:hum dono chaltai hai..bye
K:bye aunty komal
komal:bye
CHAPPY ENDS...
SORRY FOR ALL KINDS OF MISTAKES
Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Wow nice update
do pm me n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
shruts di
dis is cheating
humesha aap first comment karti ho..
n main second...😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
love jealous uday nd chaapy was nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Hey it was nice
uday was so jelous
Plls in next updat more of manveer
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
An awesome update. Loved it!
Do continue soon and thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
chapter13
they have arravied at jaigardh palace...
when they entered giri and unnati was surprised
u abd g:karan...
With a smaile:good morning uncle giri and unnati
gand u:morning
g:aap kaab ayai?
k:yahi kuch der pahlai
g:ayea baithia
they all sit
g:toh kaam kaise chaal raha hai
k:assah..
g:voh toh chalai gahi aap jo shambhal rahai hain
Karan smailes and
Un:aap dono ka hogaya toh hum kuch puchain
k:yeabhi kuch puchnai wali baath hai
With a sad face😔:toh itnai saalon baath aapko hamari yaadh aye??
k:yaad toh hamaisha hi ata ha par kaam ki wajai se anahi paye
un:oh karam tum ja kaab rahai ho??
g:unnati yea kaisa sawaal hai??aap dosro sai kaise baath kia jata hai bhool gaye ho kya?
un:bho dad..mai to baas..
k:uncle..it's ok..kuch kaam hai khataam ho janai kai baadh chale jayenge
Un:means aap kaam hi karougai😔
K:nahi...sairf kaam to nahi karange??
un:toh??
k:lets have fun..
un:how?
k:kahi bahar ghum nai chaaltai hai
Un:umm..han dada aaj ak naya restruant khalnai walai hai..waha chalai
k:ok..what say bro?
u:nahi mujhai kuch kaam tha..or waise bhi yea opening ceremony bhi dad handle karnai walai thai
K:don't say so?mai thorina rooj rooj ata hoon...plz na?
un:haan dada..plz
g:haan uday jayea...karan itni deeno badh aye hai..or aap aisa kaar rahai han
u:par dad..
g :parwar kuch nahi
u:ok..
k:then mai devgardh palace mai bhi kaah deta hon
With confusion u:que?
k:manyata k liya..uskai bina thori na jayen gai..
u:ussai mai bulalunga..thik hain?
k:nahi..tumhai toh kaam tha na..tum kaam khataam karlo...manyata ko mai bulalunga
g:haan uday tum kaam khataam karlo
Uday is about to leave
k:hey bro...udaynewas ja rahai ho na then plz mera samaan laiaana
u:ok
uday in her mind:humh..princess ko plan k barai mai kaahnai k liya toh jaah sak ta hai par apna saman nahi laa saak ta..or princess bhi..humai to kiss kiya tab world war soro kar diya or karan jaab kiya toh smaile..
IN DEVGARDH PALACE
manyata to herself:bho samajh ta kya hai haan..kisi k bhi saamnai humarai saat aise wartaabh karai ga...
A voice comes
k:hey upset ho kya?
m:karan..tum??
k:haan mai..que kisi or ko socha tha??
m:nahi aise koye baath nahi hai...tum bataon que aye??
k:bho kya hai na hum soch rahai haiki kahi bahaar ghumnai chalai
m:kaha?
k:uday ka new reastaurant
m:uday nahi araha hamarai saath
k:haan araha hai
m:toh uday ko bulana chahiye tha na??
K:chahiye toh tha...maine kaha bhi tha par vo nahi mana..
m:toh humai bhi nahi jana..
k:yahi toh uday chahta tha..
m:matlab?
k:tum nahi jaoge toh bho kisi bhi hot larki kai sath flirt kar saak ta hai..tum jaoge toh aisa thori na hoga
m:to hum kaabhh usai flirt kaarnai kai liye roka...joh aaj rokaangge
k:par ushai toh tum harai saamnai assah baankai rahna hai
m:toh mujhai kya karna chahiye..
k:hum ek saath chalengge..or tum aise act karna ki tum hai ussai koye faarak nahi paarta hai..tabh ussai paata chalai ga kaisa lagta hai koye unnotice karai to
m:tum thik kah rahai ho...
k:then shaam ko miltai hai...mai jakai dadisaabh sai permition lekai ata hon
m:ok
~~~~~~~~~~~
SORRY FOR NO MANVEER😔😔😭

Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
yaay res..😉
unresd..
again me first..🥳

yippee

Awesum update dear..👏👏

loved it..👍🏼

Par mujhe laga ismein Manveer hoga..

no worries
agla epi pura Manveer par dena..😉

n thnks 4 d pm...😃😃
Edited by princessSonia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
I hate karan
i hope mistunderstanding na ho
updat was nic
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
CHAPTER14
uday is waiting for manyata in devgardh palace...but she is not coming..he is fed up now.so he decides to ask a maid about manyata
u:manyata se jakai kahiya ki hum ayehai
M:gustakhi maafyuvraaj jee...rajkumari jee toh yuvraj karanveer kai saath gaye hai
when uday hears it he feels she is losing his princess...he wants to kill karan becoz he is the reason for his condition.if he is not here,manyata will never leave him like this...he is driving his car.he has a lot of questions..he wants to ash why
is his own princess doing this with him...he feels helpless...
he reachs his new resturant...the resturant is named manveer(manyata&udayveer) resturant by him...but now he is feeling the manveer means manyata&karanveer
He enters...he sees karan is talking with a girl who wears a short pink color backless dress and looking very hot.all the boys who present there looking at her.he can't sees her face..but it doesn't matter..now he just wants to see his princess..he sees unnati aslo there..he is thinking where is his princess??so he goes to karan...when he reachs he is shocked.he sees the hot girl is manyata...manyata is wearing this:
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karan sees uday
k:hey bro,sit...
uday sits looking at manyata
manyata feels shy...
u:princess u are looking beautiful
m:thnx
k:beautiful toh lagegahi...dekhna parega na kiskai saath ayehai..
u:nah...dekhna paraiga na kis ki princess hai
k:not bad..by the way lets dance
m:ok
they starts dancing...
uday goes there
u:karan tumhara hoh gaya toh shall i dance with her??
k:yeah..sure bro
they starts dance...the song starts
Ho tere ishq mein doobarahe
Din-raat yunhi sada
Mere khwaab se aankhein teri naa hoye juda
Mera naam tu haathon peapne likhe baar haan
Aye kaash ke aisa bhi din laaye woh Khuda
Tu hi mera mera mera [x8]
(u:tum aise kaise hum mai bina bataye chalai aye...hum tum harai liya wait kaar rahai the na??
m:par karan ne kaha tumhai kuch kaam tha ki tum bg ho..tum harai paas humarai liye time nahi hain?😔
U:karan ne kaha or tumnai maanliya??
m:haan..bho tum hara bhai hai bho tum hai jayada asche tarha jaan tai hai..
U:tum hain asa laga kaise k humarai pass tum harai liya time nahi hai...how could u?
and he leaves the dancefloor...manyata is still standing there with confusion
Karan goes to manyata
k:what happened??
M:tum...mai tum hari jaise giri hoye insaan ajtaak nahi dekhi...tum aap nai bhai k saath aisakaise kaar saakh tai ho?
k:manyata..tum jase sooch rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hain
m:baas..humai or kuch nahi sunnah
unnati comes
u:what happened?? Dada itnai gussai mai que chalai gaye??
m:karan se pucho
K:maine kya kiya?
u:manyata short cut mai baatao
m:uday hum par gussa ho gaya hai
u:yea baath hain...tum fikar maat karo...dada tum sai jayada der taakh nahi naaraj nahi rahai ga..beleave me
Manyata nods in affermation...
promo
uday's confession about his love
Manveer romance
~^~~~~^~~~~^~~~~^~~~~
SORRY FOR ALL KIND OF MISTAKES
Edited by sabakhan16 - 12 years ago

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