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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am new here...i am a big fan of manveer and I want to write a ff .I am going to write a manveer ff...hope everyone will like 😊 😊 😊
INDEX
CHAPTER1-PAGE1
CHAPTER2-PAGE2
CHAPTER3-PAGE4&5
CHAPTER4-PAGE6
CHAPTER5-PAGE7
CHAPTER6-PAGE7
CHAPTER7-PAGE8
CHAPTER8-PAGE9
CHAPTER9-PAGE10
CHAPTER10-PAGE11
CHAPTER11-PAGE12
CHAPTER12-PAGE13
CHAPTER13-PAGE14
CHAPTER14-PAGE15
CHAPTER15-PAGE16
CHAPTER16-PAGE19
CHAPTER-17-PAGE21
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hie dear, (big smile)
welcum 2 Dek forum...(hugs)
n MANVEER LAND...
bdw m sonia.

new manveer ff (thumbs up)
New works on manveer r always welcum...
jaldi post karo...
n plz pm me...
hope u make many new friends...

ps. () mey ke emoticon imagine karlo...
sorry... :-(

sorry bohot simple comment hai..
bt mobile se onl9 hu na isliye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch yuvraj udayveer singh:a very handsome,cunning,dashing,arrogant boy.Seeing him once any Girl can fall in love with him. He is the yuvraj of jaigardh.son of maharaj giriraj and maharani vashundhara.He has a sister named unnati.He is very... moody. yuvrani manyata:yuvrani of devgardh and would be maharani of jaigardh.grand daughter of rajmata mrinalini devi and daughter of maharaj brijraj and maharani komal. Was kidnapped by murali. monia:a sweet girl.she is very beautiful.lives in her fairy land.she thinks she loves akash .she is manyata but doesn't know about it. Rajkumari jainandini:a spoiled princess.loves uday a lot and hates manyataa lot. Akash varma:a middle class but an honest anda hard working boy.He does not love monia. murali: watchman of devgardh rajparivar.his daughter was killed by maharaj brijraj.sothat he kidnapped manyata.He wanted to kill manyata but seeing manyata's face,he couldn't do it.now he is fighting with cancer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue:
Murali and doctor... murali:doctor saab merai pass or kitne din hai. doctor:dekhia mai apko koie jhooti ummid dena nahi chahti.apk pass jayada din nahi hai. hearing this murali gived the doctor his fees and went to his chwal.he was upset not because of his cancer.Because of monia.if he die,monia will be alone.he talked with akash but he said he couldnot marry monia because he loved chikki.he is getting restless thinking about if he die then how will monia live...a voice says that send her to her family.it will be best for her.murali:nahi.. The voice:tumharai pass or koye rasta nahi hai.Akbar farse sochlo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter one ak larka so raha hai.achanak se phone bajne laga.vo larka phone utha ta hai...person:whr r u uday beta? uday:dad,vo vo hum office k kush kaam kar rahay thai...[he sees a girl sleeping beside him and smiles] giriraj:theek hai kaam jaldi khatam karke humse devgardh palas mai millia bohaat jaroo baath karni hai. uday:jee dad,bye giriraj:bye. ab uday bed se utaar ta hai or dress pahanta hai or chala jata hai. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ otherside monia is thinking about akash...murali dekhta hai ki monia apne app hass ra ha hai.ya dekh kar murali ko gussa ata hai or o monia ko kahta h ki akash ko bhool ja .saying this he goes outside..hearing this monia gets upset and she also goes outside...monia is walking on the road and a car stops precap:MANVEER NOKJHOK
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
l liked this prt can u tell me in this story manayta knows how to speak english and her clothes r different from the drama or not
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
She knows english...she likes short dress also but for her baba she cann't wear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay that means she wears shalwar kameez
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
CHAPTER TWO a very handsome,tall guycomes out from the car.it was no one but uday. uday:dekhai nahi deta kya??? monia:tum hai dekhai nahi deta kya??? uday is surprised... uday:sarak par tum chal rahi ho or humarai car k shamne atai ho agar hum car na rokte toh tum hospital mai hoti or hum a dek ke car chalana chahia tha..wow monia:sarak...sorry mujha dekh k chalna chahia tha...ainda se asa nahi hoga.. uday:or agar ho vi plz mere car k saamne mat ana...samjhe monia slowly says:khados uday:kuch kaha tum ne monia:na hi. uday starts the car and monia returne to his chwal.
Monia to himself:kue? Kue? Kue? Aisa mere saath hi kue?
murali:beta tum samaj ti kue nahi k akash tumse payar nahi karta..
monia:mai usse boohat payer karti ho...or ak din vo bhi mujse payer karaiga..
IN DEVGARDH PALACS...
Uday ata hai..
Uday:khaamma gani dadi saabh
DS:gani khaamma,beta,baithe a...
giriraj arrives there...
giriraj:ap agaya...
Uday:jee dad..apko humse kuch kaam tha
giriraj:ha..
giriraj to DS
giriraj:hum chahte hai ki app uday ko bataia
DS:jasa apko thik lage
uday:koie pareshani ki baat hai kaya???
Ds:uday hum ne aapko hamesha damad nahi beta samjha hai..deta apto jantehi hai uday sola saal se lapaata hai..hume nahi pataa vo kaab vapass ayang ge..app ak yuvraj hai appar apka riasaat ki jimedari hai...
Uday:dadi saabh aap kehna kya chahtai hai
Ds:yaloog chahte hai ki aap "J"se shaadi karlijia...
uday:kya yahi saabh chahte hai?
Birijraj:ha..uday beta
uday:mujhe kuch waaqt chahia
Ds:take your time,beta
Uday leaves
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Ha..salwar kamiz hi pahan ta hai
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