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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Nice update !

Continue soon ...

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Shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

nice chappy di:)loved it:)thanx for the PM...

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Deepsoul really very must say ky dream sequense dala hai apne 😆 😆 😆. Hum upne supne hi likhtean hai stories main and u have shared your dream sequense. Jo bhio hai cute hai 👍🏼. its actually a . But still cute.

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Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hay @deepsoul How u r able to right such a dream sequence and really lots of patience really . Must say you can be a script writer 😆 😆 😆 . Your story will be a hit particularly a scene writer where u can give great suggestions for the romantci scenes 😉 😉 ⭐️

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deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: anj1208
Hay @deepsoul How u r able to right such a dream sequence and really lots of patience really . Must say you can be a script writer 😆 😆 😆 . Your story will be a hit particularly a scene writer where u can give great suggestions for the romantci scenes 😉 😉 ⭐️

yarr mai koi writer nahi hoo bas mere maan mai aya likh deti hoo! but u like it thats mean alot to me! thanks!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

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9 part!
Raj look at nanadai n whisper to Yuvraj " wo hai jisney lagha pehna hai" n Yuvraj understand that nandani is rani n rani is blushing n looking at Yuvraj then brijraj call rani n introduce rani to raj n said " yeh humari beti rani hai " then Yuvraj n raj get shocked to hear this! then raj get confused n said to brijraj " magar yeh kese ho sakta hai " n nandani get worried n saying in her mind " agar dad ko pata lag gaya ki hum Yuvraj rani bankey miley they ho" n here brijraj, komal n rani also get confused n brijraj said to raj " kaya Yuvraj yeh nahi ho sakta matalb ?" then Yuvraj handal the situation n said " lagta hai thakan key wajse Yuvraj esa khey rahey hai " then raj get confused n said " kaya" then Yuvraj pinch raj that raj can understand to what he trying to say then raj understand n acting to be ill n said " han humarey sir mai bhut dard ho raha" then all get worried but nandani get relax that her secret is not open yet then brijraj said " han humhey bhi lagta hai ki Yuvraj ko aram karana chey " n call ramsingh n order him " Yuvraj ko kamrey mai le jaye or dekhey ga ki unko kisi cheez ki koi kami nahi honi chey " then ramsingh said" jee" n then brijraj said to raj " Yuvraj jaye aram ki jiye or hum aapko rat ko dinner par Miltey hai"
Yuvraj said " jee thik hai hum Yuvraj ko le jatey " then they moves from there ! After it everybody is worrying about Yuvraj then komal see that rani is also worrying then komal say to rani " don't worry beta Yuvraj key srif sir mai dard hai thik ho jayega aap chinta mat ki jeye or hum humhey lagta hai ki ab aap ko aram ki jaurt hai tho apney kamrey mai jaye " n brijraj also say " han aap apney kamrey mai jaye or Yuvraj ka kayal rakney key liye hum hai na " then komal say to ria " rani ko apney kamrey mai le jaye " rani" jee aye rani shaibha " then they also moves out from there but brijraj n komal still worrying about Yuvraj then nandani said then " don't worry mom n dad hum hai na humarey jiju sa ka kayal rakney key liye aap bilkul chinta mat kiye hum uney koi bhi cheez ki kami nahi honey degey " n give a naughty smile n brijraj , komal happy to see nandani like this n brijraj said to nandani " aap ney humari chinta dur kar de hai aap kab badi ho gaye pata bhi nahi Chala " then nandani " dad hum badey tho kab key ho gaye they bas aap ko ab pata ab laga hai anyways dad hum dekhtey hai ki humarey jiju sa kuch chey tho nahi" then brijraj " aap hai humhey Ksisi bhi cheez ki koi bhi chinta karney ki koi jarurt nahi hai " n say to komal " aye hum chaltey hai " the komal " jee maharaj" then they also moves out from there after that again nandani saying herself in relaxing way " Ufff aaj tho bach gye agar humara raaz khul jata tho? ab humhey agla kadam soch samjh key chalana hoga or us key liye humhey Yuvraj ko confident mai lena hoga " give confident look!
Next scene( in rani room )
Rani getting worried about Yuvraj n saying to ria " ria tum humara ek kam karo gi ?"
ria" jee rani shaibha kahey "
Rani" kaya tum Yuvraj key room jakey dekho gi kaya ki sab thik hai kaya???? "
Ria in very peace full says to rani" rani shaibha aap bilkul fikar mat ki jeye hum hai na jamai saa ko kisi bhi cheez ki kami nahi honey degey aap bas hum pe barosa rakhey ? "
Rani get relax n hold ria hand n say " ek tum hi tho ho jis par pura barosa hai or baki tho ese hi hai " n then they both say together " han nahi tho" n stop then look at each other then suddenly laughing together !
Next scene ( in Yuvraj room )
Where ramsingh saying to raj "jamai saa agar Ksisi bhi cheez ki jaurt ho tho humhey yaad kar li jega " then Yuvraj saying to ramsingh " jee ramsinghji agar Yuvraj jee ko Ksisi bhi jaurt ho gi tho aap ko hi pukarey gey thik hai ab aap jaye please"
Then Ramsingh follow Yuvraj order n leave the room after that Yuvraj saying to raj" kaya karta hai yarr aaj tho tuney marwa hi diya tha agar humara raaz khul jata tho" then raj in frustration saying to Yuvraj " yarr yaha mai itna confused hoo or tu mujhey lecture mat de ab please mai terey hath jodta hoo " n joints his hand
Yuvraj " hmm mai samjh sakta hoo tujhey is bat ki confusion hai na ki agar rani rani nahi hai uski bhen hai to us din jungle mai usey tujhey yeh kuy kha ki wo rani hai ? "
Raj still in confusion n said " han yarr is bat ki tho confusion hai "
Then suddenly a voice come back
" kaya hum aap dono ki muskil hal kar saktey hai? " then they look at back n saw that nandani is standing at the door !
After that raj n Yuvraj look at each other in shocking way!
To be continue ...

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roze Chaudhry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

superb update deepu bhai...👍🏼...cont soon thanks for the PM...🤗

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

it was a very nice udpate.loved it! Do continue soon n thanks for the pm.

Edited by sanah12 - 12 years ago

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Karkit
Wow nice update plz pm me

ok next time i will pm u!

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Fekta Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

awsomee..updste bhai
par mekko ek que. puchhana hai tumne naam kyun change kar diye rani aur yuvraj uday aur manyata krakhati toh jyada maza ata but its ok
update soon
thanx for PM.

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