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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
It ws realy vry nce update... Wt fr nxt horseride scene hope this compitation manyata n uday me ho... Update soon... Thanx fr pm
Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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11 part!
Next morning in the hall brijraj n komal is waiting for everyone then suddenly a phone rings then brijraj pick up n say "what aaj ? Kab hai meeting humhey phele kuy nahi bataya thik hai hum abhi Atey hai " after put down the phone receiver then komal say" kaya hua maharaj aap preshan lag rhey hai? " brijraj with upset mood say" komal humari hotel association ki meeting nikal ayi hai humhey jana padega " then komal in relaxing way say" koi bat nahi maharaj aap meeting mai jaye bachey tho akele bhi chaley jagey " brijraj say" thik hai " then moves out for meeting after that Yuvraj n raj come n asked about brijraj then komal say to them that brijraj gone for meeting then raj whisper to himself " Arey wha " then komal hear something n say to raj" Yuvraj kuch kha apney? " then Yuvraj handel the situation n say " Yuvraj ka khena ka yeh matalb hai baki tho aa rhey hai na? " then komal say" hum bhi jana hai kisi kam se tho aap bachey ho aye " then Yuvraj say" kuy aunty aap bhi chaley na " them komal say" hum waha akey kaya karey gey u carry on" then Yuvraj trying to say then raj interpret n whisper to Yuvraj that " kuy maney mai tula hua rheney de na " after that Yuvraj say" baki sab kha hai? " then raj also say" han koi dekhai nahi de raha hai" then komal smile n say" hum samjh gye aapka matalb rani se haina bas wo atti hi hogi" then raj say" nahi actually nandani bhi dekhai nahi de rahi hai na islye pucha "
komal " hum sab samjhtey hai aap rani ko hi puch rahey bas dikhana nahi chatey don't worry beta atti hogi '" n going to moves out from there then nandani comes n asked to komal " mom aap kha ja rahi hai aap nahi aa rhi hai kaya ?" n here komal explaining whole thing n there raj looking to nandani with yellow designer suit n new hair style n from side Yuvraj seeing to raj that the way look at nandani then Yuvraj whisper " itna mat dekh warana yeh log tujhey lose charchter samjhey gey tu mat bhool ki tera rishta us rani se honey wala hai " then raj get frustrated n say in low voice " yarr tuney kha fasa diya hai jis se payar karta hoo use dekh nhi sakta or jis mera tu rishta karwa raha hai us se mai payar nahi karta "
Yuvraj " tu fikar mat kar mai hoo na bas tu abhi control kar" here komal say to nandani " apney yeh kaya phen rakha hai aap ki beauty contest mai ja rahi hai kaya" after that Yuvraj laugh n raj n look at Yuvraj n Yuvraj say" sorry " n nandani say " mom aap ko pata hai na ki mujhey yeh horse riding kitni irritating lagti hai bas hum company deney ja rahey hai " here again Yuvraj saying to himself " isney esa phena hai tho pata nhi wo rani kaya phen key ayi gi" n smiling then komal say to nandani " rani kha hai wo ayi nhi?" then suddenly a voice come " hum yaha hai maa" n everybody looking at stair n here rani comes with cowboy look n wear boots which make her different which make Yuvraj n raj shocked then raj whisper to Yuvraj that "tu tho khey raha tha ki yeh totaly housewife material hai par yeh tho... " but here Yuvraj continue looking to rani here raj look at Yuvraj then pinch him n Yuvraj shout then everybody get scared n look at him then komal ask to Yuvraj " kaya hua beta aap thik tho hai na? " then raj handle n say " kuch nhi Aunty jab bhi hum bahar jatey hai tho yeh ese hi chilta hai" then komal smile n say " Aunty mat kho maa kho gey tho humhey jada kushi hogi " then raj also smile n say" jee" then nandani interrupt n say" ohhh ho yeh hum bad mai decided karey ki kon kisi kaya boley ga ab hum Chalana chaye " then komal say" Arey han bahar car khadi hai " then everybody leave n say Byee to komal n stand near by the car n raj order to driver that he drive the car n sit on the driver sit n rani try to sit at front sit but nandani come in hurry n sit on the front sit n say to rani" sorry jiji sit full aap peechey beth jaye " rani feel little bit sad but then get fake smile on her face n sit on back sit with Yuvraj n here nandani giving evil smile n say to herself in her mind " jiji yeh tho srif shuruat hai agey dekhey hum kaya kartey hai"
To continue ...
special note: if i write anything wrong plzz ignore !

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Gret update... Special laugh on uday thought fr rani... Wow nice concept wting fr nxt chapter n thanx fr pm
Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
loved it! Very nice update. Thanks for the pm n do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Awsum update dea..!!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
superb update di
thanks for the PMšŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
wow that was awesome dear...paheli pahelišŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
the update was nice šŸ˜›
thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Hmm nice start of the story so now waiting for Nandini next move heee heee
lets see what she does.

Good nice and smooth move in the story deepsou l😊 šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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12 part !
Car reached to club n everybody go to horse riding ground where a man come n say to rani " hukum macho aapka itezar kar raha hai " after listen that man raj n Yuvraj get confused n say toghter " macho" then nandani say with big smile " jiju saa ab aapki shadi humari jiji se honey ja rahi hai islye ab aapko macho ki adat dalni padegi kuyki macho or humari jiji macho se bhut payar karti hai " then Yuvraj say " but yeh macho hai kon? " then rani say with style " ayi hum aapko milwatey hai" then everybody goes to stable where a black beautiful horse standing then rani introduce to everyone to that black horse as a macho after introduction Yuvraj laugh so loud n say" yeh macho hai yeh kisi godey ka naam hai ya fir bandhar ka? " then rani get little bit angry n say" yu hasiye mat warana humara macho bura maan jayega fir aapko ride nahi karney dega " then raj with confident say" tho humara dost raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai yeh horse riding mai championship hasil hai or ese bhut se ghodo ko thik kia hai" then rani with full confident say" acha yeh bat hai tho dekh letey hai ki yeh humarey macho pe ride kar pathey hai ki nahi?" then Yuvraj say" agar yeh challenge hai tho humhey manzoor hai par badlaey mai humhey kaya mileyga? " then rani say " jo aap bolo " then Yuvraj " soch lo kuch bhi mang saktey hai???? " then rani " phele aap ride tho ki jiye fir dekhtey hai kon kitna pani mai hai" then Yuvraj say" tho thik hai ghodey ko khol do" after Yuvraj order nandani get scared n say" yeh kaya kar rahey ho tumhey pata nahi ki macho pe jiji key alwa or koi nahi ride kar sakta hai" n moves towards to Yuvraj then raj hold her hand n say" don't worry tum mere dost ko nahi janti ho wo sambhal lega" then nandani say" tum samjh nahi rahey ho" then raj " tho mat samjho bas dekho ok" here Yuvraj comes to macho n sit on macho n here macho get angry n jumping like a mad horse n Yuvraj get fall from macho after Yuvraj fall rani laugh n nandani say" dekha mai kaya khena chati thi" raj say" dekha par tum yeh nahi janti ho ki wo ek no. ka jidi hai jab wo koi challenge leta hai use pura karney ki wo jaan ki bazzi bhi laga deta hai " after seen rani laugh Yuvraj get angry start again to control macho with more passion but again he get fail to n fall down n here rani still laughing n say" chodo tum se nahi hoga" then Yuvraj get angry n say" wo kaya hena princess jo hum chatey hai use hasil karkey rhetey hai " n stand up n take jockey stick start bitting macho after this reaction rani get angry n hold the stick n break it n say" yeh kaya matalb hai ki tum kisi ko hasil nahi kar saktey tho tum uski jaan lelo gey? Agar tum humarey mehman nahi hotey na tho hum wo haal kar detey ki tum yaad raktey? " n take macho to stable here nandani say to raj" dekh liya aapkey dost ko jiju saa" n moves out too ! N raj say to Yuvraj " yarr yeh jab bhi mujhey jiju saa kheti na isa lagta tujhey pitu " then Yuvraj get confused n say" ab mainey kaya kia?" then raj with little angry " sara kia karaya tera hai kaya jaurt thi us godhey ko marney ki ? Wase tuney aaj tak esa nahi kia aaj kaya ho gaya tha tujhey? Or uppar se meri nandani bhi naraz hokar chali gyi " then Yuvraj get frustrated n say" pata nahi yarr jab wo rani has rahi thi tho esa lag raha tha ki "
raj interpret n say " ki ek ladki tujh pe kese has sakti hai Yahi hi na meri maan yeh ladki different hai iska kayal chod de or tu jesi type ka dhudh raha tha wahi dhudh " then Yuvraj say" nahi yarr itni asasani se nahi kuyki jo aaj hua uskey bad tho bilkul nahi! Mai isko or iskey ghodey dono ko thik karkey rahu ga tu dekhna " then raj say " lo ho gaya sayapa "
next scene
here rani stable with macho giving medical treatment to macho n crying n say" aaj tujhey us jalaad ney bhut mara na sari galti meri hai na mai use wo challenge deti na wo use jitney key liye tujhey marta " n hold her own ear n say" mujhey maaf kardey macho " suddenly a voice come " maaf tho aap mujhey kar do " rani look at back n get shocked !
To continue ...

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