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MrsSSO

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Nice update 👏

Continue soon ...

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deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

8 part!
Rani rush to her ria n tell her that"tujhey pata hai wo aa rahey " then ria tell rani in sad mood" humhey tho pata tha bas aapko hi hum pe vishwas nahi tha" then rani hold her ear n tell her" sorry humhey maaf kar do" then ria holds rani hand n said " yeh kaya kar rahi hai rani shaibha aapko yeh sab sbhobha nahi deta hai" then rani said " galti ki hai tho mafi tho magni padeygi na par thodi galti tumari bhi thi" ria get confused n said " humari " then rani explain her that " agar tumney wo mazak nahi kia hota tho hum galt nahi samjhtey na" then ria hold her ear n said " aww humhey maaf kar di jeye " then both look at each other n start laugh !
Next morning
scene start from decorated hall n everyone is busy in preparation n komal giving instruction to servent " ram singh sab tiayri ho gye hai na koi kami nahi rehni chey Yuvraj phele bar aa rahey hai " ramsingh " jee sab tayari ho gye hai jamai saa key sawagat mai koi kami nahi rhaye gi" komal " thik hai tum jao or dekho ki Yuvraj ki car tho nahi ayi hai " ramsingh " jee" then ramsingh go outside to see then suddenly ria is passing then komal stopped her n said " ria humari rani betiya tayar ho gye kaya ?" ria " jee wo" ( confused look ) komal " jao jaldi jakey dekho " then suddenly nandani interpurted n said " dekho maa hum kab se tayar hai" komal give little smile n said " beta aap bhut sundar lag rhaey ho" nandani " hum tho tayar hai but humrey jiju sa abhi tak nahi aye khai esa tho nahi ki wo aye hi nahi or hum faltu mai tayarI kar rahey ho???? " komal get little bit tensed n said " subh subh boley beta esa nahi hoga " then suddenly ramsingh comes n interpurted n said " maharani saa jamai saa aa gaye hai " komal get happy n said"kaya" n instruct to other servent "puja ki thali lao " n said to ramsingh to inform maharaj n moves to door nandani give evil smile n moved to rani room !
Next scene
a red vintage car stopped out of the mahal n Yuvraj n raj comes out n everybody is showering then with flowers n they moves towards mahal n stopped at the door where komal n Brijraj standing but komal get confused n said " maaf kijey hum samjh nahi paa rhey hai ki aap mai se humarey honey waley jamai kon hai " then Yuvraj n raj look at each other ! Scene cut
Next scene !
Rani is almost ready with full heavy worked Anarkali suit n ria combing hair of rani then suddenly door open one maid come n said " rani shaibha jamai saa aa gaye hai" then rani happily turned around n said "kaya" maid said yes n move out of the room ! Then rani n ria happly seeing each other !
Cut to enterance ( where Yuvraj n raj seen eachother )
Yuvraj introduce raj as a Yuvraj n said : " this is Yuvraj the prince of jaigragh" n raj looking to Yuvraj with nervous look n Yuvraj give him confident look n they enter rajmahal n raj looking here there with searching eyes then brijraj takes his hand to raj shoulder n said " humhey pata hai ki aap kaya dhudh rhey" then raj said " jee" brijraj said " humari rani betiya bas atti hi hogi par aap andher tho aye " n moves towards drawing hall then Yuvraj whisper in raj ears " itni bhi kaya jaldi hai wo aa jayegi " raj also whisper " yaha mai itna nervous ho raha hoo or tujhey mazak suj raha" Yuvraj " mai hoo na kabrata kuy hai or jaldi chal warana terey sasur ji Yahi aa jayege " then sit in the drawing room n brijraj asked komal " rani kha hai ? " komal said to brijraj " jee wo n look at stairs n said jee li jiye wo aa gye " n everybody looked at stairs where nandani n rani both coming from down stairs ! Then Yuvraj whisper to raj " yarr in mai kon hai???? " then raj look at them !
To be continue ...

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.HookandHybrid.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

loved the updates
want to read it further
sorry for late comment

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Fekta Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Bhai mast update hai...
Haww...yuvraj introdused raj as yuvraj...ye toh bada syapa hone wala hai...
Update soon
thanx for PM.

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Pranoti aka Sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

oye hoye kya update hain deeps
hum to fida ho gaye.
hmm...
sb kkuch very interesting. jaldi update kar ab.

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: eyecatchers
loved the updateswant to read it furthersorry for late comment

its ok but u love my ff that's more important ! N yes I will write it soon! Thanks for liking my ff!

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deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic
Bhai mast update hai...Haww...yuvraj introdused raj as yuvraj...ye toh bada syapa hone wala hai...Update soon thanx for PM.

yes bhai yeh syapa tho kuch bhi nahi hai ab agey or bhi sayape hai rofl thanks for comment