manveer ff: Aa Dekhe Zara chpt 7 updated(pg 42)

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Nimrit

@arna753

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

awesum update. so manyata agrees for this marriage for jay.

waiting to read the chapter.

cont.soon

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nimmi

@aksuji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

today only i was thinking that "aa dekhe zara " has not been updated since a long time...has it been discontinued...but thanks to my stars and u ...i got an update...though there were no manveer scenes but i liked this part...the convo between mother and daughter and manyata's actions and the last part as well...i loved it...its an awessome update 👏...plz do continue soon...

thanx for pm

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manisha98

@manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

finally u updated dea...!!

so manyata is gonna get married to uday...

can't wait 2 dat...

thnx 4r d pm...nd do continue soon!!😉

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

OMG DONO CHARACTER BADE HI JABARDAST NAMUNE HAI...
EK ANDHI TOH DUSRA KHAMOSH TUFAN...
HEY BHAGVAN YE DONO TOH EK DUSRE KO NOCH KHAYENGE...
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN
LOVED IT TO CORE...
UPDATE SOON..

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Lovely update Zarin! Even though it was Manveer free ... it was still most enjoyable. I loved Manyata's mother's dialogues. And the highlight of the chapter was the last line (UDAY'S DIALOGUE TO MANYATA)😳. That was excellent👏! Please continue soon, thanks for the PM😊.

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Awesome

this was great

M using knife and cutting vegetables in anger was hilarious

totally great update do cont soon

this part was super duper

"Hello Uday. Main Manyata bol rahi hu. Main tumhe shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hu. So be prepared because soon you are going to wish that you were dead." Manyata said and then cut the line.

Uday put the receiver back on its cradle and smiled hugely. "YOU be prepared Miss haan nehi toh," he thought to himself "because soon you are going to be TAMED."

the ending of chap 5 was too good

thanks 4 de PM

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

love J- Manyata's bond...❤️

awesum update👏

reading ur ff reminds me of one on my rapid reader's story

in school days

it was " Taming the shrew..."😃😆

do cont soon dear

n plz do pm me 4 d next update...

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

though manveer nehi tha,bt i loved the mon-daughter convo,bcoz it involved udayy!!!!!!!! and saas to already impressed damad se😉😉 and the last 2lines were superbbb!!!!!!!!!! do cntinue soonnn!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊