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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Pls update it's been ages

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angelina6

update update update nowww plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry I wanted to post it 2 hour ago but I had trouble with my internet connection and I couldn't 😔. But I'll post it now 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
See below 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all I want to apologize to all of you for taking so long to update. But trust me guyz it was not my fault. I was hell busy with college (and still am! 😔). But I'll try to update the next chapters as soon as I can.And now here is chapter 5. And I want to give you guys some warning about this chapter. 1.There's no manveer scene in this chappy. But it was an important chapter and from the next chapter there will be manveer scenes in each chappy. 2. It's a short chapter as I didn't get much time. And 3. This chapter is not well written. sorry. 😔 Now if you guys are bored enough of my blabbering you can start reading. 😉



Chapter 5


Manyata got into her car and started driving. She was fuming with anger so she took out all her frustration on her driving and drove like a maniac. After 15 minutes she was home. So she parked her car got out of it and kicked the door shut. Then she entered into the house and went straight into the kitchen still fuming. Mrs. Anjali Kapoor was working in the kitchen. When she saw her daughter she smiled at her and said "Oh, beta tum ghar agye?"

Menyata didn't reply. She grabbed a knife and started slicing the vegetables kept in the kitchen counter furiously without noticing what she was doing.

"Wow! Kya baat hai beta aaj aap kichen pe kaam kar rahi hain! Aj to suraj jaroor pashchim se hi ugla hoga!" Mrs. Kapoor exclaimed.

Manyata didn't hear it either and continued doing what she was doing.

"Uss uday ki bachche….. samajhta kya hain apne apko?" Manyata yelled to herself while she kept slicing the vegetables with full speed "Uski toh main band baja dungi. Main uska haat tod dungi, uska tange tod dungi aur haan sabse pehle toh main uska saari daat tod dungi taki woh mujhe apni woh stupid si smile phir kabhi nehi dikha paye, kabhi bhi nehi. Main usse aisa sabak sikhaungi aisa sabak sikhaungi ki woh yeh sochkar royega ki woh iss dunya main payda hi kyun hua tha! Agar uski jindegi main narak main nehi badli toh mera naam bhi Manyata Kapoor nehi hai haan nehi toh!"

"Phir toh yeh bohut hi bura ho gaya. Kyunki main to bass use jake ek bari si hug dena chahti hu!" Mrs. Kapoor said smiling.

Manyata came to reality and looked at her mother surprised. "What! Ma, what are you talking about?"

Mrs. Kapoor pointed down to Manyata's hands grinning. "Ab dekho tumhare uss Udayveer Sing ne tumse ye kya karwa diya!"

Manyata looked down and noticed for the first time what she has done. She has cut all the vegetables into perfect pieces! She! Manyata! Who doesn't even know how to hold a knife properly! She! Manyata! Who has never done any kitchen stuff! Who gets sick even at the idea of cooking!

"Jo kam main itne saloose nehi kar payi woh usne yun ek jhatke se kar diya! Ab ek chota sa thanx to usse meri taraf se milne hi chahiye. Vaise Manyata, manna parega. Tum to gusse me bahut hi useful nikli! Hmm mujhe ye tariqa tum par aksar ajmana parega!" Mrs. Kapoor said smirking and then added thoughtfully "Yeh Udayveer Sing jo vi hain, Kuch to baat hain usme."

"Huh, usme kuch baat nehi usme to bahut kuch baat hain! Main aapko batati hoon ki kya kya khubiya hain usme!" Manyata said sarcastically. "Ek number ki ghatiya insaan hai woh. Infact woh to ek insaan kehlane ka layek hi nehi hai! Insaaniat naam ki koi cheese hi nahi hain usme. Aur apni aapko to pata nehi kya samajhta hain! Mera bass chale toh abhi jaa kar uski jaan lelu ha!" Manyata fumed crossing her hands.

"Arey baap re! Itni nafrat! Ab aisa bhi kya kaar diya hain uss bechare ne?" Mrs. Kapoor asked quriosly.

"Bechara! Ma aapko andaza bhi nehi hain ki aap kya keh rahi hain! Yeh Udayveer sing koi bechara-vechara nehi hain. Aap janna chahte the na ki usne kya kia hain? To phir suniye. He is trying to force me to marry him!"

"He is trying to do what!" Mrs. Kapoor asked with astonishment. And then burst into laughing.

"Ma! Koi aapki eklawti beti ko usse shaadi karne ke liye force kar raha hain aur aapko haasi aa rahi hain!" Manyta said angrily frowning like a little child.

"Sorry beta." Mrs. Kapoor said trying to control her laughter. "It's just... well it's just hard to imagine that someone is trying to force you into anything let alone into marriage!" Mrs. Kapoor said stifling a laugh. "Vaise yeh Udayveer Sing hain kaun?"

Manyata explained to her mother everything about what happened in Jaynandini's house and then in Uday's office.

"Hmm..." Mrs. Kapoor said thoughtfully smilling a little. "Toh finally humhe koi aisa mil hi gaya jisme itni himmat hain ki who humhari beti ko propose kar sake."

Now manyata was really astonished to hear her mother. "Ma! Aapko ho kya gaya hain? Aap yeh kaisi baate kar rahi hain? Aur usne mujhe propose kab kiya? Woh mujhe usse shadi karne ke liye force kar raha hain aur main aisa kabhi nehi karungi!"

"Huh tumto aise keh rahi ho jaise ki agar woh tumhe aisa force nehi karti aur yun baas pyaarse tumko shaadi ke liye puchti to tum yu jhatse maan jaati! Come on Manyata main tumhe acchi tarah se jaanti hu. Maa hu tumhari. Shaadi ke liye puchna to durki baat hain baalki aaj tak jo bhi ladke tumhe uss nazar se dekha bhi hain na tumne un sabko unki nani yaad diladi hain."

"Aur main iss Udayveer Sing ko bhi uski nani yaad dila dungi haan nehi toh." Manyata said strongly.

"Mujhe nehi lagta hain ki issbar yeh itni assan hain. Yeh Uadayveer Sing baaki ladko jaise nehi lagta hain. Kuch baat toh zaroor hain usme. I must tell you that I'm already impressed with him."

"Kya! Ma aap aisa kaise keh sakti hain? Yeh janne ki bawajood ki usne…." Manyata started yelling when she was interrupted by the ringing sound of the phone. Mrs. Kapoor left the kitchen to pick up the phone. After a few seconds she called out, "Manyata, tumhare liye Jay ka phone hain."

"Hey bhagwan ab main usse kya batau?" Manyata asked herself, went to the living room and took the receiver from her mother's hand nervously.

"Hello." she said

"Hello Manyata" came Jay's excited voice. "Udayveer se baat ho gayi? Kya kaha usne? Woh man gayi kya? Who yeh shaadi tod to dega na?" Jay asked hopefully.

"Umm... woh nehi mera maatlab ha. Mera maatlab…." Manyata hesitated.

"Woh nehi mani na?" Jay's voice dropped. "I will have to marry him right? There's nothing else to do. Oh God! What will I say to Jagat?" Jay choked.

Hearing this Manyata's heart sank. She said quickly "Nehi nehi. Aisa kuch bhi nehi hoga. Uday ne iss shadi ko todne ke liye maan gaya hain. Main to baas tere saath thoda majak kar rahi thi."

"Sach?" Jay screamed happily. "Mujhe to yeh yakeen hi nehi ho raha hain! Manyata tu sach to bol rahi hain na?"

"Ha baba main such bol rahi hu. Maine tujhe promise kiya tha na?" Manyata said affectionately.

"Oh thank you. Thank you so much. You saved my life! I don't know what to say. I...I..." Jay started crying with happiness.

"Hush Jay it's okay. Relax. Ab to sab kuch thik ho gaya hain na? To chal ab tu yeh rona dhona bandh kar aur khushiya manana shuru kar de."

"Kayyy" Jay said happily.

"Umm Jay? Kya tu mujhe Uday ki number de sakti hain?"

"Sure. Per tujhe uska number kyun chahiye?"

"Woh…woh bus mujhe usse thanks kehna tha."

"Arey ha woh to hain! Meri excitement me yeh baat to meri dimaag se nikal hi gayi thi! Thanks God ki tune yaad dila di! Main bhi abhi jakar usse call karke thanks keh deti hoon."

"Nehi!" Manyata shouted and then realizing her mistake added quickly "Mera matlab hain main thanks keh dungi na? Wohi kafi hai. Tu ye sab mujh per chor de aur jake jagat ke sath celebrate kar. Tu baas mujhe uday ka number de de. Baki main samhal lungi."

"Theek hain. Here's his number."

Manyata wrote down the number then talk to Jay some more and then they bid each other.

Manyata put the receiver back. "So Mr. Udayveer Sing. Tu mujhse shaadi karna chahta tha na? Theek hain to phir aisa hi hoga. Tu mujhse jaroor shaadi karega. Aur phir main tere jindegi narak se bhi battar bana dungi haan nehi toh!" Manyata said to herself and picked up the receiver and dialed Uday's number.

"Hello."

"Hello Uday. Main Manyata bol rahi hu. Main tumhe shaadi karne ke liye taiyaar hu. So be prepared because soon you are going to wish that you were dead." Manyata said and then cut the line.

...

Uday put the receiver back on its cradle and smiled hugely. "YOU be prepared Miss haan nehi toh," he thought to himself "because soon you are going to be TAMED."


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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update!!👏
Omg!! manyata is so funny😆 she was cutting uday or the vegetables😆
very cute updat!!
thanks for the pm, update soon!!

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
done 😊

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