manveer ff: Aa Dekhe Zara chpt 7 updated(pg 42)

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: fireroad99
Manyata was shaking with anger hearing this and replied through cleching teeth, "Congratulate yourself Mr. Sing! Because you just got yourself a ticket to hell!"
this dialogue was the best and i love ur update
and plzzz pm me
BEST DIALOGUE !!!

Thank you so so so much for your lovely cmnt! I never thought that this dialogue was going to get such a great response though I had quite fun writing it! I hope u'll like my future updates too!

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sunshinehkl

@sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
hahaha lolzzz
that last part was nice...
uday ka face dekhne layak hoga...
awes update...
loved it loads update soon...
and do pm me!!

Thanks mahi 😃. I'll try to update soon but as i said no promises. But u'll surely get the pm when I do! 😊

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: Jarin04
The last line was just superb. Another amazing update from u. Thnx for the pm

Thank you! 😊 And don't worry about the pm it's my pleasure. 😊

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sunshinehkl

@sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm

Thanks 😃

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Kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Awesme update...
Do pm me n continu soon

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melissaK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

This is so lovely. Read all 6 chapters in one go.

Loved the concept and the way its portrayed.

You really write very well. what a sacrifice Manyata made for jays love

And now she is married 2 uday and he justs gets want he wants only this time it be so easy for him as manyata will definitely give him a hard time. looking forward to it.

Please pm me.