DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69

saneha85

@saneha85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

Hi... Sweeti..

Amazing update...

loved the every part ...

specialy the last line where uday said that he wants to have parthana and all...

and now tell me rohan ko kaun pasand aai../

Kimmy or mayanata..

please update soon...

really soon

thanks for the pm.

love

smita

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Shahista

@Shahi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-
Hello dear... hey sweety
It's been ages since you updated the last part yes i know...
Just loved the update😊 thank you
Jay..being good...after a long time in your ss ...strangely enough in both my ff she is good.
I just love the friendship btw Kimmy and our Manyata.. me 2
Aww...drunk Kimmy is so innocent😉 yep
Update soon... next update depends on there response from this one...

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

res! i'll edit all the past res here
pakka wala
ashu/priyu/manveer swear

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Hannia

@hans1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

hey jiji!!

The update was Fantastic and mind blowing written as always!👏👏👏

I wonder whats the problem with kimmy mom😡😡 too much status conscious!!

uday's past was heart touching jiji!!! how can i mother say such things to her son

and obviously uday-manyata feelings were complete❤️❤️❤️

Drunk kimmy was hilarious an the way she praised manyata and uday's thinking at that time were completely " WoWWW"

wondering if kimmy an manyta will take " GARAM GARAM PARATHAS" for uday😆

and here goes my Flattery(indeed the truth) once again😆 " u r indeed a wonderful writer and ur quotes are simply awesome"
love u jiji!😃😃

AND A TEDDY BEAR HUG😆😆

Edited by hans1998 - 12 years ago

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

thats nice one love ur updates

continue soon

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

thank you so0o0o much shah after a long time u hav given us a long update ... 😃 thanks...

well it was indeed a great update by you... 👏 👏 👏 i just like jay alot she cares for manyata and i loved it... 😳

well the bond u showed between manyata and kimmy is awsum... i loved drunk kimmy it was funny seeing her like this...🤣 well the whole chapter was very nicely written... keep it up and thanks 4 the p.m... do continue so0o0on...love u🤗

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