First of I apologise for this extremely delayed editing I planned on editing my comment on saturday but things dont
usually tend to work according to one's plans ...
Coming to chapter 5 of this amazing FF
It was beautiful
as always wonderfully written
You truly have a gift for writing
The beginning was very insightful
Seems Udayveer has a past filled with bitter memories
wonder who the little girl was ...
Was that Gudiya ? Just an intuition
Texting part was well written
fun to full of teasing and humor
Ur thoughts in within the brackets were a great addition
it truly spiced up the Humor
I agree with Kimmy and VJ Bhai
Vicky does seem to have a crush on M
Poor guy is smitten ...
Kimmy seems like a pretty good talent
they way U describe her talent and work
it seems she is a wonderful designer
I hope she gets a job worthy of her
Unnati and VJ Bhai seem to have a past
coming to think of it almost all the characters seem to
have a past which is dark and secretive
hope all will be revealed as the story progresses
All of us have a past
most people say v shud forget the past and bury it
The future is uncertain and stop dwelling on it too much
we should live in the present
But I disagree
Past is Past
but whn dey say 4gt it shud v 4get the happy memories ?
The sweet ones along with the bitter ones ?
Just as a coin has two sides every has a past that is both
good and bad
We should cherish the sweet memories and learn from bitter experiences
I also believe in the beauty of my dreams
it is necessary to dream and work towards achieving it
The future is important
but the present is equally significant ...
Just something for u to ponder on
All the scenes were fabulous
poor M doesnt knw how 2 react 2 a compliment
Rohan Uday convo was perfectly written
It was too good
UV 's past ...
poor UV he suffered many hardships
Car scene was brilliant
I suspect Mrs.Malhotra had a hand in kimmy not getting de Job
Wonder IF UV will offer her a job ...
Cant wait for UV to get his special delivery 😉
I love the way U give pay attention to each and every character
It seems all of them have a significant role
Loved the chapter very Much
Cont ASAP
