DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

so uday dsnt believe in love,well he will😊 loved manveer 1st meet,well they havent met yet actually,bt loved it alreadyy!!!!!!!!!! will be waitng for ur nxt update😊😊😊

Quote

Jarin04

@Jarin04

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

I'm already in love wid your ff. Sha i must say i'm really impressed by your writting style. Now i'm even imagining that what might happen next. Pls do update soon.bc ur ff is now added in my fav list

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

loved it

he was a jerk

Quote

Nimrit

@arna753

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

awesum chapter.

just loved manveer convo. uday thinking manyyta to be a maid since she wasnt properly dreesed was also really nice.

cont.soon

Quote

nimra malik

@mimi.maik

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

OH GOD i loved it...i just loved it...the chap was hell awsum man...so0o0o0o much thrilling...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

shah how much i would say its not enough to describe how best this chap was...just deeply loved it to the core...😳

well i have to say uday is really a bas***d ...it was uday na who was making love with that woman...????? well who was that woman...???? questions ...questions...u maintain the suspence...and the 1st meeting of manyata and uday and he thought that manayta is a maid lolx 🤣...feeling extremely bad 4 her...

but shah you write it perfectly...so0o0o0o lush...just keep it up and do continue so0o0on...⭐️

thanks 4 giving such a wonderfull update and thanks 4 the p.m...also...love you.😳

Quote

azwa

@fireroad99

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

it was

really good and did you got insipried from kya hua tere vaada and charater of bulbul is same as manyata character her. pm me pl

Quote

.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

res
That was an amazing update
thanks for the pm
waitin for the next update...

Edited by eyecatchers - 12 years ago

Quote

Hannia

@hans1998

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Superb work jiji!!!!!!Superb work jiji!!!!!!Superb work jiji!!!!!!👏

hawww uday is so sooo rude haye jiji ae ki hogaya??... lol How can he confuse manyata wid a maid,,.. lol😆 ... umm ram singh liked manyata haha uday ki be-izzati kr di lmao ...😆😆😆 Actually jiji i was out ov town so couldnt reply to the update!! so sorry for it... AS I HAVE ALREADY TOLD U THAT U HAVE AN AWESOME WAY WID WORDS!⭐️⭐️⭐️u wrote manyata thoughts superbly hayeee i have no words to decribe how beautiful it was!!

u were superb as always

hugsss hannia😃😃

Edited by hans1998 - 12 years ago

Quote

Priya

@Priya46

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

loved how uv was being told off by manyata

Quote

Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

OMG...sahu that was superb update
love it👏
OMg...uday is so kamina par ush ki iss kaminepan pe toh hum fida hai🤣
lolzz...poor lady bichari ko rota hau chhod ke chala gaya uday par ush ki kya galti hai woh kamini bhi toh married hai ab galat place pe pyar dhundhegi toh yahi hoga na🤣
OMG OMG OMG...uday ne manyata ko maid samja...lolzzz...
manveer's 1st meeting was dhamakedar
love the update plzz...update soon
thanx for PM.

Quote

1 ... 18 19 20 21 22 ... 51

DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 20

Related Topics

Explore Topics