DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 22

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

@sweta
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thanx dear
muaahhh...
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Originally posted by: Jarin04

I'm already in love wid your ff. Sha i must say i'm really impressed by your writting style. Now i'm even imagining that what might happen next. Pls do update soon.bc ur ff is now added in my fav list

Originally posted by: manisha98

amazing chapter shahi!!👏

luvd manyata nd MR.SINGH scene so much!!

aww...poor manyata...felt really bad 4r her...

luvd d way she replied to uv!!

thanx 4r d pm dear nd do update soon😛!!

Originally posted by: arna753

awesum chapter.

just loved manveer convo. uday thinking manyyta to be a maid since she wasnt properly dreesed was also really nice.

cont.soon

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

OH GOD i loved it...i just loved it...the chap was hell awsum man...so0o0o0o much thrilling...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thank you mimi... muuaahh

shah how much i would say its not enough to describe how best this chap was...just deeply loved it to the core...😳

aww thanks dear, glad you enjoyed

well i have to say uday is really a bas***d ...it was uday na who was making love with that woman...????? Yes it was...😆 he really is quite a character in this story. just to establish udays character. well who was that woman...???? She is not really relevant to the story, just made up questions ...questions...u maintain the suspence...although her words or rather curse at the end will prove true for uday, he will feel her pain and longing.

and the 1st meeting of manyata and uday and he thought that manayta is a maid lolx 🤣...feeling extremely bad 4 her...

😆 lol that was how wanted the first meeting to be...

but shah you write it perfectly...so0o0o0o lush...just keep it up and do continue so0o0on...⭐️ thanks mimi

thanks 4 giving such a wonderfull update and thanks 4 the p.m...also...love you.😳 aww thank you sweety for such a lovely comment. luv ya 2. muuahh😉

Originally posted by: hans1998

Superb work jiji!!!!!!Superb work jiji!!!!!!Superb work jiji!!!!!!👏

THANKS CHOTI.. MUUAAHH

hawww uday is so sooo rude haye jiji ae ki hogaya??... lol

LOL VOH THO AISA HAIN😆

How can he confuse manyata wid a maid,,.. lol😆 ...

😆😉

umm ram singh liked manyata haha uday ki be-izzati kr di lmao ...😆😆😆

Yes manyata is not immature and loud in here, she is refined and mature. so she will definitely stand up for herself in the smartest ways

Actually jiji i was out ov town so couldnt reply to the update!! so sorry for it...

No problem hannia, no need to apologise. Muuaah. I am just as late in replying to comments. 😕

AS I HAVE ALREADY TOLD U THAT U HAVE AN AWESOME WAY WID WORDS!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks choti 😉

u wrote manyata thoughts superbly hayeee i have no words to decribe how beautiful it was!!

u were superb as always

hugsss hannia😃😃
Thank you for such lovely words. muuaahh😉

Originally posted by: fireroad99

it was

really good and did you got insipried from kya hua tere vaada and charater of bulbul is same as manyata character her. pm me pl

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

OMG...sahu that was superb update thanks sweta
love it👏 glad you did
OMg...uday is so kamina par ush ki iss kaminepan pe toh hum fida hai🤣 lol😆 haan kya kare??😉😆
lolzz...poor lady bichari ko rota hau chhod ke chala gaya uday par ush ki kya galti hai woh kamini bhi toh married hai ab galat place pe pyar dhundhegi toh yahi hoga na🤣 lol so true, dont go looking in the wrong places
OMG OMG OMG...uday ne manyata ko maid samja...lolzzz...😆😉
manveer's 1st meeting was dhamakedar
love the update plzz...update soon
thanx for PM. Thanks sweta for this lovely comment, really brought a smile to my face especially the kamini looking for love in the wrong places part... lol😆 Muuahh.

Originally posted by: A-broken-heart

Awesome part Shahi di..liked the nok-jhok of manyata-jay.uday was bad here.but i think he will be good in the upcoming chap..thanks 4 ur pm.update ASAP dear..