DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

this chap was just awsome

uday is not a nice guy here. he is bad really bad
the way he trated manyata😡
how did he feel that she was some maid
just becuse she belonged to the middle class
manyata was so cute and innocent
hope udays arrogence end real soon
thanks so much for the pm and do update soon
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😊
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Awesome update Shahi.
The first scene with Mr Singh and his lady-friend was very similar to what Reeha wrote in UV Chronicles.
Manyata & Mr Singh's first meeting was fabulous👏. I loved their interaction there ... not to mention , the superb answer Manyata gave him at the end👍🏼.
Waiting to read more,
do continue soon,
thanx for the PM😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
good one
what the hell😡
i didn't like the way uday was and talked 2 manyata
but yeah i can understand
it's imp 4 the progress of the story 😊
and yeah i totally love ur writing skill

😊
Edited by edward123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update

Love your thoughts and views
they are great

So the update begins wid a lady weeping
cuz UV is leaving her
wonder who she is ...
Waiting for the day playboy UV will fall hard for someone
( we all knw who that someone is 😉)

Yaay Manyata ki UV se oops UV ke car se hui takkar 😆
Love Manyata's character here
You portray it beautifully
like Ramsingh i too love M
the way she talked back was superb
she spoke wid respect seeming to insult de maids but it ended
as a witty reply to UV's comments


Hmm if UV meets Kimmy in de Malhotra household
then he is sure to come across M once again
and I suppose he will knw that she isnt a maid



Totally great update
normally i would ask u to continue soon but since u r busy
cont whn u can 😃

Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

I am so sorry Shah 😊 Hope u forgive me 😉
Awesome,superb,cute,fantastic,amazingly beautiful update 👏👏👏 THANKS SANA 😉 DONT BE SORRY
awe kimmy is such a sweet heart 😊 I luv her
she has found her new bady guy ROCKY 😆 LOL ALWAYS LOOKING FOR LOVE IN WRONG PLACES
Dekho Damon 'HITLER AGAYA' Ya ALLAH ye toh pkki jhalli hai 😉 YES SHE IS A JHALLI AND A CUTE ONE AT THAT.😉
she is so cute 😃
OMG!! Manyata ko louis vuitton k baare mai nhi pta 😲 R u kiddin me?? 😆😉 She is clueless with fashion, unlike girls her age.
She such a innocent and good at heart girl ⭐️ thats true...
Karan is a nyc guy 😉 he lyks J Dats nyc bt Damon ka kya hoga🤣 lol... pata nahi kya hoga. karan is a an awesome person
ya prob hai inki tameez nhi hai kya bacche apne frnz k ghr hi toh hai 😡 thats how Mrs Malhotra is
😃
i luv all of them❤️ Thank you
the introductory chap is awesome
U did a splendid job Shah👍🏼
Luv uh🤗

THANKS SANA FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT. GLAD YOU ENJOYED. MUUAAHH😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome Update

Thanks anu😉
Love your thoughts and views
they are great ... glad you like them

So the update begins wid a lady weeping
cuz UV is leaving her
wonder who she is ...😆 she is one his many... lol. Not any1 important according to him
Waiting for the day playboy UV will fall hard for someone... strangely enough.. he wont even realise when he fell..😆
( we all knw who that someone is 😉) 😉😆

Yaay Manyata ki UV se oops UV ke car se hui takkar 😆
Love Manyata's character here
You portray it beautifully
like Ramsingh i too love M
the way she talked back was superb
she spoke wid respect seeming to insult de maids but it ended
as a witty reply to UV's comments
Thanks anu, yes manyata is very responsible, She is also
not as loud and crude. She is very smart and intelligent, she wants
to achieve something in life.. unlike like many her age.
Oh she will show and teach arrogant business man more than you know...😉

Hmm if UV meets Kimmy in de Malhotra household
then he is sure to come across M once again
and I suppose he will knw that she isnt a maid

😆😉 lets wait for next chappie...

Totally great update
normally i would ask u to continue soon but since u r busy
cont whn u can 😃

THANK YOU ANU FOR THIS LOVELY COMMENT. MUUAAH AND THANKS FOR UNDERSTANDING. HUGS
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear...
loved d way manyata talked back to uday...
amazing...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update! that car incident was good! Like n thanks for pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing chapter shahi!!👏
luvd manyata nd MR.SINGH scene so much!!
aww...poor manyata...felt really bad 4r her...
luvd d way she replied to uv!!
thanx 4r d pm dear nd do update soon😛!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
waah waah ...kya baat h!!!!! Pehli meeting me maid bna diya...nxt meeting me kya hoga??? That to u only knw...baaki ka ill comment later..ryt now m in hurry..byee

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