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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm it was reallly very awsum and ro0o0omantic also...😳very beautifully written by you...👏 👏 👏...

me feeling bad 4 manyata...she waits 4 hours and in return got scolded by uday...😭 well tell me whose that sidhant malhotra......well overall very nicely described...loved it to the core...plz do continue so0o0on and thanks 4 the p.m...love u.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

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Love u too dear!! Will update soon.. Thnx for liking my ss.. Well siddhart is the cousin of neelaxi and classmate of manyata in her institution.. Will pm u when will update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Will update soon dear!! But for now examz are there!! Still will try to give it soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome super update plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome very nyc buhot acha haan lakin jaldi update do safia jaldi jaldi likhu n jaldi do i can't more wait episodes was awsome amazing maza agaya n jab bhi likhu so plzzz pm me okkk n buhot acha tha episode sare acha next episode kam millega jaldi next episode do regular diya karo yaar we are loves ur story omaaa sis chapterr 10 soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well today i will update guys...
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I'm back guys after so much days...Sorry!!😭 my examz were over head ..but Alas!! now they are postponed😡 ,STUPID SCHOOLS..😆😉
so guys how'z u all, i missed u so much..Although i was active on this forum but as silent member..FEELS GOOD TO AGAIN UPDATING..well now i'm again free...yeah!!😃..so here i goes..now i think i should stop my chatter box and let u read Chappy 10...😳
____Chapter 10____

Good Morning.. Said an extra happy manyata..
Good morning wifey!! Hmm so may i ask the reason behind ur extra happiness? .. Asked uday..with a high hope..
Yupp!! Today i'm going with all my friends for outing and in maximum three hours i shall be back and then i want u to be ready so that i can take my dear halkat on a date..was manyata's over command..
Uday: princess!! Date and u.. Aww!! It not suits u to take me on a date as this is my job..said to tease his princess..
Manyata: oh mr. Halkat, firstly do correction that date is not a job for any couple and now secondly , why not i can give a date to my dear hubby.. Today i will give u proof for that..
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In evening!!
Manyata returns home a quite late and found uday , whose gestured was glued on her..
Manyata: i know i'm late but sorry... So r u ready??
Uday: yess!! Wifey i m absolutely ready but before going ,i need some simple answers..
Manyata: what answers??
Uday: so u had done a lot of shopping today.. all ur friends did??
Manyata:no only me and s...
Uday: u and ...??
Manyata: uday leave it now naw.. For now , my mood is full of romance so please don't bother..
Uday: no princess no!! I'm sorry to bother u...
Manyata: uday i wasn't mean that.. What matter , with whom i gone..
Uday: it does matter
manyata!! With u r in the company of, i m really irritated by it..
Manyata: uday please!! They are my friends only..!! They are exists in my life after u..i had just done shopping with my friends , so what's wrong..
Uday: ahaaan!! Here u r wrong!! Not friends but friend, a very close friend..
Manyata: uday!! I don't know of what thing u r talking about!! And i gone for shopping and returns after doing it..
Uday: i know princess ,i know !! U gone for shopping and returns after doing it, in fact i also know that whom u done with..
Manyata: uday!! Please makes it clear..
Uday: sidd.. Sidd is the reason of which i'm talking about..why u lied princess why??
Manyata: i lied?? No uday!! U r mistaken.. I can never ever lie to u..
Uday: then! Then why u said tht u r going with ur all friends rather than only sidd..
Manyata: uday!! I was about to go with all my friends , in fact i reached at the mall on time but suddenly Ria informed me that our group has to attend a meeting in the institute, i also urged to join them but they said that they will manage and then they send sidd to accompany me..it was all just a co-incidence uday!! Nothing more is there at all..

Uday realized that he shouted at her princess more than he should.. He hurt his princess, the person that he loved more than nothing, and for this he was blaming and fighting with himself inside..

On the other hand. Manyata very well know that he is opposite of sidd and her closing so thought of just make a safe distance b/t her and sidd.. She was aware that her hubby will obviously blame himself for hurting her princess so she comforts him..

She make him sit on the sofa, cupped his face with her soft hands, which were no less pleasure full than heaven to him..
Manyata: uday !! u know very well that my life starts on you and ends on you..!! Nothing is more than u in my life, i only belong to u,, And will always!!u know whenever u think that u hurt ur princess then there u r wrong.. Even u give me spirit to love u more.. U don't hurt or even i don't get hurt as this is called ur concern for me which is really meant to me.. I love u more than nothing else, u r my life..

With that a drop of tear form in her eyes..

Uday: shhh!! I don't want any explanation of ur love for me,, as it is clear on ur face.. And don't ever forget that i love u too than myself.. I was , i'm, and i will always be present in ur heart if i'm not with u or may be in this life..
Manyata: shhh!! Hatt veree!! Kuch bhi bol dete ho.. Rula diya na mujhe.. And it will not happens ever and if it might happens then i will minimize our distances either it would be separation or death..
Uday: shhh!! It will never happen.. And now enough rona dhona!! So ab chalen.. He offered her his arm..
Manyata: uday!! I want to spent today all the time with u..and the best place is our room where no one will disturb us..
Uday: but princess!! I said i'm sorry..
Manyata: uday don't feel sorry.. It was not ur mistake!!
Uday :then ??
Manyata: uday i want to spent all time with u and the best place is where we are!! Today i want nobody to disturb us..
Uday: hmmm... So that means tht today's night will gonna be really long!!
Manyata: absolutely .,,
saying this she closed the windows and switch off lights too of their room..
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After so many days , again manyata happened to had a get together with her friends so obviously sidd would have been there..
Uday: woah!! Princess so much beauty is here so i need to go in search of a angel for tonight until u come back!!
Manyata: really if i m full of beauty so u no need to go anywhere thts why i m sa...
Uday: shhh!!He gently place his finger on her lips and continued: thts why i m saying k hum aj humari princess yahan se utha k lejate hain..
Manyata: acha !! Aur mujhe le jao ge... Me yahin to hoon tumhare paas..
Uday: han ho to tum humare pas hi but phr bhi hum apni princess k sath akele time spent karna chahte hain...
Manyata: jo hukum mere halkat vere!! sab kuch tere bare me hi toh hai...
Uday: haan nhi toh!!
He offered her his arm and said: chalen!!
Manyata: kahan??
Uday: doosri baar shaadi karne..
Manyata: hunhhhnn...
Uday: obviously princess !! To the function place..
Manyata: but i thought that i was going with driver..
Uday: okay !! If u don't wanna spent sometime with ur hubby on a drive so u can go with dri...
Manyata: no no!! I m coming with u...
Uday: great!! Chalen...
She gave him a wide smile...
after a drive of 1 and half an hour they reached on tht place, where manyata's all friends were waiting for her including sidd..
Manyata: ab me jaon..?
Uday: nhi!! Ek kaam karte hain ,hum wapis ghar chalte hain..
Manyata: theek hai!! Chalo.. Jessi teri marzi..
Uday: okay great!! He started car in order to give manyata an idea tht they are going..
Manyata: uday stop the car.. I was jxt kidding.. Let me go!!
Uday: so was i!! Okay go ...
They both hug tightly before leaving..
Bye.. Said manyata..

Manyata: hey guys!! Sab bahir yahan pr.. Everything is fine naww??
Arjun: everything is not fine with sidd!!
Manyata: why?? What happened to u sidd..?? ,,, she asked concernly to sidd..
Arjun: why u r asking him..
Let me tell u what actually happened.. Ye janab past half hour se hume yahan bahir khara kiya hua hai k jab tak manyata nhi aati tab tak hum ander nhi jaen ge.. So mr. Sidd chalen!!
Sidd: why the hell u told her all that...
Manyata: toh ab chalen!!
Han.. All said in one voice..
This whole scene was witnessed by uday which made him now more anguish.. Uday had now enough!!
On the other hand, manyata after the party , goes to refresh herself and after a while she came out of washroom and jumped highly and so much highly as she would definitely touch the stars.. She watch her reflexion in the mirror and said:
uday today i'm so much happy and definitely u will also be after hearing this news!! I know tht in past few days we had so much up and downs in our relationship but now this is the moment to start a new life with a new bless..
She text uday:
Uday, i have a SURPRISE for u so rather than sending driver to pick me up, plz u urself come.. SEPARATELY!!
She waited alot and after an hour shilpa said tht: manyata ur driver has arrived to pick up u!!
Manyata: driver!! Okay bye guys!!

She reached palace and headed direct to her room..
Before changing ,she saw tht uday already fell asleep and also she checked his cellphone and noticed that he did read her msg but why he didn't came himself to pick up her?? Now what happened to him?? Isn't now he eager for her surprise?? And that too damn huge surprise of their life that she is PREGNANT!!... So many questionz were revolving around her mind..
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Next morning she woke up early in the morning because she couldn't sleep well until giving her soulmate the biggest surprise of their life..
But found that uday had already waken up and he was in bathroom so she waited for him and made a hot black coffee for him with her hands..
Manyata: uday!! Uday!! Suno naww!! Ye lo mene khud ye coffee apne hathon se banai hai..
Uday: manyata!! I had already drunk coffee..
Manyata: but!! Ok .. Uday aj ghar shaam ko jaldi aana.. Mujhe tumhe kahin lekr jana hai.. Ek SURPRISE dena hai.. Well surprise se yaad aya k kal tumne mera msg parhne k bawajood bhi lene nhi aae..
Uday: woh humare sar me dard tha.. And manyata aj hum busy honge so nhi aa paen ge jaldi..
Manyata: nhi!! Aj to tumhe aana hi pare ga.. Mene keh diya so keh diya!! Han nhi toh..
Uday: bas karo manyata!! Had hoti hai bachkane pan aur middle class romance ki.. Yeh sab ek had tak hi acha lagta hai..'ab ho gaya ya abhi bhi koi drama rehta hai..
He scolded poor manyata and left a numb manyata behind..
She set on the floor by the side of the bed and place her head on the corner of the bed and cried her heart out..
Manyata: why uday why?? Why u r again and again repeating the same drama.. Every-time there is not my mistake but still u always scold me and leave me hurt..
Why uday why?? Till yesterday u was all very happy but now what happened to u again?? Uday now what's my mistake?? Only i was giving u the biggest happiness of our life, then now whats wrong with u??...

The whole day she awaited for uday and night too and at last he came but give her the news that the next day he will leave for america on a business trip..which gave manyata the biggest shock that how she will wait for so many days...
The next day he left india for america...
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After two days he called her just to pacify himself that is his princess all right?? As how much he show his anger and frustration to her princess, but inside in his heart he loves only person in his life and thats too to the core of his heart and the person is his own princess.. And u know tht the person who loves someone most ,always show his anger to them!!
Her phone ringed crazily until she receive it.. Fresh tears form in her eyes after coming to know that its uday's call..
Manyata: hello!!
Uday: hello!!
Kesi ho manyata??...
Listening his soft voice , hot tears again flow out of her eyes, her whole soul was missing him and after hearing his voice , she became more eager to meet him, and let him know the biggest surprise..
Uday: princess...!! Princess ro kyon rhi ho...
Manyata: uday tum wapis kab aaoge..
Uday: boht jaldi..
Manyata: nhi uday!! Mein tumhare bina adhoori hoon.. Bas boht hogaya !! Mujhe yeh bhi nhi pata k meri galti kya hai k tum mujh se itne door chale gae ho..
Uday: no princess, there isn't any mistake of yours.. I'm also terribly missing u!! I will come back SOON..
Manyata: uday tum jaldi ajao.. Mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai.. Hum ek ,, ek nai zindagi ki shiruwat karen ge...
Uday: yes princess... A NEW LIFE,, we will definitely start.. Where no one would be between us..
There talk was continue for hours, manyata fell asleep.. He knew that his princess would probably fall sleep if he will talk to her it will comfort her..
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The next morning, uday done his first and foremost work; the ticket of back to India ,to his PRINCESS!!

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So, Guys i'm done with my this Chapter!! i know its short but trust me, i really don't have courage to write a really long chapter..Though i expect to get long chapters from other writers like Navina, Sarah and Saloni and yeah Andy also but i for myself has neither courage nor has so much power of thinking...
so like this chapter and leave your pretty well comments as they meant to me alot and they give me courage to write another...😳

😊😊😊SAFIA😊😊😊...
Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update safia
uday looked cute when he was jeolous
manveer is having a lot of misunderstandings
felt bad for manyata
great work
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum chapter safia...

feeling bad for manyata... hope uday cum to know that is pregnant in the next chapter.

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Lovely update safia
uday looked cute when he was jeolous
manveer is having a lot of misunderstandings
felt bad for manyata
great work
continue soon

It feels good andy when u comment on my post...well i hope i can headed on ur all expectationz frm me!! thanx for comment...😳

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