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it was so sweet dear...like the possessive Uday...
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aww well double dose...both chapters were awsumm...👏
uday was so0o0o much possesive...GOD he cant bear that someone is droping her wife home...well loved it to the core...

keep it up and thanks 4 the p.m...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome super awesome
Aww I lovd jealousy udayveer
Please update super soon
This was fab * claps
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sorry for the late comment
nice chap dear continue soon
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____Chapter :9____


Manyata was waiting for her dear hubby, until her dear hubby would come and they have dinner.. that had as if ,it was her duty to wait till uday would and they may have their dinner peacefully as their breakfast.


But today , uday was still late , it's 12 O'clock if am; otherwise he came at 8 O'clock or sometimes late but 10 would have enough than ever... (Nowdays uday was going to his hotel bcoz ,griraj had gone to a international trip, otherwise uday used to do his work from home , rather than office or going to hotels.)


Manyata is known about the situation that this tic-tic of work is for few days, after than her father-in-law will return and then her hubby will use to stay at home and do his work well from home and will spent some time with her as usual or before, so she was in patience. But today manyata had enough , she was waiting for him for past 4 hours and rather than returning home soon , he even not responding her call or calling her back.


Manyata:yeh uday ka bacha kahan jake khasmano kha raha hai..
Instantly she became serious:kya huaa hai uday, kyon tum mera phone nhi utha rahe. Aj subha tak to theek the tum phir ab kya hua hai tumhe. Mera phone to uthao, mujh se baat to karo, mujhe batao k meri galti kya hai ya phir kyon tum mujhe ignore kar rahe ho...


She was still thinking when her cell phone beeped which causes to breaking her chain of thoughts.
Message by Halkat vera: ( it was his caller name which he tempted her to save like this otherwise she saved the name as Hubby ; earlier..)


Manyata , may be i would come late because some important work .
So don't wait for me..

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Manyata:what the... Me tumhare liye itni der se intazar kar rhi hoon aur tum ho k ek call bhi nhi kar sakte.. Aae barre Yuvraaj banne , ek call to kar nhi sakte.huhh!! Ajaa Udayveer ,, nhi nhi mera matlab dear hubby ,, mein bhi dekhti hoon k me tum se kese baat karti hoon. Haan nhi toh.. Soon her jungli billi awoken..

There uday was boiling in anger. He fist his hand in anger by holding a vine glass, the glass broke and blood starts oozing of his hand. Unnati , who came there to had some gossips with his dada , observed that how his dada is giving pain to himself.


Unnati:dada itni chot hai apko doctor ko dikhana chahiye, chaliye abhi hamare sath..
Uday: patti (bandage) to kabhi bhi laga dein ge chotti hum is zakham pe , per abhi hum isse taza rakhna chahte hain, Jab tak is chot ki yad nhi aae gi to usse hum chot kese denge...

Unnati:usse ? Usse kise?...
Uday: ab tum dekhti jao chotti , chot hume lagi hai per iska dard, isska dard us Siddhart Malhotra ko hoga.

He soon rushed out of the bar, leaving poor Unnati confused and worried behind.
Unnati:ohh god!! Dada please gisse me aaker koi esa kadam mat uthaiye ga jisse ap hi ko dard ho.. I hope everything would be fine..

After thinking so much ,she decided to call her bhabhi sa' and tell her about her dada but then she drop the idea down and thought that rather than make her bhabhi sa' tensed too; its best that she should calm the situation down..

Manyata was too upset that whenever she's upset she used to write poetries.. And thither too wrote in her diary:

Dear silly diary,
Whenever i become upset then i use u or take your comfort, so means that i m selfish and greedy.. But din't u think that mr. Halkat verra yerra is also soo so so greedy.. Whatever he wants he can do? No he can't as now he is married , he has no right to ignore me. Well the moral is that every one is selfish unless u.. (Smiles)
Well today my poetry is on Uday , as always, because there i naught anything more than him for me in my life.. i m not angry with him nor agree with his antics but whatever he has done today for the first time.. So i m a bit upset but when he will come, i will solve out all the confusion. Until he come; i needs u to help me in writing poetry.. Okay..

~~Believe in first sight~~
I was literary bespoken,
Never thought of a true friend,
That would be believable,
Then We met in a gloomy day,
It was in the library first,
Spoted at the garden then,
With my childish antics , i was wondering,
I then pinch my head to be composed,
I knew with the corner of my eye,
That u r believable with the sigh of high,
Thou wert, innocent but ,
My heart was revolving around something,
I besought thou, to wax a friend,
Ye accept my beseech to impress,
I canst believe u over-many,
I dearth to train me royalty as proby,
After believing thee,
Only wanna seek to fulfill ye promise,
U r fulsome fere , henceforth.

Oops , the door knocked ; i think its Uday.. So bye bye will see u tomorrow till then gotta go.. After all i also have to give time to my hubby also.. Ba' bye..

She immediately set on the bed with some books , pretending like that she is busy in her institute work, and a bit angry on him but in reality she wasn't..
Uday came in the room, but first he changed and then set besides her on the other side of the bed.. He swift his hand on her books to close them but she forbid by exclaiming:

Uday please, let me finish out this work..
Uday:but princess its already too late so its better to keep this aside and sleep well with me..He winks..

Thought she was attracted by his antics and pretend just like she is ignoring him..
Manyata:uday please .. Jab me tumhe phone kar rhi thi tab to tumhe ye nhi pata tha k late ho raha hai, aur ab aye bare mujhe batane.. Me kaam kar k so jaon gi.. Agar tumhe sona ha to so jao..


On the other hand, uday ; who was clam down thought that it was sidds mistake rather than her princess ; soon retarded into anger..
Uday:theek hai..
He off the lights of his side , cover himself with the blanket and sleep..
Manyata:huhhnn... Lo karlo baat mene ek baar kya keh diya k so jao aur mujhe choro.. Aur janaab so bhi gae bina doobara kuh bole.. Shadi se pehle to jaan nhi chorta tha aur ajj.. Ye sahi hai pehle khud galti karo aur phir nakhre bhi khud karo... Haan nhi toh..


She once again see him whether he is actually sleepy or not, but poor baby found her hubby sleeping well..

The next morning , Uday , for the first time was going to office without informing manyata, but poor uday was caught behind by his wifey..
Uday:
what...? .questioningly.
Manyata:mene jo shirt nikali thi wo kyon nhi pehni?
Uday:its not your matter..
Manyata:whatever belongs to u is my matter also.. Understand.. I m your wife.
Uday:manyata its fetting late , i have to go, baki ki behess baad me karen ge..
Manyata: mujh se naraz hoke soe the mujh se naraz ho k office mat jao..
Uday:manyata hum tumse nhi hain..
Manyata:achha!! Per manyata to tum mujhe tabhi bolte ho jab mujh se naraz hote ho..
Uday:esa kuch nhi hai..She tried to go but again she holds his hand..

Manyata after much frustrating:uday meri galti kya hai akhir mujhe to pata chale.. Mene kiya hi kya hai.. Kyon tum mujhe saza de rahe ho itni barri, tumhe pata hai na k tumhari princess tumhare bagair ek din bhi nhi reh sakti , to phir kyon kar rage ho tum esa..

Fresh hot tears dare to roll down of her eyes..Uday calm down after seeing her princess in such condition.
He soak her few tears with his hand and some with his lips.
Uday:
shhh!! Princess ab ek aur lafz nhi hmmm!! Hum tumse khafa nhi hain.. Aur jahan tak naraz hone ki baat hai to wo to her husband and wife k beech hota hai tabhi to pleasure night aati ek doosre ko manane k liye.. He winks..
Manyata:haaww!! Halkat vere bhoot kahin k .. Aj kal bari ashleel batein karne laga hai tu..
Uday:haan nhi toh...
Manyata:hmmm per me chahti hoon k hamari zindagi ka her ek pal pleasure full ho..
Uday:wooaw !! Sounds good..so what about now... Making their distance small and closing to her..
Manyata:
uday tu bhi na koi ek moka nhi chorta..chal ab jaa..
Uday:chale jaen gr chale jaen ge.. Per soch lo princess wapis bhi issi room me aana hai..
Manyata:wo baad ki baat hai abhi tu jaa..
Uday was going when she stops him as she saw her face in the mirror which had a spot of blood. Obviously it wasn't before so her point was on him..
Manyata:apna hath dikhana ,..
Uday: hath per kyon.. Don't tell me k tum hume mehendi lagana chahti ho..
Manyata:very funny uday.. Mujhe pata hai k tu mujh se chupane ki koshish kar raha hai per me bhi teri bivi hoon.. Samjha..
She hold his hand and saw his palm which was still little bit fresh.. As he had not aid it and also he took bath so obviously it would happen, the wound again became fresh.
Manyata:Uday itni bari chot lagi aur tune mujhe batana bhi zaroiri nhi samjha..
Uday: princess calm down itni bhi bari chot nhi hai..
She touches his injury and he blurted out in screaming: ouchh!! Princess aram se..
Manyata:ye sahi hai .. Itni bari chot lagi hai phir bhi jhoot bol rahe ho..
She immediately first aid his wounds and said " ho gaya" by closing the cap of antiseptic cream..
He caresses her cheek:princess now i m ok..don't care for me that much!!

Manyata:ussi ka to dar hai...

he looked confused..

Manyata:arreh!! tu jaa na aur han aj raat agar der se aae to mujh se bura aur koi nhi hoga..

Uday:my dear princess, i promise that i will be back soon...hmmm..

before leaving both had a passionate kiss, which has the promise of living with each other FOREVER...

So, guys here this chapter 9 ends..now wait for few days for the next update...hit like if u love this update and if u don't then too like this update..😉.and leave your precious comments because it meant to me alot!!😃..and the credit of the poetry "believe in first sight" goes to me, i wrote this for someone special...😳but then thought that it would also be suit on Manveer too..now i m sleepy🥱,,bye..thanks..😊

Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsomee...update
awwieee...mlast anveer scene was soo..cute
plzz...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear
the poetry was nice
love the manveer scenes
do update soon and thanks for the double pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for being late. I'm very busy. Awesome update. Very nice. But who is siddharth molhotora??
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
super duper
manveer scenes were very nice
do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Sorry for being late. I'm very busy. Awesome update. Very nice. But who is siddharth molhotora??

First of all dear thanks for liking my story , it really meant to me alot!! now secondly if u haven't read previous chapters then i tell u that Siddhart Malhotra is classmate of Manyata in her eduction institute, as she was enrolled since Murari lal kidnapped her but now uday has decided to styudy manyata further to become a powerful queen of DEVGARDH and even JAIGARDH riyasat...again thanks...😳

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