'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#921

Udayveer is too smart ...

do take the story forward

thank you for the PM

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harika04angel

@harika04angel

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#922

do cntinueee 😛 pleaaase!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: serat
really good update thanks so much
plzzz
contiuneee
ur sotry i will, thanks for your support😃
sad for manayta :(
bechari ne sare proofs laye the magar
magar usi par sab kuj ulta para thats uday, the smart villian😃

nd plz contiuneur story
plzzz

thanks for this lovely comment😳

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa
supreb nd mindblowing update👏 thanks dear😃...i love the way uday made a fool of manyata😉...videos from hollywood action movie nd pictures of srk nd katrina...how smartly he removed all the evidences...this was the punishment of manyata for betraying uday... yes, uday is not a forgiving person 😆i love the speech of uday in courtroom...finally he is innocent in the sight of court nd public...pls keep it continue...i want to read manveer marrige and their romance...nd thnx for pm...

thanks dear for this lovely comment 😆

i will continue it😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#925

Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey... It was a lovely update thanks dear
I am super happy tht uday is left...

Now we wud be getting manveer romance...

And uday forcing... I luv the evil uday...

Update soon... and pls pm me for the next part...

thanks so much for the lovely comment

will pm you😃

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#926

Hi Andy 😊. Both chapters were fabulous 👏. I loved it immensely😳! I'm commenting (PROPERLY) after a long time on this ss , because it's only NOW that I'm satisfied with the way the story is going. U made Uday into a POWERFUL CHARACTER , who's strong , manipulative , calculating and extremely intelligent. But it became hard to fathom the way he got arrested 😕... I didn't find it believable that such a towering personality , got caught so easily ; in fact - SO STUPIDLY. Yes , LOVE weakens a person ... but not to that much of an extent which it affected Mr Shark. To tell u the truth , I was most dissappointed ... that YOUR story , which was built up to an incredible magnitude ; took such a turn. As I said earlier , it was not sensible for a character like MR Shark , to take such a mighty fall. I didn't like it 1 bit. But now I'm (again) enthusiastic about what's gonna happen next. U just fooled the readers by getting the protagonist caught😆 , but he's free again ... so , I'm expecting a lot of drama to unfold😉. It was a superb tactic by Mr Shark to free himself - well done with that Andy. U did a great job there👏. Eager to see how he gets Manyata to be his wife . Enjoyed the chapters ,

please update fast ,

thanks 4 the pM😊 ,

sorry for the late comment (but u know about my recent laziness😆)!

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey... It was a lovely update
thanks dear

I am super happy tht uday is left...even i am😃

Now we wud be getting manveer romance...

And uday forcing... I luv the evil uday...

Update soon... and pls pm me for the next part...

thanks dear, loved the comment😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Ok now...This chapter needs to get ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️these many stars... gargi, thanks sooo much😃

R u crazy?...we not wanting Uday to be set free?😲😲..Who is that reader who wants him to be in Jail?😡😡😡...i want that person dead😆😆..sorry joking.. but on the contrary i would have hated you if you would have given a verdict against Uday...even i wanted uday to be free, i planned it long time back

MY UV IS TOO SMART...How well he deleted all the evidence against him...I loved it the way he made Manyata a fool...iam glad that you liked it

Ur FF plot is a very intelligent one andy n this shows ur intelligence...The way u reveal everything, n specially the game plans...UV knew he would be betrayed!!...that left me speechless😲👏thanks gargi, mr shark is such a smart criminal and it would look stupid if he was caught in such a way

I liked his speech in the court room, how he helped her dig a grave for him, n then threw her in it...The last lines were the best where he announces his next plan of action--To make HER HIS😉!👏👏... yes, even i loved that part

Sorry to those who think me to be a psycho or evil as i am in support of Uday n against Manyata...But this is me...The crazy Udayveer lover n will always be😆😆even iam a crazy udayveer fan

thanks gargi, for this lovely comment, i loved it

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: ...anju...
hey andy...superb mindblowing updates.loved it a loads andy dear.👏 thanks so much anju😃

hehehe...ente ponne njan chirichu chathu. hats off to ur humour sense athraku chiricho, sandoshamayi😃

.⭐️wat have i just read.those video were from hollywood action movie and

convo of a bollywood movie. den photos of srk and katrina.🤣🤣

loved it ya thanks anju😃

hmmm manyata got punishmentfor betraying uday.very good.ashus face

uday ayi kanumbol i felt so happy lol thanks dear.but was it correct decision to set free

a criminal.felt little bit sad for wat happened wid manyata.😲actually mr shark is such a smart criminal and it would be stupid if he was jailed, so it had to be that way. you cant mes with mr shark

andy i like ur investigative way of writing.futureil oru detective akaanulla

sadyatha undu dear👏.anno, ithu vare angane thoniyilla

yeah we want d story to continue.plz give promo. we want manveer romance

and marriage.😆

now cant wait.try to update soon.waiting for ur next update😃

thanks anju for this lovely comment, loved it😃