'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 92

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update!
Loved it to the core!
Plzz don't end it soon.
Poor manyata people think she is insane.
Waiting for manveeer to unite but
Uday should be punished for his deeds because
He is wrong.
Beautifully written Andy.
Do continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I edited my comment on page 123
LittleDhampir. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, let me have a celebration of mine
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

I am so happy..I love you Andy uncle for this update☺️
Atlast, Uday is out..Uday is free. He is proved as innocent in front of the court
He's too smart for Manyata...he knew it all along and I'm loving it.
So princess, my next aim is simple, I won't rest till you become mine, mrs udayveer singh. ..I can't wait to see it hppen

But exactly how will Manveer happen?? I am sure you will make them together. But how?? I would like to see that😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper great Andy...
loved it loads...
poor manyata trapped badly...
Uday ka dimag off
agar ye dimag ache keliye use kiya hora to...
anyways awesome
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper great Andy...
loved it loads...
poor manyata trapped badly...
Uday ka dimag uff
agar ye dimag ache keliye use kiya hora to...
anyways awesome
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey it ws too good n do continue it
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Posted: 12 years ago

hello papa😊

before i give my cmt on your ff. i want to say sumthing about u. nd that's

"U never stop shocking us"

many of your twists turned out to be shocking(in a positive way😳).but today's update was shocking in the most amazing way.👏.

chapter 26

before reding youe ff u should add a tagline actually u can give us a warning nd that's "expect the unexpected". ac to promo nd everything mujhe laga atleast manyata ke pass kuch dhang ka saboot hoga(which made me worried). jaise woh apne so called proofs ko leke uchal rahi thi🤣. i never thought the proofs will be turned out to be a drama in front of everyone. esp the way u scared us all by saying about rajat's video , i must say that was really evil of u bc the video turned out to be a clip from eng movie😡. u better not do that again😡. uff court mei manyata ki solid beijjati ho gayi🤣. i'm feeling pity for her. she shuld've been more careful. i mean come on Uday the one nd only mr. shark apne sare evidence plate mei sajake thodi rakhe ga. M should've used her common sense. but i couldn't understand this part

"She takes the book out and waits for the shelf to rotate. Nothing happened. She again took another book out, still nothing. She began to take all books out one by one, throwing then down in anger still nothing happened. Jaggat got irritated"

Uday ne apna shelf kaise change kia😲.

i was really xcited while reading this chap. surely this chap was a big relief for all of us. bc we don't want uday to be hanged. but to be honest the way he killed M's friend it was horrible. for this he deserves mental punishment. nd yup i want a happy ending wid manveer. but still uday need to be changed for that.

scroll down for my next cmt😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter 26.1

"love is blind,but this is not the case when it's MR.shark😉"

yes i'm happy wid the fact that u didn;t make uday a love sick puupy. this goes the same wid manyata though she loved uday she didn't forget her duty. one hand m was doing her duty on the other hand uday was doing what he should do to survive. i can't blame him for that.now the most discussed topic of your promo was uday crying.but it turned out to be crocodile tears🤣 . which i quite enjoyed. so "the best dramebaj of the ss award goes to Uday"

claps for uday pls👏. bc he did quite well😉..

ok this was quite unexpected(pointing down)

chill baby, there is another reason why I left you alive, you are my first love and will remain so for ever. So princess, my next aim is simple, I won't rest till you become mine, mrs udayveer singh. And even know I love you

after the trial i expected uday to hate manyata nd in case of M i expected her to fear for her life. but yaha toh kuch ulta hi hua. but still the way i expected the story to move agar aisa hota toh manveer kabhi nahi milta. but m happy that u managed to free uday nd yeah manveer's on the way now i can see that😊.

so thaku soo much for keeping our req nd setting uday free🤗.

looking forward to the story now. let's see what happens.😉

phew i'm tired now . i shall leave now . bye . nd yeah do update soon😉

Edited by Jarin04 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg I mean no doubt how much bad uday is but still I cant see him punished and neither manyata.. really loved the court scene uday is smarter lol please do continue this story its awesome and I would love to see romance between manveer so please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update andy!!👏

loved it,😳 well I am with uday. ☺️and whatever happened with manyata she deserved it!! 😡she betrayed uday😭 who loved her truely.😳 the best thing is that she fell in her own trap. 😆 i loved the court seen so much. uday is so so smart & intelligent.😛 how did manyata think she can get him into jail forever 😆 the last part, OHH☺️ Mrs. Udayveer Singh😳.

I want to see ManVeer marriage and romance.☺️🤬please update soon andy😉 & Thanks for the PM.😃

i wanted to ask something😳
when ManVeer had SEX☺️ did he use condom?😛

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