'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 95

Originally posted by: andy.a

pari, thanks sooo much for this lovely comment. i really say you make a good detective, i think you take it from your "papa"

Originally posted by: Jarin04

chapter 26.1

"love is blind,but this is not the case when it's MR.shark😉" ya i know😃, i made it like that for a change😆

yes i'm happy wid the fact that u didn;t make uday a love sick puupy. this goes the same wid manyata though she loved uday she didn't forget her duty. one hand m was doing her duty on the other hand uday was doing what he should do to survive. i can't blame him for that.now the most discussed topic of your promo was uday crying i know, it was just to mislead the readers😆 .but it turned out to be crocodile tears🤣 . he he he which i quite enjoyed. so "the best dramebaj of the ss award goes to Uday" na, its for mr shark😆

claps for uday pls👏. bc he did quite well😉..

ok this was quite unexpected(pointing down)

chill baby, there is another reason why I left you alive, you are my first love and will remain so for ever. So princess, my next aim is simple, I won't rest till you become mine, mrs udayveer singh. And even know I love you

after the trial i expected uday to hate manyata nd in case of M i expected her to fear for her life. but yaha toh kuch ulta hi hua. but still the way i expected the story to move agar aisa hota toh manveer kabhi nahi milta. i know, it had to be that way or i will be creating problems for myself😃 so i put them together but m happy that u managed to free uday nd yeah manveer's on the way now i can see that😊. not in the distant future

so thaku soo much for keeping our req nd setting uday free🤗i would have done it even otherwise, see just like i said before to mislead the readers, manveer is indeed on the way.

looking forward to the story now. let's see what happens.😉

phew i'm tired now .my poor pari😭 i shall leave now . bye . nd yeah do update soon😉

Originally posted by: preya_radev

omg I mean no doubt how much bad uday is but still I cant see him punished and neither manyata. ya i too agree iwth you. really loved the court scene uday is smarter lol please do continue this story its awesome and I would love to see romance between manveer so please update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Awesome update andy!!👏thanks zina😃

loved it,😳 well I am with uday. ☺️and whatever happened with manyata she deserved it!! 😡she betrayed uday😭 who loved her truely.😳 the best thing is that she fell in her own trap. 😆 i loved the court seen so much. uday is so so smart & intelligent.😛 how did manyata think she can get him into jail forever 😆 the last part, OHH☺️ Mrs. Udayveer Singh😳.ya even iam excited for that part

I want to see ManVeer marriage and romance.☺️🤬please update soon andy😉 & Thanks for the PM.😃 welcome zina😃

i wanted to ask something😳

when ManVeer had SEX☺️ did he use condom?😛 what do i answer? no, they did not, please no more questions iam getting embarresed

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Udayveer is too smart ...

do take the story forward

thank you for the PM

Originally posted by: harika04angel

do cntinueee 😛 pleaaase!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy 😊.hi navi😃 Both chapters were fabulous 👏. I loved it immensely😳!really? thanks navi 😳 I'm commenting (PROPERLY) after a long time on this ss , because it's only NOW that I'm satisfied with the way the story is going.navi, you should have told me long agao about it na, i would have done anything for you, if the story permits😆 U made Uday into a POWERFUL CHARACTER , who's strong , manipulative , calculating and extremely intelligent. But it became hard to fathom the way he got arrested 😕... i know but such a calculative mind made sure it would neveer ever be repeated again I didn't find it believable that such a towering personality , got caught so easily ; in fact - SO STUPIDLY. actually uday brought that arrest on himself, his expressions everything was acting, he is a drama king Yes , LOVE weakens a person ... but not to that much of an extent which it affected Mr Shark. but was he actually affected, i doubt so. he was calculative and cunning all round the way . he purposedly created evidence, just to fool manyta To tell u the truth , I was most dissappointed ... that YOUR story , which was built up to an incredible magnitude ; took such a turn.another trick by my side, but navi didnt i tell you about the future of the story long back, i mentioned to you in one year manyta gets engaged to someone and akll that, then how will he be in jail, and if you had read any of my replies to chitra, i did tell uday has a future with manyta without any problem As I said earlier , it was not sensible for a character like MR Shark , to take such a mighty fall. I didn't like it 1 bit. navi sometimes you do fall when you dont watch your step But now I'm (again) enthusiastic about what's gonna happen next. U just fooled the readers by getting the protagonist caught😆 , but he's free again ... so , I'm expecting a lot of drama to unfold😉.actually i need to do somethinking to get some drama, my plot is too straighforward from now on😭😭 It was a superb tactic by Mr Shark to free himself - well done with that Andy. U did a great job there👏. Eager to see how he gets Manyata to be his wife . even i want to see, i relly dont know, got to put my thinking hat on😕 Enjoyed the chapters ,

please update fast , after other 3

thanks 4 the pM😊 ,

sorry for the late comment (but u know about my recent laziness😆)! i wonder wher eyou learned it from😆

Originally posted by: fireroad99

awesome

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Well done... 👏
Loved it... 👍🏼

Do cont soon...
N do pm me...