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heya Andy
I commented long back on dis FF dat i'll read it soon and atlast i read itni sadiyon baad🤣
OMFG!!! I regret reading this story so late Sorry
This is an awesome piece of writing Andy
The stories prologue ws so intresting👍🏼
i started reading d story at 2 am and finished it by 4 am the chapters were so thrilling ki ek chap pdhne k baad dusra chap pdhna ws must😊
pehle mujhe lga dat rohan is mr.shark then i thought ots Ajay bt jb vo mr shark ldki bnke gya or jb uday nxt day rohan ki body dekhne k liye gya tb mujhe yakeen tha dat uday is mr.sharks i am so intelligent🤣
uday ws potrayed as shareefta ki murti bt ye toh kaatil no.1 nikala🤣
bt komal wanted manyata dead ws d biggest shock how could she even think lyk dat i hate her
I am still imagining uday in dat dress all waxed acting lyk a girl ...Andy u cracked me up when rohan thought dat she ws not his usual type🤣
bt how could he kill someone lyk dat i noe he has a dreadful past bt dat doean't mean dat he'll kill people so brutually
Kapoor and suraj deserved a dealth lyk dat bt sharma,rohan and all other people were also killed so brutually y is so???
if it gives him satisfaction by killing ppl lyk dis then he need some kind of help or therapy *manyata's help and love therapy* accha idea haina
ohk so Mr. shark ws fully aware that manyata will trap him god he is so intelligent i luv him😳
Bt manyata ne party mai ajay ko disgusting kyu bola???
Jagat is a gr8 man bt he is dumb bewacoof and manyata she is supa dumb pta nhi kyu mr.shark ko phasaya ab uska kya hoga😆
unnzie k sath uss kamine suraj ne theek nhi kiya i so hate him 🤢 or ye unnzie unnzie mai sbko accha confuse kiya tumne mai vhi soch rhi thi ki yaar marna toh uday ki family ne haina bt fr once thought its ajay's sister unnzie🤣
manyata is so mad at him now😆
tujhe or suspense/thriller likhni chahiye
This ws an awesome,mindblowing,rapchik,fantabulous,fantastic,mind bogglingly amazing Story i hope it continues to be d same even more better
Yippie nxt chappy se romance hoga lalallal i am dancing
i luv dis FF of urs
u did a splendid job
Thanxx a ton fr d pm[>:D]
hasta la vista tc
I commented long back on dis FF dat i'll read it soon and atlast i read itni sadiyon baad🤣
OMFG!!! I regret reading this story so late Sorry
This is an awesome piece of writing Andy
The stories prologue ws so intresting👍🏼
i started reading d story at 2 am and finished it by 4 am the chapters were so thrilling ki ek chap pdhne k baad dusra chap pdhna ws must😊
pehle mujhe lga dat rohan is mr.shark then i thought ots Ajay bt jb vo mr shark ldki bnke gya or jb uday nxt day rohan ki body dekhne k liye gya tb mujhe yakeen tha dat uday is mr.sharks i am so intelligent🤣
uday ws potrayed as shareefta ki murti bt ye toh kaatil no.1 nikala🤣
bt komal wanted manyata dead ws d biggest shock how could she even think lyk dat i hate her
I am still imagining uday in dat dress all waxed acting lyk a girl ...Andy u cracked me up when rohan thought dat she ws not his usual type🤣
bt how could he kill someone lyk dat i noe he has a dreadful past bt dat doean't mean dat he'll kill people so brutually
Kapoor and suraj deserved a dealth lyk dat bt sharma,rohan and all other people were also killed so brutually y is so???
if it gives him satisfaction by killing ppl lyk dis then he need some kind of help or therapy *manyata's help and love therapy* accha idea haina
ohk so Mr. shark ws fully aware that manyata will trap him god he is so intelligent i luv him😳
Bt manyata ne party mai ajay ko disgusting kyu bola???
Jagat is a gr8 man bt he is dumb bewacoof and manyata she is supa dumb pta nhi kyu mr.shark ko phasaya ab uska kya hoga😆
unnzie k sath uss kamine suraj ne theek nhi kiya i so hate him 🤢 or ye unnzie unnzie mai sbko accha confuse kiya tumne mai vhi soch rhi thi ki yaar marna toh uday ki family ne haina bt fr once thought its ajay's sister unnzie🤣
manyata is so mad at him now😆
tujhe or suspense/thriller likhni chahiye
This ws an awesome,mindblowing,rapchik,fantabulous,fantastic,mind bogglingly amazing Story i hope it continues to be d same even more better
Yippie nxt chappy se romance hoga lalallal i am dancing
i luv dis FF of urs
u did a splendid job
Thanxx a ton fr d pm[>:D]
hasta la vista tc
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