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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

OMG...i cnt belaeve this komal is behind all this how colud she how clould i know she dosent love giriraj but manyata is her daughter too...sooo...mean...OMg..now who is this mr.shrk plzzz...update soon thanx for PM.


thank you dear
komal hated manyata as she reminded her of girirag
the hatred started the day she concieved
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Wow amazing chapter

loved the way u unmasked the two faced person
Ughh Komal
doesnt she care for her daughter ?
i wonder if Giri was killed by Komal too...
When M appeared in 'ghost ' form I understood that
she was alive and it was a trick 2 find de person in her family
who wants her killed
Maybe Jagat was also helping her since he made an attempt to
frame Brij
but How could Mr.Shark let her go ...
Eager to Know how M escaped Mr.Shark
waiting for de unmasking of the Criminal
do cont soon
thanks 4 de PM


thank you dear
manyata was not dead
i did tell it was 10days since manyata was missing
somethings happened during that 10 days
all your questions will be answered very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Andy, very very sorry for the extremely late comment. I read the chapter yesterday (wednesday) . Because of a slow-running net ... I was unable to give my usual long comments. So i left it for today. Unfortunately ... the speed of my net hasn't improved😒. So - it's a fairly short comment -SORRY!!! Superb update Andy👍🏼. The 2-faced family member was Komal ... that was so unpredictable. All credit to you for creating such a mystery👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏! Manyata too, is back home - that's great. U said that UDAY KNEW ALL ALONG WHERE SHE WAS ... so did he bring her back? Really waiting for the unmasking of Mr Shark. Update soon. Thanks for the PM😊. & once again - I'm terribly sorry😔.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey andy really sorry for late comment.. I commented here before but don't why the hell that didn't posted, ohh! I know because of stupid net.. Well coming to the update so that was fabulous.. Hats off to your suspicious mystery.. Too much suspense was there. Didn't expect that komal would do this all.. 😲 .. Now when will u post next update?? I'm eagerly waiting.. 😆 .. Pm me when update and yeah update ASAP.. .. Waoting for it..
Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Promo for the coming chapters

All looked at the direction manyata pointed

"what!"😲

" no , its not possible"😕

"manyata are you sure?"

"what madness is this?"😲

Came the comments from all directions

.

.

.

As he was led away in hand cuffs manyata looked at him

.

He was smilling rather smirking at her. there was a glint of" danger, you messed up with the wrong person" in his eyes

Manyata got scared seeing his carefree attitude, he was too cool for a convict arrested

Something was wrong

Had she made a big MISTAKE unmasking him?

*****************

Manyata had made her mind. She was ready for uday

Uday entered the room carrying a bowl of steaming hot soup for her. He did not look at her

As he was leaving she caught his hand and called

"uday, please listen iam sorry for all I said "😕

.

.

"I love you, uday . I really love you more than my life"😳

" I love you too, I never felt like this before manyata, you complete me"

.

He pulled her close to him, their chest colliding. He saw his passion reflected in her eyes too.his hands were caressing her waist. He pulled her for a kiss

.

.

.

Their clothes lay scattered on the floor. Both of them held each other tightly . even in their sleep the sign of satisfaction could be seen on their face

.

Uday kissed manyata on her forehead

"thank you manyata for the wonderful night. I finally found my soul mate , my better half. You know my past, present and future well so"

He knells down, takes a ring from his pocket, it was heart shaped blue diamond surrounded by small diamonds encrusted in gold and asks her

"will you MARRY me manyata, will you become mrs udayveer singh?"

**************************

So this is the promo for the coming chapters😊

So did you like it?

Hit the like button for a speedy update😃

Will update when I get sufficient likes

Do comment on this track

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Andy, very very sorry for the extremely late comment. I read the chapter yesterday (wednesday) . Because of a slow-running net ... I was unable to give my usual long comments. So i left it for today. Unfortunately ... the speed of my net hasn't improved😒. So - it's a fairly short comment -SORRY!!! Superb update Andy👍🏼. The 2-faced family member was Komal ... that was so unpredictable. All credit to you for creating such a mystery👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏! Manyata too, is back home - that's great. U said that UDAY KNEW ALL ALONG WHERE SHE WAS ... so did he bring her back? Really waiting for the unmasking of Mr Shark. Update soon. Thanks for the PM😊. & once again - I'm terribly sorry😔.

navi don t need to be sorry 😃
this comment is more than enough
you can comment any time you want- no problem in that
ya komal is that 2 faced family member
now did uday bring her home?
YES he did
navi i am taking a break from writing this ss
gota concentrate on my other ff
mr shark deserves a break , so do i
i will unmask him in chap17
do you still believe me?🤔
i did say i would unmask him in chap 14, but did not
no am sure about it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: safia25

hey andy really sorry for late comment.. I commented here before but don't why the hell that didn't posted, ohh! I know because of stupid net.. Well coming to the update so that was fabulous.. Hats off to your suspicious mystery.. Too much suspense was there. Didn't expect that komal would do this all.. 😲 .. Now when will u post next update?? I'm eagerly waiting.. 😆 .. Pm me when update and yeah update ASAP.. .. Waoting for it..

thank you safia 😃 its ok even that happened to me ya komal did all this now my next update ? after sometime iam presently concentrating on my other ff so iam taking a break will pm you for sure😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Promo for the coming chapters

All looked at the direction manyata pointed

"what!"😲

" no , its not possible"😕

"manyata are you sure?"

"what madness is this?"😲

Came the comments from all directions

As he was led away in hand cuffs manyata looked at him

He was smilling rather smirking at her. there was a glint of" danger, you messed up with the wrong person" in his eyes

Manyata got scared seeing his carefree attitude, he was too cool for a convict arrested

Something was wrong

Had she made a big MISTAKE unmasking him?

*****************Yeah - she made a huge mistake! How dare she accuse Uday😡??? Sy is die grootste domkop ooit ... oops wrong language😆! I think Uday and Jaggat made a plan whereby Uday would pretend to be Mr Shark and he would kidnap Manyata in order to keep her safe from the actual villains. Unfortunately she misunderstood the entire thing and now she has sent the wrong person to the gallows! *******************

Manyata had made her mind. She was ready for uday

Uday entered the room carrying a bowl of steaming hot soup for her. He did not look at her

As he was leaving she caught his hand and called

"uday, please listen iam sorry for all I said "😕

Hmmm ... apologise to him , that's the least u can do!

"I love you, uday . I really love you more than my life"😳

" I love you too, I never felt like this before manyata, you complete me"

Awww😳.

He pulled her close to him, their chest colliding. He saw his passion reflected in her eyes too.his hands were caressing her waist. He pulled her for a kiss

Their clothes lay scattered on the floor. Both of them held each other tightly . even in their sleep the sign of satisfaction could be seen on their face

Uday kissed manyata on her forehead

"thank you manyata for the wonderful night. I finally found my soul mate , my better half. You know my past, present and future well so"

He knells down, takes a ring from his pocket, it was heart shaped blue diamond surrounded by small diamonds encrusted in gold and asks her

"will you MARRY me manyata, will you become mrs udayveer singh?"

**************************How sweet!!! Happy ending😃. Can't wait.

So this is the promo for the coming chapters😊

Awesome promo Andy👍🏼.
So did you like it?
I did , I did , I did 😃.

Hit the like button for a speedy update😃

Done!
Will update when I get sufficient likes
How many is "SUFFICIENT"🤔?

Do comment on this track

Lovely , awesome , amazing, fantastic, incredible , intriguing, delightful!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

update andyyy soonnn


will try to update soon

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