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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

wht do u mean if we like it or not?


of course we like it that's why we have been reading it since u started!!!!!! its truly amazing as i mentioned before. do continue soon. i wish i could like the post at least 100 more times to show u how gd ur ff is.

good luck for the next chappy and do PM me please.


thank you dear
will update real soon
and sure will pm you
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomwee...prormo
OMG cnt wait for next part plzz...update soon.


thanks sweta
will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...


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the story at the end will have a happy ending
but now no
manyata will leave uday and after one year they will meet
but she is engaged to another guy
will she accept him?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

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ok will update soon
maybe tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a


ok will update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hi andy 🤗, I'm back I know I missed a lot of chapters, but here I'm doing the analysis of ur chapter 15 😃, hope you like it 😛


Analysis:
Part 1: Culprit among the grieving royals: For a split second no one would believe that someone from this family could ever thing of doing such a cruel act with anyone. That culprit is one amazing actor, though till this point I still vouched for Brij to be the culprit 😉. Though I so wished to see the reaction of the family member once the changed will is ready 😆, you should have disclosed the real culprit after teh will was read 😉

Part2: Manyata in search of justice and answers: Well written andy, the moment Manyata's ghost stepped in I was pretty sure that Manyata is alive all this is a plan of hers to unmask the real culprit👏, well done . But I'm confused, who helped Manyata, did Mr shark help her, or Uday found M and helped her, but if Uday found M then what happened to Mr shark, coz Me Shark looks quite confident here as if he still has Manyata or he has killed her😕

Part 3:Culprit unmasked 👏 : Amazingly written Andy, OMG it was komal 😲😲, how could a mother do this 😡, pathetic🤢, but the way you have maintained the suspense was even more amazing😳. I liked how Jaggat deliberately framed Brij so that Komal accepts her crime, but still I would have loved had the will been out and Komal being made realized that even after killing her own blood, she is left with nothing today 😕. I actually pity Komal here, a mother who is incapable of loving the child she gave birth to, how much of a miserable life she is living 😕. I wouldnt be surprised, if even this comes out that Maharaj Giriraj was killed by Komal 😡

Part 4: Manyata's comeback 🥳: yepiee, I knew she was alive, but this was a double lottery for all the readers, in the same update u unmask the pathetic culprit and also give us M's comeback 😳, so eagerly waiting to see who Mr shark is, though I have a feeling it is Ajay 😊.

Lovely promo, but again the first part left me confused, why was M saying sorry to Uday 😕, hope Uday is not Mr shark😕

thanks chitra for this lovely analysis
actually i forgot about the will
i had it in mind but forgot to put it in words
now how manyata excaped from mr shark will be revaled soon
all your questions will be answered really soon
now its gona be manyata vs mr shark
even i hope mr shark is not uday
once more loved your analysis
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 16- Into The Hands Of Law
Jaggat looked surprised seeing the develpments . Actually mr shark (who ever he was) tipped him in the morning that brigraj was the person who employed mr shark and he was shocked. But jaggat was assured that he had sufficient evidence regarding that matter and had asked his men to bring it to his office. All he had to do was arrest that person and present him before law. So jaggat went forward to arrest him . he believed the person who tipped him though others did not believe in him so he went forward to arrest him
technically uncle brig was his father in law to be, but he was a police officer , a believer of law. He had to accept the truth, he to arrest that person he was to follow his duty and not run away from it

He moved forward to arrest uncle brig

Then came aunty komal, the way she started to defend her husband made him doubt about his guilt. How could she be so sure about this case unless ?

He decided to provoke her more to get an idea of the truth and lo- there she was in her anger spitting the truth out

There was an outcry when this revelation was made. He looked at mr shark and he gave him an assuring smile. So now did he really know the truth

As komal was cofesssing there came a reply from above

"then kill me now mama"

Came a familiar voice it was manyata. Was he dreaming

No she was alive and living . she radiated a radiance, a glow

People were shocked. Jaggat regained his cool pretty fast and asked his fellow officers to arrest komal

Jaggat: arrest her

M: jaggat there is one more person to be arrested here,

she said looking at mr shark

J: who?

M: mr shark, the notorious criminal, for killing rohan and many other innocent lives

J: who is he? That bas**d

Manyata pointed her finger towards the place where mr shark stood. Finally she had unmasked mr sharkin front of the world

OR DID SHE?

All looked at the direction manyata pointed

"what!"😲

" no , its not possible"

"manyata are you sure?"😕

"what madness is this?"😲

comments like this came from all directions
J: what is this manyata ? he is a prominent business personnel. He can't be mr shark. Mr shark is a notorious criminal. But what about him? I don't believed It Are you sure manyata?

M: jaggat I am the one who was kidnapped. not you. I saw my kidnapper and I am saying it is him .then why do you doubt me

I can give you ENOUGH proof for it. Arrest him jaggat

J: but😕

M: I can't order you or force you to do anything, but iam an Indian citizen . I want justice jaggat. I WANT ROHAN'S KILLER TO BE BROUGHT BEFORE LAW. I want justice

Saying this she looked at mr shark's eyes

He was busy enjoying the developments in the palace, but manyata betrayed him his eyes were stone cold, they were indeed the eyes of a killer

Ms: manyata how could you accuse me of something I don't know. Officer believe me iam innocent

J: but iam sorry, manyata has evidence. I have no other option than arrest you. Cooperate with us

Ms: ok officer I will cooperate, because I know iam innocent let her prove it otherway

Jaggat handcuffed him

As he was led away in hand cuffs manyata looked at him

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He was smilling rather smirking at her. there was a glint of" danger, you messed up with the wrong person" in his eyes

As he reached manyata he spoke to her softly

Ms: manyata prove your allegations first, I am sure you will not get even a small bit of evidence against me. And I still love you manyata and I will not stop till you will be my wife, manyata kumari

Manyata got scared seeing his carefree attitude, he was too cool for a convict arrested

Something was wrong

Had she made a big MISTAKE unmasking him????

J: come lets go

He smirked at her as he left that room

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Manyata was emotionally drained today, she had unmasked both her killers

she was resting in her room , her family did not distub her as they too were really shocked by todays developments.
she thought
"One was her very own mother, she always loved her mother and wanted to make her proud of her, but her mother had never felt that way for her. Initially when mr shark told he that her mother had given him advance to kill her, she refused to believe it. No, but then he showed her the video when komal had visitd him to give him that contract it was unbelievable as she saw it. the place was dark . the video was taken from a hidden camera from mr sharks view

"here is the advance 50 lakhs in cash, the remaining when the deal is done, the day she is pronounced dead. this is the photo. Make it look like an accident. How long will it take for the deal to happen?

"3 months"

"how will I contact you in these months.i have nt seen your face , your always masked "

"it doesn't matter if you didn't see me and don't worry ill contact you "

"atleast tell me your name . it's a huge sum iam giving you"

"what is in a name or a face as long as you get results ok you can call me the shark"

"ok ,it's a deal mr shark"

"one more thing I hate non believers. If you don't want to hire me you can pls leave

"no mr shark I do believe you "

she saw her mom put a price on her headand that shocked her, then the only she thought was to escape from here that too really fast
and she did it yes she was free
as she lay down she thought of that day when mr shark had kidnapped her
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(FLASH BACK 10 DAYS AGO)
she had gained consciousness and her head was spinning she looked around and saw him, fear returned to her as she saw mr death come to call her to the next world
she fainted
mr shark looked at the angelic form in front of him, she was indeed a greek goddess. he looked at her face and got lost in its beauty
she was now his own, his property,
I LOVE YOU PRINCESS he said to her
forgive me for what i did
I DONT HAVE ANOTHER OPTION , MY LOVE
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Guys finally updated this chapter
now mr shark is arrested and brought in front of law
the next few chaps will deal with manyata and mr shark
ie the 10 days when she was kidnapped
so how is the chapter?
do hit the like button
and dont forget to comment pls
the next update is"THIS IS MR SHARK"
YOUR COMMENTS HELPS ME TO UPDATE SOON
see you during the next update
Edited by andy.a - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...
unres..
wohoo...
me first..
btw.. the update was mindblowing.
it might be a bit short, but concept and mysterywise, there was so much...
WHO IS MR. SHARK????
d que. thats killing me...
tell it fast... waiting for next chap...
Edited by iluvmanveer - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg!!! We still don't know who me shark is!!! But from the flask back I think I was right as bout guessing uday as Mr shark cause if away was Mr shark then story mean maza nahi aata!!

Mujhe lagta hain ki uday hain Mr shark and then manyata Fall in love with him!!! I will just have to wait and c!!

Well done once again on a terrific mchappy and thnx for the pm...
Do continue soon and please pm me!!!
U have done a great great job Andy!!!!!
Edited by cnibir - 13 years ago

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