'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07
thanks...fantastic

thank you dear

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

@navi
mr shark will not give a happy ending
the story has to go a long way before coming to a full stop

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Shahista

@Shahi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Hey andy love that little questionnaire you have at the end of every update..

Makes it easier and somes up all our thoughts on the chapter ;)

So this is the promo for the coming chapters

Awesome, looking 4wards 2 it.

So did you like it?

yep most def

Hit the like button for a speedy update

Done

Will update when I get sufficient likes

How many is sufficient andy? lol

Do comment on this track

It was awesome...very nice.

Will wait for your feedback

;) continue soon.

Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

hey loved the promo.. pls pls continue soon..
u kno these promos r like showing d lolly pop to a kid n telling him/her u have to wait for few more days..😆
update the chapters soon pls😃

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

wht do u mean if we like it or not?

of course we like it that's why we have been reading it since u started!!!!!! its truly amazing as i mentioned before. do continue soon. i wish i could like the post at least 100 more times to show u how gd ur ff is.

good luck for the next chappy and do PM me please.

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Awsomwee...prormo
OMG cnt wait for next part plzz...update soon.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: andy.a
@navi
mr shark will not give a happy ending
the story has to go a long way before coming to a full stop

No happy ending ... 😔 😭!!!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Hi andy 🤗, I'm back I know I missed a lot of chapters, but here I'm doing the analysis of ur chapter 15 😃, hope you like it 😛

Analysis:

Part 1: Culprit among the grieving royals: For a split second no one would believe that someone from this family could ever thing of doing such a cruel act with anyone. That culprit is one amazing actor, though till this point I still vouched for Brij to be the culprit 😉. Though I so wished to see the reaction of the family member once the changed will is ready 😆, you should have disclosed the real culprit after teh will was read 😉

Part2: Manyata in search of justice and answers: Well written andy, the moment Manyata's ghost stepped in I was pretty sure that Manyata is alive all this is a plan of hers to unmask the real culprit👏, well done . But I'm confused, who helped Manyata, did Mr shark help her, or Uday found M and helped her, but if Uday found M then what happened to Mr shark, coz Me Shark looks quite confident here as if he still has Manyata or he has killed her😕

Part 3:Culprit unmasked 👏 : Amazingly written Andy, OMG it was komal 😲😲, how could a mother do this 😡, pathetic🤢, but the way you have maintained the suspense was even more amazing😳. I liked how Jaggat deliberately framed Brij so that Komal accepts her crime, but still I would have loved had the will been out and Komal being made realized that even after killing her own blood, she is left with nothing today 😕. I actually pity Komal here, a mother who is incapable of loving the child she gave birth to, how much of a miserable life she is living 😕. I wouldnt be surprised, if even this comes out that Maharaj Giriraj was killed by Komal 😡

Part 4: Manyata's comeback 🥳: yepiee, I knew she was alive, but this was a double lottery for all the readers, in the same update u unmask the pathetic culprit and also give us M's comeback 😳, so eagerly waiting to see who Mr shark is, though I have a feeling it is Ajay 😊.

Lovely promo, but again the first part left me confused, why was M saying sorry to Uday 😕, hope Uday is not Mr shark😕

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: Shahista01
Hey andy love that little questionnaire you have at the end of every update..
Makes it easier and somes up all our thoughts on the chapter ;)

So this is the promo for the coming chapters
Awesome, looking 4wards 2 it.

So did you like it?
yep most def

Hit the like button for a speedy update
Done

Will update when I get sufficient likes
How many is sufficient andy? lol

Do comment on this track
It was awesome...very nice.

Will wait for your feedback
;) continue soon.

thank you dear
loved this comment
will update real soon

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
hey loved the promo.. pls pls continue soon..
u kno these promos r like showing d lolly pop to a kid n telling him/her u have to wait for few more days..😆
update the chapters soon pls😃

thank you dear
i gave a promo so that you would have an idea what to expect so that saves you from terrible suspence
ok will update soon