A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16)

Maham

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow superb
awesome update
plz continue soon n thanx 4 pm

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...navina...
Very sweet Update, Nitya. Thank you so much Navina... Kinda short though ... Yeah I know... 😉but really cute. I loved the end, where Manyata is only thinking about Uday 😳. Love has blossomed I guess 😉. Not yet but yes it is in the process... 😉 Looking forward to the next part, thanks for the PM. You are most welcome...

Thanx for such an amazing comment Navina...

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shazeen21

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hey. My name is shazeen. Im a new member.
I love your ff. Its amazing
Really nice. Do pm me when you update

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

hi , I am Sanghita Dey . I have started reading parts of A Hate- Love Story...they are amazing...plz send me all ur works from now onwards😃

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Wow superb
awesome update. Thanx 😊
plz continue soon Surely n thanx 4 pm. You are most welcum

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice...👍🏼

Thanx 😃

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sanghita0000
hi , I am Sanghita Dey . Hey Sanghita I am Nitya. I have started reading parts of A Hate- Love Story...they are amazing... Thanx. plz send me all ur works from now onwards😃 Surely I will. Just send me a buddy request.

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal
Awesome Amazing Story... 😊

Thank you 😊

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Hey guys. As all of you know I am back. But I dont think anybody is interested in this story anymore.
So if anybody is interested anymore like this promo. The response will decide whether i would update it or not.
PROMO

Uday: Toh tum keh rhi ho ki tum mujhse pyaar nhi karti
Manyata turns his back to Uday and says
Manyata: Haan nhi karti main tumse pyaar.
Uday holds her from her shoulder and forces her to look at him and says
Uday: Toh kyu hamse mooh chipa rhi ho.
Manyata frees herself from the eyelock and looks down at the floor
Uday: Theek Hai. Dekho meri aankho mein aur kaho ki tum humse pyaar nhi krti. Jab bhi hum tumhare kareeb aate hai toh tumhe ajeeb se khushi nhi hoti. Dekho manyata dekho. Look into my eyes and say ki hum tumhare liye koi mayne nhi rakhte. Look into my eyes godammit.
Manyata frees herself from Uday's grip and says looking into his eyes
Manyata: Haan haan nhi rakhte tum hare liye koi mayne. Nhi karte hum tumse pyaar. Ab agar tumhe apna jawab mil gaya ho toh humein jana hai.
With this she walks away and Uday is freezed on that spot.

Okay Manveerians this is it. If you want me to continue this story please like it. And sorry for the similarity of the dialouges with SRK movies. Its unintentional though 😉.

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