A Hate- Love Story: Ch-15 pg- 56 (Updated 27/11/16)

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Kritika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Superb update
when u update nxt part pls update na

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: preya_radev
welcome back nitya... Thanx Preya.. really happy to see a update from u after a long time... Really... I am happy that you are happy... loved how manyata helped that child and also how unnati told manyata about uday, was actually happy about how manyata realized her mistake about what she said to uday... She had to... loved the convo between manveer during their dinner and happy that now they r friends cant wait for the next part... I guess you have to... Because still 2 more likes to go... do update soon and thanks for the pm... You are most welcum...

Thanx for the wonderful comment Preya...

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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A big Thanx to all you 25 people.

The following 25 member(s) liked the above post:

vgkantu, maaneet786, Sunsnow, Ana.., paliee, unknown123,

SaraloveAshiyal, zarshia, harshiya786, rockstar4eva55,

fireroad99, roshni101, Priya46, preya_radev, shrutilove, angleroops, anushruthi, ParusDivs,

Karkit, sanah12, Honey-FLAB, Nash.., _Annesha_, pia.raha, ...navina...

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am back. I am sorry to all those people who have not received a like or comment from me on their stories. I am so engrossed in everything. But I'll try to cope up. And I know that its been 2 and a half since I updated but it is now that I have got 25 likes. And I send around a hundred pms out of which about 50 people see them. Even more. So this is the last chappy for which everybody us getting the pms. From the next time only the people who hit the like button will get a pm. And pls its a request do tell me if anybody is not interested in the stroy anymore. I will stop sending you pms as it will reduce mine as well as your work. Its been a long lecture. Please read the chappy now.

Chapter-8

Both of them move aside from the table to dance to the soft music that was being played.

Manyata's one hand was on Uday's shoulder and the other in his hand while Uday's other hand was resting on her waist.

He swirled her around and than took her in his arms. Their faces were inches apart. She felt uncomfortable yet comfortable in his arms. It was a mixed feeling.

When she came to her senses first thing she did was brought herself out of his arms.

Manyata: Kafi acha dance karte ho tum.

Uday: Thanx. Waise tum bhi kuch kam nhi ho. I doubt ki tumne pehle aur bhi ladko ke sath dance kiya hoga.

Manyata: Toh tumhara doubt galat hai. Maine isse pehle sirf Karan ke saath dance kiya hai woh bhi for school and college functions.

Uday: Ohh... (with disappointed tone as he had expected an opposite answer)

Manyata: Ab dinner continue kare please. I am very hungry (holding her stomach).

Uday: Ya sure.

They sat down for dinner again and had a conversation on every topic that could be interesting. From actors to their kingdom to their college, everything.

After having dinner they go to the car for heading home.

In the car.

Uday: Toh ab jab tumne keh diya hai ki hum friends hai toh hum tumhare group mein hai. Right?

Manyata: Woh toh tum waise bhi hote kyunki group mein mere ilawa baki sab toh tumhare friends the hi.

Uday: Chalo tumhara ghar aa gaya.

He opens the door of his as well as her side.

Manyata: Good night Uday.

Uday: Good night Manyata.

She turns to go but after taking few steps stops and turns around again. He was still standing there.

Manyata: Tum abhi tak gaye nahi?

Uday: Agar main chala jaata toh tum woh kaise bolti jo bolne ke liye mudi ho.

Manyata smiles and says,

Manyata: Thank you Uday for everything. Us dinner ke liye bhi aur mujhe ghar chodne ke liye bhi. (After a pause). Aur sorry isliye ki maine bina kuch jaane tumhe itna bhala bura kaha.

Uday: You are welcome. And its okay. Aur waise bhi ab hum friends ban chuje hai so we should forget that all.

Manyata: Chalo ab tum jao. Kal college bhi hai. Warna subah uth nhi paoge. Bye.

She pushes him unside the car and forces him to go. He doesn't wants to but unwillingly he does.

She goes inside the house and then to her room. While changing her clothes all she thought about was him. The dance with him. How he touched he waist and...

Manyata to herself: Manyata. Stop it. Kya soch rhi ho tum. Uday ke baare mein woh bhi yeh sab. Main pagal ho jaoungi is Uday ki wajah se kisi din.

She lies on the bed and puts a pillow on her face.

Precap: Preperations for the annual dance.

Fwee... Finally I have written a chappy.

Next update after 25 likes.

Do like and comment.

If anybody wants a pm send me a buddy request.

Edited by nityatandon - 10 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Omg awesome when I saw u updated maan mein jalebi phut raah tha can't wait for next update

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Jane523
nicee

Thanx 😊

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Priya46
Omg awesome when I saw u updated maan mein jalebi phut raah tha can't wait for next update

Haaye...😳 Sorry wait karwaya. And chappy kaisa laga yeh toh bta de. 😛

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roshni101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

The update was amazing as always. Loved it.
So Princey's charms have started working on manyata.
Interesting. I really liked the last scene.
Great work. Continue soon

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: roshni101
The update was amazing as always. Loved it. Thank you sooo much. That means a lot to me.😳
So Princey's charms have started working on manyata. Yeah 😉
Interesting. I really liked the last scene.
Great work. Continue soon. I surely will.

Thank you so much for the comment Rosh.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Very sweet Update, Nitya. Kinda short though ... but really cute. I loved the end, where Manyata is only thinking about Uday 😳. Love has blossomed I guess 😉. Looking forward to the next part, thanks for the PM.

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