hotmaanveer ss-UPDATEs pg 44, 45, 46 aug 9 - Page 17

Originally posted by: -Zina-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">OMG!! this was so hot☺️...i could feel the passion between the two how desperately they want each othe😛r...and the kiss...😳u are an awesome writer how beautifully u have explained the povs hats of to your work!! i am very eager to read the next pa😉</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"> please update soon😃</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">thanx for the pm😊</font>

Believe me I was so nervous writing this whole chap 3 till now...both pov of uday and m...well it was very difficult to show all love,passion ,desire,control,innocence,and their inner fights...without making anyone guilty of what they r doing...thanx for loving it...my nervousness is leaving me...coz among so many brilliant writers...I feel the needs to have coments for my work so I am not discourage ed...I hope I am presenting u with different perspective of maanveer... 😃

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Comment for Your POV view

it was amazing

i must say it matched my pov too😃

For M's pov

so finally

both let their feelings take control

the kiss was awesome

thm falling in2 de pool was😆

do cont soon

thanks for de PM

Thanx...yaar..my pov ..well thanx it matches urs...this is a diff approach I took for writing...coz I could make u feel the connection...directly ...with maanveer through my eyes and thts...and lay a base for future...I hope u like this style of narrative... And then...maanveer kiss...it had yo be very special ...I didn't want any party to feel guilty...this was purely innocent...no flirting and forcing from any side...it had to be unique...where the two finally give in to there natural feelings and demands...well...believe me u gonna love them more and more...and see how they have begun their new journey...

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Believe me I was so nervous writing this whole chap 3 till now...both pov of uday and m...well it was very difficult to show all love,passion ,desire,control,innocence,and their inner fights...without making anyone guilty of what they r doing...thanx for loving it...my nervousness is leaving me...coz among so many brilliant writers...I feel the needs to have coments for my work so I am not discourage ed...I hope I am presenting u with different perspective of maanveer... 😃

Lovely but very short
their love for each other was beautifully written
thanks for the pm and continue soon

Originally posted by: -Zina-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">you are one of the brilliant writers👏i really love the way u have expressed every kind of feeling, i agree with u its very difficult to express all feelings as a writer!! but u have done a great job!!👏</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">ur too good...and u are giving the most different sight of manveer!! 😃please update soon!!😃i really want to know what it leads to!!😛😉</font>

Thanx a lot zina...I won't let u guys down and really journey of my maanveer will be amazing...very different...

Originally posted by: andy.a

Lovely but very short
their love for each other was beautifully written
thanks for the pm and continue soon

They haven't yet realizes there love fully...yeah it was short but not very...divided in different love...but I know when we want so much together as a reader...we feel it's short...hehehe...thanx for liking...I hope I presented maanveer first kiss in a hot...sensual...cozy...and different manner. .making it very special for them and we readership well...hope u like this presentation and my pov and narrative along with it...

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Thanx...yaar..my pov ..well thanx it matches urs...this is a diff approach I took for writing...coz I could make u feel the connection...directly ...with maanveer through my eyes and thts...and lay a base for future...I hope u like this style of narrative... And then...maanveer kiss...it had yo be very special ...I didn't want any party to feel guilty...this was purely innocent...no flirting and forcing from any side...it had to be unique...where the two finally give in to there natural feelings and demands...well...believe me u gonna love them more and more...and see how they have begun their new journey...

Originally posted by: livvy

So purely written

Thanx 😛

I have a feeling J hit manyata on her head anyway LOL😆

Originally posted by: Priya46

I have a feeling J hit manyata on her head anyway auLOL😆

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Well j ki dress kharab ho jayegi paani mein jane se 😆