hotmaanveer ss-UPDATEs pg 44, 45, 46 aug 9 - Page 16

Originally posted by: princessSonia

u r marriage is luv or arranged???????

sorry i m jzzz asking bcz of curiosity...

answer only if u want to.

I pmed u

Owsum... It was super duper hot...
Poor uday..
He lost control over him..

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Owsum... It was super duper hot...
Poor uday..
He lost control over him..

Thanx dear ...yaa poor poor uday 😆

Hey friends . I would really really appreciate if u give ur coments onmy work...coz me being a very simple writer..gets discouraged when I get so few likes and still few coments...plz don't makeme nervous...even criticisms and doubts r welcome...chahe jute maaro..chahe pastry khilao but yeh without gifts party nahi hai...plz plz I am hungry for ur gifts. Plz

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Part 3

My pov

This was magic...what I am witnessing...it seems god has planned all this...perfect weather...so sweet and cool breeze...both r in the pool...surrounded by blue crystal clear water...soft waves forming in the pool...both soaked in completely...lost in their own world...perfect apt song playing in the background...I can see the smile and happiness surrounding them...two soulmates...who still don't no that they r me meant to be together...both changing unknowningly...entering a new world of intense feelings...I smile at looking them...two lost souls...near each other yet searching for each other...both r replica of each other yet into denial...so funny...one wants to let his love be happy and had given up...the other stubborn to deny her heart and ignorant to her feelings and living in a net of lie...well the time has come to jolt them outta their reverie...to make them understand and meet each other...to break their net of lie and sacrifice...so it's time I strike back and take apart the two lost desperate souls so that they glue together for ever...
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To be contd... 😆
Continues on pg 23.

Part 3 contd...

Mamyata pov

My god this is amazing...it's like I was waiting for this my lifetime...no wonder people cant forget their kiss and all her thts drown in her kiss...

Both have no sense of time ,surroundings people,as if no one and nothing exists...totally lost...amazing is that no one wants to backout...funny they both r fighting again but completely on a different level...seems it's a fight for whose enjoying more...whose more eatable...whose the weak one to backout first ...its the magic has hit them. Both hard...both don't want to let this moment this magic go away...it's as if their life is depended on this kiss only...gotta be kidding...this is no more a kiss...its no more a smooch...its no more a liplock...it's a mark that both have made on each others soul...both r busy in sucking,tasting each other...uday wants to keep drinking her saliva...he wants to keep on roaming his tounge in her mouth keep in sucking her lips...and manyata...she is like a starved tigress...hungry...on loose...and uday is her prey...whom she didn't want to go away at any cost...till it was completely hers...she was drowning in his taste.. Proving she was no less than him...oblivious to change in her.. She didn't want this moment to finish...the smooch went on for long...their hands moving all over their bodies...uday did what he wanted to do most...hold her ..hold her breast...fill his hands and he felt how it was made for Jim only...a perfect...his other hand busy holding and feeling her bottom...while manyata was doing what she wanted yo do...she tore of his shirt...poor uday not a single button left on his royal shirt. ..she was busy roaming all her free hand over his such a well toned body...on his six pack abs...and his flat chest...her other hand in his silk wet hairs...oh it was so soothing...she could feel his thumping heart...and then her hand started moving down his body...lower and lower and lower feeling every muscle every cut every movement...to lower till she reached towards his erection...she was about to ...to...ti...hold and feel his manhood...she was hit hard on her head...with a loud wail she cried loudly...ouch uday...fell all over him...both lost their balance and fell inside the pool...bhammm...


So guys...how was the update...give me atleast 25 likes yaar and as many coments so that I enjoy and plan to update further.. .merry Christmas to u all and keep guessing what made manyata cry out loud ...and fall on uday making him fall into the pool as well...feel free yo discuss...me waiting desperately for ur coments...

archu... ye kya tha? update do na dear. its just an address. i want update... do it fast. u noe how much i die to read ur stories...

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

archu... ye kya tha? update do na dear. its just an address. i want update... do it fast. u noe how much i die to read ur stories...

Sanju pehle mere purane update par bada ss coment de . Woh due hai...and update hai na page 23 Pe...short hai ...par will soon give u a big one...kyonki the story is gonna turn in new direction now... 😉 😆

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