hotmaanveer ss-UPDATEs pg 44, 45, 46 aug 9

,bHi guys...I was too upset when dek ended...lost touch with the forum...but was missing maanveer and uday a lot so here I am with a very new and hot os...typing through Mobile...so plz beat the mistakes or grammar...I hope u guys woul
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INDEX

Chapter1 all parts on page 1

Chapter 2
Part 1 - page 9[B
Part 2- page 9
Part3 - pg 9
Part 4- pg 10
chapter3 part 1 pg 15
Chap3 part 2, pg 17
Uday pov cont. On pg 18
Chapter 4 pg 30.
.ch 5 part a,B PG 35.
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]Ds-manyata aur...AA dono behn e hain...hum AAP dono ko ek task Dena chahte hain...j-wow ds..kya task hai...but. Kya aapko lagta hai ds ki jiji Walla task karne layak ho gayi..unhe 1 mth..hi hua hai Mahal meihun aaye..aur Humein nahi lagta ki woh rajwadon ka kuch bhi kaam kar sakti hain...
M..is hurt. She says-j ghamandini tu Ehud ko samajhti kya hai...tu whoop
.rahi hai main bhi ek princess hoon...aur aisa koi kaamnahi Jo tu kar sake aur main nahin...haan nai toh...komal-wah manyata AAP ne maanveer hi liya ki AAP ek princess hain...m-maa I told u mai ek achi princess banke rahungi..aur ISS j ko aur us uday udan khatole lo prove kar doongi ki mai kisi se kamnahi hoon...komal-wah beta ..ab chaliye...aapko aapko haye teacher milwate hain...ds phone par hain AAP dono se baad mein baat karenge..
...uday enters in a..grey shirt and black trousers...his hair is all gelled and he us with a trademark smirk on his face ..and eyeing manyata shocked expressions...uday-hai princess...stop drooling...I kno I am quite hot...please close ur mouth...he holds her hands..bends towards her...goes near her ears and whispers ...stop checking me out pt princess...if u look at me like that...haaye...
Manyata is caught...all red...embarrassed...his nearness is giving her goosebumps...what she doing..reacting like this...omg he is truly liking hot...she is yet in a trance...komal-manya kya hua...hmm...aap surprise ho gayi na...yeh hai awoke teacher...m coming out of the trance and starts making faces...-maa yeh...yeda...hey bhagwan mai yahaan phas gayi...uday-hello dear...he is having a satirical smile...and eyes manyata...manyata reads his smile and is angry with both him and herself and turns to go...when uday holds her hands stops her and says ...chale princess...class ka time ho gaya...
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Part 2...scroll down for part 3

Komal-manyata ISS samay yeh elk teacher hain aur aapko inki har baat maanani padegi...she goes and whispers in her ears...chinta mat kariye beta hum uday ko bhi samjha denge ki AAP aur woh don't fit together...he needs someone strong and loyal aur aap..well woh bahut handsome hai aur unhe kai achi princessmil sakti hain Jo unke attitude ko match karey.isslye manyata go freely...hum aap dono ko bahut pyar karte hain aur aap dono ko khush dekhne chahte hain... J hears this convo and us smiling devilishly...she has won and manyata is very angry seeing this and hearing hearing what her Mon just said...she isn't good for this idiot uday...huh...she is gonna prove everyone wrong...j-round 1 ff. .she laughs and leaves winking at her...uday-kaunsa round round khel rahe ho tum dono behne...aur komal aunty ne aisa kya kaha ki tum itni irritate ho rahi ho aur j khush ho rahi hai...waise aap gusse mein bahut yummy lagti ho.
:-O Mr.hello hye bye bye,tujhe kya,tu bas a tha kaam kar...yaad aaya agar tu meri naukri karega toh tera kaam kabhi karega...she thinks in her mind. Issiliye...tera baap ke saare Baal udd Gaye...bechare uncle and she smiles at the thought.. Uday sternly-lets start with our lessons today..and behave coz u may not like what I teach u today...am warning u sweetheart...m-am confused...u think I need warning from you...I am not afraid and believe me I challenge you that if I to all u say u will not pester me for a day atleast...agree...uday-O love challenges...lets see who wins...ok lets go...m- where r u taking me...she is nervous...what will u teachme..atleast bako toh...uday holds her hands and takes her towards the jeep...m is surprised..but she keeps quite and sits with him...he ya takes her to a grand house...which has a huge and beautifully lit and designed garden...m is awestruck...m-uday yeh Kidman Mahal hai...omg it's so so beautiful...aur yeh garden toh ekdum jhakaas hai...uday just watching the play if happy emotions on her face...her face has lit like never before...he is very happy seeing her truly happy for the first time since she has comeback...

M-yeh hum kahaan hai uday...this place is do peaceful...u wont believe it but I have seen this place in my dreams...omg...I can't believe am here...how can it be real...pata hai dreams mein bhi mujhe lagta tha ki I know this place...I have been here before...fultoo jhakaas place hai boss...uday-manyata jhakaas nahi...say beautiful...chalk come inside...m-yede plz baat na tu mujhe kahaan laya hai...uday-humein pata hai aap Mahal mein bore ho gayi thi..isliye ds se permission leke aapko yahaan laye hain...yeh koi Mahal nahi humara farm house hai...m-waise toh tu bada Kameena hai...par AAj tune mujh par ek ahaan kar diya...mai fresh air ke liye taras gayi thi...tujhe pata hai. I love gardens...when mera aur akash ka ghar hoga na mai bahut bada garden banaaoingi...uday-aur uski rakhwali rakhwali ke liye...giving an angry and cuning smile. M-kuch servants aur maalihonge aur kya...after all I am a princess...toh ghar mein toh garden bona chahiye...uday-princess...USS Jammu ke saath tum princess rahogi kahaan...tum...keval uski wife rahogi aur uske kiraye ke 2 bedroom flat mein garden kahaan banaaoingi...m's mouth is opened and shocked..making a big o. Somany expressions crossing her face...she jumps back to herself...kameeney tu her baat par akaash ko kyon le wars hai...tune abhi take bataya nahi ki tumujhe yahaan kya sikhane laya hai.. Suddenly she hears the sound of water,humming of birds..a very pleasant breeze and is enthralled ...
So u guys wanna no y uday has brought her here and what he wants to teach her...hahaha...it's gonna be hot believe me... 😉

part 4

Manyata...feels elated in this natural surrounding...she just twirled round and says...yes I cam feel I have been here...she runs towardsthe sound of water and sees a water fountain...a statue of a man and a lady embracing each other and water flowing out from every where...the fountain starts playing sprinkling water o the soft grass in the garden. Manyata is too busy and happyenjoying the feel of cool breeze and soft sprinkles,she twirls around the..whole setting...she feels she is a kid again...mesmerized by the beauty around her...and calls out for uday...calls out once again...but is surprised to see him nowhere ...she becomes nervous,a little frightened,happy,excited,all at once..range of emotion fllitting across her face..she runsmoretowardsthe fountain and shouts "uday...uday..where r u? Stop playing with me now?" ..."I am here princess...just right behind you..." m turns around and finds him all bowed on his knees towards her...she is surprised at his gesture...m -gr8 prince udayveer on his knees...what a sight to my sore eyes,how much I really wanted it...hmm she is smiling...uday-well well and here I tht someone was missing me badly...someone calling me out so desperately...he smirks and winks at manyata...she blushes...stars acting annoyed...m-suits u ...I am a princess so...I f u need yo talk to me I need to bend on knees...I like it...uday stretches his hands towards her..."" may I have a dance with the most annoying,jhalli,junglee...smirks again...but the most lively,beautiful princess ever...can u honour me"...m is lost...she blushes deeply...stars shining in her eyes...she gives a dazzling skismile...her happiness showing on her face..she is surprised and wondering...and feels too happy fro mm inside...stares at uday..._- what's going on here.? Who r actual you? I can't seem to figure u out...what r u doing to me...I am supposed to be angry with you...u r supposed to be my foremost enemy...but today..I am not .angry...I am feeling happy..why is that uday...I deeper want yo give into my happiness for today and wanna have truce with you...so ..I accept the request of the most cunning,irritating,logistic,selfish...but very de devilishly charming ,romantic and flirting prince for a dance and gives a beautiful smile..."... Hmm...so uday stars laughing and says u RCA very fast learner princess...I loved the way u accepted my request ...but u have to hold my hand so that I can stand...m- though o quite like u bended but for now...I have mo choice ...she smiles and holds his hands...m- know u. To well to know there's some reason behind all this but I can't seem to refuse u today...u have my heart for a day for bringingme here...uday smiles-omg princess I never knew u could flirt so well but bevare princess...flirting is not an easy game and that too with the jot hot udayveer,"... M smiling and holding his hands...stands on tip toes and looks into his eyes..." r u challengchallengingme prince,u beware too u yet don't k know what I can do..let's see who wins in the end...u or me and if I make u lose ur this rigid control...u have to give me a a break from yo III for atleast as full day...u will not follow me.."...uday-" hum rajwade hain princess...we don't backout from challenges...accepted but if I win...u have to go with me on a date with all properly dressed up ...do u agree...m-"ok...hum bhi rajwade hain...done...but answer my one ..why did u bring me here...,?"
Uday-"becoz this was ur fav place when u were small...u loved coming here...here was where we had our first fight...here was where we had our first dance lessons...and every time u wanted to learn dancing here only and no where else"...m-she is shocked hearing this...she is furious..." so...Kameena kahin ka...umy dance teacher...hmm...smiles and says it's ok but...I do not rem my childhood but agree o would love to dance here...thanx ...but why only dance teacher..why not any othr teacher Hawn?"...uday-"so what u think I would have let anyone else...near you...no chance...after all this is the best challenge I could give you...so accept it u can't be near me or dance with me...do I win the challenge even before it's started...so a date...sweetheart"...m-" not so fast uday...I will dance with you...won't let you win...got it..so let's begin and they share a very intense suspicion...uday shouts..music...and the surrounding busses with a song...

...part 5

The song in the background stars playing...uday:hey princess...uday has her hands in his...he pulls her towards him slowly and...then puts his other hand on her waist...m is embarrassed...she shouts..a yeh kya hai langoor...haath haya apna..."...she is feeling weird...unusual sensation where he touches her...uday"stop it manyata it's already towards evening...st ststop fussing...now the first lesson...always keep a smiling front while dancing...doesn't matter who u r dancing with...a princess should carry herself with pride and dignity...even in adverse situation...something wrong princess...why r u blushing...what's happening..."he is smiling seeing her...trying to gauge her reaction..."stop teasing me uday,for the record am nit blushing...she pouts...I am cursing the time maa appointed uhis my dance teacher...I cant bear to talk to u and here u r holding me...unhe aur koi kyon nahi Mila..." she's confused and uday is just smiling at her innocence...he knows...she is actually very happy but I'd just...trying to fight hard...o god this girl will make me crazy.yeh el hi tareeked se comfortable hogi...sherni ko jagsna hoga..."hmm princess komal aunty ko bhi pata hai ki dance ke liye aag chahiye aur jahaan hum dono ho wahan toh asapas bhi aag lag jaati hai...toh..AAP haar manti hain kya...?" mo m-"no ways halkat...ab ghoorta rahega kya..."uday-"ab thermal hai prinvessvand smirks...song plays...suraj hua madham..chand dhalne laga...aasmaan yeh hai kyun pighalne laga...uday pulls her s little closer,increases his hand pressure on her waist but keeping her at arms length...holds her other hand and keeps it on her shoulder..."tumne ddlj Delhi hai na. .it's ur favmovie na...so rem kajol and hero kaise dance karte hain...m node her head..she is started enjoying it..."haan par woh toh bahut fast tha..." ...hmm uday-" u don't worry hum pehle slow steps karenge...close ur eyes and feel the song and music princess...manyata stars liking it...she starts slow ll y swaying to themusic...she feels as if the words of the song playing r meant for them and them only.. She is lost..."" manyata...lsecond lesson...look into the eye of the person usr dancing with...common look up..look into my eyes...stop looking here and there...look at me now...the song plays...mai chehra raha zameen chalne lagi...dhadka yeh dil saans thamne lagi...kya yeh mera pehle pehlapyar hai...moniya..looks up into his eyes...she is lost completely...wow..what an eyes...hypnotic...it seems I will drown in them...Maine itni intense eyes kabhi nahi Delhi...yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai...I shouldnt feel for him...moniya control ...u t loosing to him...yeh...meri dhadkan...plz ..koi help me...

Guys...I am converting it into a short story...so after this part will update chapter 2. Soon...plz enjoy and do coment ur comments mean a lot tome and plz tell me what all u would like to include...I will try to add thts tomy updates...

part 6



Manyata can't stop staring at him she is totally lost in his eyes... uday-",princess,keep ur back always straight an d move with the beats and with the rhythm...feel the music...the beats...common move ur legs...dont stand still...manyata..manyata...move..."...manyata to herself".. Omg...so beautiful...his eyes...they r taking my breath away...I can't seem to look anywhere else now...what's happening..they r speaking ...yeh itna devil hai but iski ankhe kitna kuch key rahi hai...yeh Jo dikhta hai. Woh hai nahi...why moniya why r u feeling this or him...why u forgetting u love sakash...but today I felt what I never felt with akash...this is different...all this and this udayveer..his smile...his eyes r hijacking my thts...omg...I can't seem to be able yo conectmy heart and mymind today"...m is do lost gazing at him and her thts..that she trips sideways and is just about yo fall when uv holds her..."kya huamanyata...AAP sun kyon nahi rahin hai...acha ab tum yeh leg movement dekho...aur mere saath match karo...m- irritated with her thts shouts...yede..mujhse nahi hoga.uday-"kyam itni jaldi haar maanveer gayi? USS din tumne dekha na j kitna acha dance kar rahi thi...manyata hum nahi chahte ki koi bhi aapki insult karega...tum chahe kisi ke saath bhi dance karo...but u should match him...u understand...now cheer up...u can do it,better than her and unnati also.."..."u sure..uday I can do it...?..u really believe in me? .." with this m startsicing her legs..and soon both of them match their steps easily...she is loving all of it now...uday teaches her yo twirl,yo move,how to hold on yo ur partner to maintain ddistance as well and how to avoid any unwanted movement..m-"y will anyone go with bad movement and try to get cheap uday? I am princess...uski watt laga dungi...haan nai toh...uday-apart from being a royal u r a very beautiful girl manyata and ur partner ,whoever it will be,will be a man a guy afterall...so u understand I cant nlamebhim for using ur innocence for his wild thts. So it had yo be u who has to warn him very politely through ur eyes and behaviour without cre acting a scene...I wouldn't like anyone eyeing u ..."...-" really...I got it...so u mean I am very beautiful...coming from horses mouth...hmm...I must say u r an amazing teacher..haan nai toh...t"..they both start laughing...now they r very close...he holds her tightly and she is eyeing him curiously...the song plays...yeh...raat beet jaye Teri bahon mein...as zara kareeb se Jo pal mile haseena se...AAj...they r moving too close...lost in the song...she can hear his heart be beats...she can feel his breath on her she is lost in a trance music and him...both lose touch of time lost in their passion...the music stops and they find each other so close...nose to nose..breath to breath...their lips are almost almost touching...they r so lost and almost to kiss when a chameleons passes over manyata legs and she screams with fright...their trance is broken and uv is laughing badly seeing her...manyata ..she is embarrassed thinking what she almost did...what it would feel if she had kissed him...what would have happened...she frets and says I am tired.. Let. Me rest a. While...uday has quite difficulty handling him..omg they were about yo kiss...do manyata feels for me...def. Howmuch ever she denies...she surely is attracted to me...damn that chameleons...but I nerd to make her comfy first...so let's go sit and relax...come here and just hear and fee l the music. They both sit on the grass

Very nice...haila uday manyata ko wahan kya karne le gaya?update soon.

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Very nice...haila uday manyata ko wahan kya karne le gaya?update soon.

Run ur gutter mind... 😉

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Run ur gutter mind... 😉

lolll...aur kitna gutter me dlungi me apna mind...ok mene soch liya hai ab kya ho sakta hai...