hotmaanveer ss-UPDATEs pg 44, 45, 46 aug 9 - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
comment 4 uday's p.o.v

as i hve already commented
bt den also
i will comment nw it detail

well
it was nt uday's first kiss😉
bt reading d update i culd imagine his feelings
anyone culd hve lost control

and dis as manyata the girl whom he loved like hell
the girl wid whom he wanted 2 be forever n ever
the only girl who made his heart beat faster❤️❤️
as if its running a race😆😆 🤣 lolz

i culd help bt imagine each and every thing
as if it was happening wid me...☺️
or infront of my eyes...😃

i actually read it wice or thrice or more than dat...
till knw...😳😊

loved it
awesum
amazing
hot...








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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read ur SS in one go
And its awesome 👏 👏 👏
U did a gr8 job👍🏼
Lyk literally each and every expressiona and feeling ws expressed perfectly ⭐️
Don't even think of stopping this pura complete krna got it! 😆
Hat off to u as in u r typing from ur phn and it a tiring job *mai tumhara dard samajh skti hoon di mera bhi yhi haal hai*🤣
OMG!!! too much drama in one damn day gosh dat ws electrifying manveer kiss 😳 *Manveer dreamland*
their feeling ab kon kamina inke beech aa rha hai😡 I mean this is so not done araam se sb kuch ho jata phir koi aata toh zyada better tha 😆 Koi nhi hota hai 😃 I wish i could witness such hot episodes on TV bt imagine hi krna shi hai vrna BCC vle 11:30 k baad show krte A grade milta🤣 bt ur SS has taken me to the manveer dreamland
Thanxx fr this SS di
And shukr hai ki maine ye SS khtm hone k baad nhi padhi😆 Vrna mai hr jagah late phuchti hoon🤣
And plz pm me😊 Whenever u update nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg awesome update
Manveer scene was great
Wow u described their feelings really nicley
Really curious to knw what happened
Please update as soon as possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx so much dear...glad u liked it and yeah it better be our imagination...yupp dear I will pm u

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

<font size="4">Just read ur SS in one go
And its awesome 👏 👏 👏
U did a gr8 job👍🏼
Lyk literally each and every expressiona and feeling ws expressed perfectly ⭐️
Don't even think of stopping this pura complete krna got it! 😆
Hat off to u as in u r typing from ur phn and it a tiring job *mai tumhara dard samajh skti hoon di mera bhi yhi haal hai*🤣
OMG!!! too much drama in one damn day gosh dat ws electrifying manveer kiss 😳 *Manveer dreamland*
their feeling ab kon kamina inke beech aa rha hai😡 I mean this is so not done araam se sb kuch ho jata phir koi aata toh zyada better tha 😆 Koi nhi hota hai 😃 I wish i could witness such hot episodes on TV bt imagine hi krna shi hai vrna BCC vle 11:30 k baad show krte A grade milta🤣 bt ur SS has taken me to the manveer dreamland
Thanxx fr this SS di
And shukr hai ki maine ye SS khtm hone k baad nhi padhi😆 Vrna mai hr jagah late phuchti hoon🤣
And plz pm me😊 Whenever u update nxt
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
di wer's d update????😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi...sorry for late comment
awsomeee...mind blowing update
plzzz...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

<font color="#ff0000">di wer's d update????😭😭</font>


I told u na kids exams r from 8 Jan...so will update between 14. To 18 Jan surly...till then wait for ur surprise...
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Posted: 12 years ago
TIME FOR A LONG COMMENT...
SORRY FOR THE DELAY...


This was magic
yeah... kissing uday is not such a normal thing... he is UDAY...

the two lost desperate souls so that they glue together for ever...
hehehee... fevicol ka jod...

amazing is that no one wants to backout...funny they both r fighting again but completely on a different level...seems it's a fight for whose enjoying more...whose more eatable...whose the weak one to backout first ...
its seriously a fight... i luvd the part. who is more eatable... hehehe canibals kahi ke

it's as if their life is depended on this kiss only...this is no more a kiss...its no more a smooch...its no more a liplock...it's a mark that both have made on each others soul...
wooow... this part was gr8... no doubt. leaving a mark on each others soul... i say its renewal, rebirth of manveer. each of them. manyata and uday.

single button left on his royal shirt
this made me laugh

.both lost their balance and fell inside the pool...bhammm..
hey.. do both know swimming??
no doubt uday knows but manyata??
she will die na...
update fast..
bring her out of water dear...
hehehehe
jokes upart... this was very beautiful update dipicting every possible and true feeling... il uvd it
muah...
and regarding hotness...
i had to switch on the ac..
omg.. it was so hot here int he room.
PERFECT...
and yeah... i hav updated the complete chap of my ss aaoge jab tum saajna. unres your comment fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx sanju for such wonderful coments...icwas waiting...and yeah...the mark on soul was a gr8 line coz this mark is gonna change both of them...it's gonna make them realize..as for the royal shirt well m was un junglee billi mode...she was eyeing his hot sexy chest from a long time...hehehe...I will update soon and unrest my coment too...but since my kids exams r on I will be late on co coments...ok so will do when I will be free...


Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

<font color="#ff00ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">TIME FOR A LONG COMMENT...
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<font color="#ff00ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">SORRY FOR THE DELAY...</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">This was magic</font>
<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">yeah... kissing uday is not such a normal thing... he is UDAY...</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">the two lost desperate souls so that they glue together for ever...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hehehee... fevicol ka jod...</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">amazing is that no one wants to backout...funny they both r fighting again but completely on a different level...seems it's a fight for whose enjoying more...whose more eatable...whose the weak one to backout first ...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">its seriously a fight... i luvd the part. who is more eatable... hehehe canibals kahi ke</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">it's as if their life is depended on this kiss only...this is no more a kiss...its no more a smooch...its no more a liplock...it's a mark that both have made on each others soul...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">wooow... this part was gr8... no doubt. leaving a mark on each others soul... i say its renewal, rebirth of manveer. each of them. manyata and uday.</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">single button left on his royal shirt</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">this made me laugh</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">.both lost their balance and fell inside the pool...bhammm..</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hey.. do both know swimming??</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">no doubt uday knows but manyata??</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">she will die na...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">update fast..</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">bring her out of water dear...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hehehehe</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">jokes upart... this was very beautiful update dipicting every possible and true feeling... il uvd it</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">muah...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and regarding hotness...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i had to switch on the ac..</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">omg.. it was so hot here int he room.</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">PERFECT...</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and yeah... i hav updated the complete chap of my ss aaoge jab tum saajna. unres your comment fast...</font>

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