Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter - Page 66

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

yayayayayaya party time i am early this time🥳

k coming to the update it was mind blowing👏

i must say gargi u are one the very very talented writers we have on this forum⭐️⭐️

the things i loved the most was uday aka shaurya

i accepted a typical jungle scene where uday will fight and the villains will die and manyata will tear her cloth and bandage uday on his hands and then eye locks and wind blowing and then rain then a old couple helping them out

but u changed it and it was for the better

u made the scene very very real like the under garments thing was fab 👏👏

now now now one small query

manyata knows shaurya as udayveer and when she yelled at him i thought she remembered something but then that thing was not further discussed see in this line

"You are a shameless and disgusting person Shaurya Pratap Singh..." she stands up and walks swiftly and moves ahead of him.

manyata calls him shuarya but is it not supposed to be udayveer

i was lost there

but everything else was mindblowing awesome

wonderful

fabolous

kepp up the great job

u should publish a book😃

thanks sfor the lovely updates and pm

love u gargi

love ur writing

my favorite part in this whole update was

"Nahi Basanti, aj hum tumhari ek nahi sunege. Hum aur larko ko maut ke ghaat nahi utaar sakte samjhi...Inhe pata hona chahiye ki agar inhone tumhare saath physical relation banaya to inko HIV ko jayega!!..Are please have mercy on people..You are HIV positive. Aur kitne masoomo ko aise hi thagogi..Kiutno ki life ke saath khelogi tum...Roz raaste mei khari rehti ho...Only with a hope to get one bakra. Just because 1 guy had betrayed you and made you HIV positive, you want to take revenge on entire manhood!!...What kind of logic is this...I won't let you do this. Today these guys didn't take you in their car, just like every guy does, so you made them take your things, so that you can follow them and have an excuse that you came for your bag. So that after this you can seduce everyone here and give your disease to all these innocent guys!!..."

i mean u have great brains gargi

u thought of such a epic speech

i am running out of words to praise u

Originally posted by: ...navina...

res😊

edited:

Awesome chapter Gargi. WOW!!! Too good.

I loved Manyata consistent explosions on Uday and how calmly he handles her. Uday sitting with the cigarrette in his hand ... 😳😳😳!!! KYA SCENE HAIN BOSS 😎.

I expected Manyata to get a lift with those guys & then they'd start hitting on her ! ... but U CHANGED IT😲 ... YOUR WAY WAS A WHOLE LOT BETTER😉!!! Of-course Uday giving that speech about Basanti wanting to spread the H-I-virus ... was the highlight of this update for me👏. He saved her without getting his hands dirty!!! WHAT A BRAIN THE GUY HAS !!!( or should I say : WHAT A BRAIN OUR GARGI HAS!!!!)

Please continue soon Dear,

I am in awe of your writing😳.

Thanks for the PM😊.

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

You know what gargi whenevr i am sad or a little Down
You always cheer me up ifc indirectly lol
Thanxx for updating i needed a break love ya baby
Love ya babe soo sooo much

RES btw

Originally posted by: andy.a

Awsome update dear
loved it to the core
manyata as a bossy princess and uday totally ignoring her
when she was talking rather scolding uday that rouges took her clothes and laggage and she goes screaming behind them was lovely
the scene at the bar was super
manyata having hiv+ and uday requesting her to spare the lives of those boys and not take revenge on the whole mankind just because she was infected was super and the best comic scene i ever read
actually i thought our king would fight with those guys to save his princess good name and beat them into pulp and then manyata would be impressed and their fight would end
but u took that part in a totally different manner loved it
but that update is not enough do continue very soon please :-)