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Posted: 12 years ago
res😊
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Awesome chapter Gargi. WOW!!! Too good.
I loved Manyata consistent explosions on Uday and how calmly he handles her. Uday sitting with the cigarrette in his hand ... 😳😳😳!!! KYA SCENE HAIN BOSS 😎.
I expected Manyata to get a lift with those guys & then they'd start hitting on her ! ... but U CHANGED IT😲 ... YOUR WAY WAS A WHOLE LOT BETTER😉!!! Of-course Uday giving that speech about Basanti wanting to spread the H-I-virus ... was the highlight of this update for me👏. He saved her without getting his hands dirty!!! WHAT A BRAIN THE GUY HAS !!!( or should I say : WHAT A BRAIN OUR GARGI HAS!!!!)
Please continue soon Dear,
I am in awe of your writing😳.
Thanks for the PM😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

short ..
yup it was but it was hilarious ...
"Nahi Basanti, aj hum tumhari ek nahi sunege. Hum aur larko ko maut ke ghaat nahi utaar sakte samjhi...Inhe pata hona chahiye ki agar inhone tumhare saath physical relation banaya to inko HIV ko jayega!!..Are please have mercy on people..You are HIV positive. Aur kitne masoomo ko aise hi thagogi..Kiutno ki life ke saath khelogi tum...Roz raaste mei khari rehti ho...Only with a hope to get one bakra. Just because 1 guy had betrayed you and made you HIV positive, you want to take revenge on entire manhood!!...What kind of logic is this...I won't let you do this. Today these guys didn't take you in their car, just like every guy does, so you made them take your things, so that you can follow them and have an excuse that you came for your bag. So that after this you can seduce everyone here and give your disease to all these innocent guys!!..." Manyata was completely dumbfounded and the guys were hell scared. They immediately caught their ears, some held her feet to ask forgiveness and ran out of the bar, literally running for their lives...



u have such good imagination ...il love wid this story thanx a lot fr updating



Thanks Vrinda...🤗..glad that you liked it😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updates my comment on page 93😊
Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm gargiii
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ohhh tereee HIV possitive
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thanks huma..Ya this suddenly came to my mind!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi



Thanks Vrinda...🤗..glad that you liked it😆




liked it ...?
i loved it frm the core of my heart
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Posted: 12 years ago
You know what gargi whenevr i am sad or a little Down
You always cheer me up ifc indirectly lol
Thanxx for updating i needed a break love ya baby
Love ya babe soo sooo much

RES btw
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update dear
loved it to the core
manyata as a bossy princess and uday totally ignoring her
when she was talking rather scolding uday that rouges took her clothes and laggage and she goes screaming behind them was lovely
the scene at the bar was super
manyata having hiv+ and uday requesting her to spare the lives of those boys and not take revenge on the whole mankind just because she was infected was super and the best comic scene i ever read
actually i thought our king would fight with those guys to save his princess good name and beat them into pulp and then manyata would be impressed and their fight would end
but u took that part in a totally different manner loved it
but that update is not enough do continue very soon please :-)
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow just loved the way he saved her lol very smart Udayveer!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahahaha awesum update loved it///
thnks for pm and do pm me wen u update nxt
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